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I have to tell you all about something great. Where did you go? There is all this fire inside me, I want to tell you where it's from.
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e.e. cummings brings paper to life. The poem you have there is one of my favorites. Did you ever see the one that starts "because you take you life in stride"? That one is really good too, he says so much in such a little space. I swear, if you read it, the poem will burn itself into your eyes.
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working on that poem for you, trying to make it my best yet
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what do you mean are your poems crap? ah! dear you have talent. edit to tighten them up but only ones being fooled are those not reading
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i went through my poems earlier this morning and found some that you were the inspiration behind. i think i am going to post the best of them soon
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im looking forward to reading about this girl that sees a face in the rivers rippling waters. maybe i'll send some of my watery friends to keep you company and tell you fantastic tales of the sea.
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dropped by to leave you some lilacs on your doorstep.
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I could not believe that I did not have you on my favorites list...so I have a corrected that error, Kat. I will be back soon to read and catch up. You were the first person (I think) to welcome me to AP and to comment on one of my poems when I first joined. Time to catch up with an old friend. Hope all is well with you.
Maddie
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hey beautiful. sorry your haveing a rough go of it right now. still love ya though. i'll call you tomorrow when you get home from work.
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under the featured poem section on the right hand side, is a link for get more reads. that is where you want to go to feature your poems.
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hey hey beautiful. how is your weekend treating you? i'll be calling you soon.
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you will make it out here to the pacific or i'll make it to the mountains of colorado.
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i hope to return the favor soon. but right now, i have a tight schedule.
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soon i think this great artist will find an island. a place where her muse awaits and she can spend the days and nights writing and looking out onto the sea and dreaming all that she dreams
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Hey its dennis. i've tried emailing you. email me at dennisherrera00@gmail.com Edited on Mar 28, 9:53 because ''.
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hey kat didnt know if you where still around thought i would pop in and say hi
~liz~
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GOT YOUR LETTER!!! That rocked! Will write you back soon!! FRIENNNNND!!
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oh where oh where has my poet friend gone? write me some poems girl! miss ya! hope life is treating you well.
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life is going too slow. what am i waiting for to happen and knock me onto my feet that are planted firmly in the dirt? and how come it isn't coming faster?
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haha. i wrote it. read it soon,i don't think it will be up for long. it's pretty gross to think about. GAG!
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where are you friend?! miss talkin to ya!
leianne00
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Wow! What a beautiful author's page!
Thanks again for reading me, and the visit!
I appreciate ya, and I hope to see ya around here more!
Much love always!
-Timothy 
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Hey! It's MEEEE!! My bday is June 4th! Doing the summer class thing. Hope to make it out to CO. this summer for some rafting. Can't wait. I need to save some money! Blah!
Talk to you soon!
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so your in love eh? such sweet beauty that is.. maybe i'll write a poem about it... this is the first time ive been on in days as i have no computer now... ill snail mail you soon
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I'm just plain tired of only being able to kiss ass. Any post that doesn't boost the ego of some shitty poet gets me another letter from the mods. I should be able to say freely that I don't like a poem and if the author argues with me I should be able to give him or her the finger ,,l, or even go so far as to say "HEY ASSHOLE . . . I'm not wrong, I really don't like your poem because its shit and no amount of bitching is going to change my mind." But obviously I can't do that. I seem to be wasting my time in an imitated utopia, nobody can say anything bad and every poet on this site must be great - just look at the comments about them. What was great when I joined this site a few years ago was that there were some brutally honest people here that would tell me like it was. Now that most of them have left or been booted because some whiny bitch couldn't take it that their poems weren't poems and weren't any good, the site lacks that edge to curb me from becoming another one of these shitty poets (I never sought that kind of freedom, I'm too mature for that). Anyway, that is my main reason for leaving and even with relaxed restrictions on swearing I say big whoop. Swearing is great and all but I'd like to say things besides "fuckin awesome" and "holy shit that's great". I want to be able to say and hear things like "Your metaphors are shitty and your syntax was mixed by a retard with his head up his ass" 'cause if it's the truth, it's the truth. Poets should thank harsh critics for not bullshitting them and once in awhile cuss back if they're out of line. The site mods should just laugh at most but rules are rules and they have to warn me about my unruly behavior. I'm getting redundant and I'm tired of always biching about the same thing. Bye.
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... and her name was beautiful heaven in that raging sun on cold summer nights down in the valley
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Strange that I can't say hi twice but I tried
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Thanks for the comment on My Corbitt, WHO? poem. It was sweet. He's a jerk. Why must I continue to torture myself over such a perfect asshole? I'm a masochist (sp?) or something?
BLah!
leianne00
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hey there. I sent a letter awhile ago and it should have gotten to you by now. I am not sure what it said but I can make you a new one. I'll log off and do it now.
ps. I like this flower you have on the page.
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ah! the time she flew by so fast under the blazing sun one boy one girl walked on water to an island deep and far into the misty blue seas... dancing that last dance of a waltz as the big band plays on and on swinging to the stars with a smile of gods in their abodes drinking wine from some humans tears of sorrow dressed all in white to-day one boy one girl looked skybound to serenly floating clouds and asked... do you remember??? Edited on Jan 28, 3:12 p.m. because 'too many letters'.
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Hello katilia
Did you have a happy christmas?? I have written you a letter and I am mailing it out tomorrow.
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i hope you had a wonderful holiday and your new years is kickass  ... not sure where ill be or what im doing but i will be out there somewhere under the bright lights
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Happy Holidays...
Hugs...Eddy
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im working on a new poem for you
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Awww that is soooo sweet. It means so much to me that you took the time to read a poem of mine and comment on it. I also appreciate the applause very much. Once again, thank you 
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Ojeda on November 9, 2004
you can call me again if you want 6-10 303-757-4176
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Hey look! Our names are almost the same  . Hehe!
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hey hooker give me a call if you want to. I'm at my mom's house right now becfause my grandma may die soon so I'm gettin fucked up or call me at my place on the weekdays between 7-and 10pm because I don't want my fat girl trippen she's already trippen about katie or you can e-mail me at ojeda113397@ yahoo.com. tony tell's me your also trippen on brian again, well get over it you love him remember.....anyways get back to me love charlie ....oh yeah I'm drunk but my mom's number is 274-2326 and I'm here all night or at the hospital on 10-22 or call my place at 303-757-4176 (weekday's 7-10pm) I'll talk to you latter. take care. tell your mom i said hi and that I saw her the other day and she's still looking good. bye
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Hello stranger 
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this is an old friend of yours.. i have just written you a letter and mailed it out this evening... been thinking of you and really missing you... you'll see who i am when the letter gets to you or you can simply ask me
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Hey Katilina. Thanks for the comment. Yeah, it came right out of the blue on Sunday afternoon. After not calling me all weekend, or answering my calls, he dumped me over the phone. From Searcy, AR. He moved to go to grad school 3 WHOLE hours away and said he couldn't do the long distance thing. Lame-0!! I really fucking loved him and I want him back but I think that this is really for the best. I just don't want it to be.
Sorry to hear about you and your man. I know you had been together for a while. Talk to you soon. Take care.
love leianne00
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Hey, hey! Long time no talk. I'm glad to see you're still around
I have been in and out of luck. I had two jobs for a minute. Finally I have come to the east side of the state and found decent work  yay. A week after I started my new job my car felt pitty for my sleep deprived body and decided to break. Now down to one job and living on the kindness of strangers I have time but not the means to fully enjoy my life. My friend Bill was kind enough to let me use one of his cars to get to work and my friend Tonya has her husband working on my car for an extremely fair price. I went to jail a few weeks ago, this was before I started my second job, for being too poor to pay all of my child support. I don't know how they expected me to dish out a hundred dollars a week while working a shitty job in fast food but they did. Thanks to an amazing woman (mom) I made bail and a new debt. I have met a few women out here but they seem to suffer from imaginations which grow larger than reality. One of them, as an example, decided that after I had met her and talked for a couple hours that I was trying to date her. Seems harmless enough, but I didn't really have that in mind yet 'cause I didn't know her. We talked on the phone a few times and she started telling me what I should and shouldn't do and how I should live my life. I kinda pissed her off when I said that she is always having a bad day and I am usually having a good day so I would keep living the way I am living and if it meant I couldn't date her then it wasn't a loss because she was a stranger. Needless to say, she hasn't called since  Oh, there is a lot more that I have left out but this is getting long and I'm trying to keep it short. Write me back and tell me how you've been doing. I'll IM you my address if you want to practice penmanship.
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