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My word, have I found someone on this site who can actually write? I'm going to have to have a look through a few more of your poems...
Better than anything else I've ever seen on here. Lucid, intelligent, thought-provoking. There's not too many people in here whose work deserves those adjectives...
Nice author page, I like the sensitive author lyrics, but you did let yourself down by putting Coelho down as an influence.
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hey M, i nominated "Finding 8:37" for the front page. i loved it. it's a work of art. kudos.
~j
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Malabu : I am curious on January 27, 2007
as to why you put me on your fave list? I really only have one name on here.....Malabu...If you read any of my writings and feel im worthy of your list...then I would feel honored....anyway thanks....if I find some words worthy of your contest I will enter them....repectively....
Malabu
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have to say I liked the quote and lyric on your page!! Really good! Now moving on to read your poems...
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you seem cool.
you are random.
you make no sense.
it is awesome.
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bw43 : wow on January 7, 2007
you have not posted in a very long time
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Your profile is interesting.. KAY 
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Iohagh : I added you as a favorite because... on November 20, 2006
Dear JustBe
I added you as a favorite because my big sister, who once was Zayra Yves, now is Oshun yemaya, and she has you on her favorites. One way I grow is I follow my big sister around silently and learn from the feet of a master poet. So I hope you don't mind me poking aroung your poems. Smoosh my darling before I whoosh. Janet
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I absolutely love your page, it's very..... interesting.
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Hello there.
I must say, it has been quite a while since I've spoken to you. What have you been up to? Anything worth talking about?  There must have been something since it has been quite a few months since we decided to touch base.
At any rate, I hope to hear from you. Hope you're doing well.
†Nicole♥
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I love your sense of humor. Nice page.
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Hey Morgan, thinking of you 
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hmmmmm stinky feet huh .... well that poem was in my contest actually and i think they decided to enter a different contest. yes it is a good one .... not my personal fav style but great nonetheless
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P.S. Find another playground (Winklings). You is wearing me out!  lalala
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Well hunny child, U is rackin' in them trophies left and right! Yikes!!!!!!! -B♥lle
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Shhhhhhhhh! Don't speak so loud! These poems watch each other's backs, and there is not one good sense of humor among the lot of them! I cannot be held responsible for their actions if one or more of them feels compelled to defend a comrade. Be forewarned: Far more exotic beasties dwell in the bunker beneath the JustBe compound.
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P.S. Out of the two poems I still liked your love poem better. hahahaha -B
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stopping in to say hello....long time no critque lol.
hope all is well in your world,
~j
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Hey how are you?  Send a gmail soon...I think we need to catch on heart and soul...the story hour.
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never noticed it before, but i disagree with your therapist.
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ew... figures.. there are always problems that evovle... especially when they are far from being needed >.<
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Meh. Computer ate it. Had to buy new hard disk, have spent last 2 days making it agree with Linux ...which is fundamentally superior to Windows in every way.
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Heh.. no worries... we all have those hectic, crazy times in our lives. How's your paper and all that coming along?
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Ive not been on myself much. Move house next week to a temporary location and our furniture is going into storage so am mid manic packing at the moment.
=)
Lisa.
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Sorry to keep you on the line. Life is nuts. I am still breathing. Good enough for me.
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Thank you for your comment on my page... although don't be in awe of the number of poems it holds. Most of them, in my opinion, should be deleted. A tumble of words that hold countless painful memories in them. A time gone by that (hopefully) I wont ever live through again. Theres a few poems on my page that I like, some that I am even proud of, but I do not profess to be a poet. I just play with words and sometimes, very rarely, I get it right.
I think a talent like yours is much more something to be proud of.
You say that you are known for your honest critiquing. Well there was a time a while ago, that I was known for just that on here. I cant read a poem that I dont like and critique it with rose coloured glasses, I always have to say in a round about way what I am really feeling about it. Although, I probably have more tact these days, but that comes with age.
I found myself on here again the other day and thought I may as well read a few poems and see how I felt. Its awakened the need to write in me again, although, at the moment the words are blanks... followed by more blanks, and I cant break the blockage.
Maybe one day I will get there again.
Thanks for popping by.
Lisa. Edited on Jul 24, 2:26 p.m. because ''.
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she had to jump on your page? yikes...poor page gettin all jumped on and stuff. Well, i was just kiddin right there but i think u hilarious and no ur not a raving egomaniac. oh, and if you don't like ur silver and bronze trophies u can give them to me
Madison
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oi
Had to jump on your page and say 'ello since I haven't heard from ya in a couple days. Hope you're doing well... did you find a use for that lovely brown sash yet?
Take care dear.
†Nicole♥
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That "Sensitive Artist" thing is pretty funny
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...you know, 'cause "raving" just has such a ferile Rrrrraaarrrrrrrrr to it. And I like that.
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We've all got to stay sane somehow.  Sometimes insanity is the best means to that end. I left out "raving." What I meant to ask you was whether I seem like a raving egomaniac. You've already said no to the noun, but I'm attached to my adjective, and I've not heard the final word on it. Without the egomania, can I still be raving?
Thanks for reading my poem.
~Morgan
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You could be considered and egomaniac... But I don't think of you that way... I think of you as that funny guy... with the randomness. =)
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OK, so I do win gold trophies ...but not nearly as many as I should be winning. I mean seriously! I'm the physicist son of a psychiatrist and a nurse/social worker. That fact alone is enough to make me cringe each time I notice there aren't at least 50 yellow, pixelated cups on my page at this point. Throw in the fact that I grew up in Iowa, and ...I mean it's just inexplicable that ...I should be a GOD by now! Kevin should want to change his screen name to "Morgan." I'm even a "Gold" member, for crying out loud. Shit, and look at all of my poems! I run out of digits when I try to count them all.
There has been quite a rash of "You must really be that cartoon character" comments on my page lately, and all by people I don't know. I guess I do enjoy the attention. Yeah, I'm just basking in it. Look at that: If you go back and count the number of "i"s in this little message, you'll have to agree that I (another one!) must be an egomaniac. What do you think? Do you think I'm an egomaniac?
Please write back soon.
~Morgan Edited on Jul 11, 9:43 p.m. because 'My messages have to be perfect.'.
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I never win gold trophies. My therapist says it's because I'm a bad person.
^that's so mean.
I love the randomness on your page.
But you lie! you have gold trophies!!!
haha
talk to you soon, (I hope)
-x-
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I must say, you really sound like an interesting individual. I'm quite glad I decided to randomly click on your name. Oddly enough, your sense of humor and outgoing personality makes me think of my music teacher I used to have in high school..So eccentric yet full of surprise. Hmm...Yes, you seem like a very funny person. At any rate, I figured it would be nice to leave you a lovely comment on your page instead of acting like the "stalker" type and just watching you from afar (without allowing myself to be known). You seem like a great person..perhaps, in time, I'll be able to get to know you a little better.
nods
Toodles.
†Nicole♥
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Think funny, yes. Not so much write funny of late, though, and I hope I don't look funny. That was funny. Laugh. I hope I am interesting. I do enjoy the laughing thing. Thanks for your positive attitude. Life is rough right now, which you'll understand if you read the column at the top of my page. I'll shut up now, and get back to writing my ()& %$^^%^?! paper. Namaste, Kumbaya, and Supercalafragilisticexpialadocious. I am a flexible hippy with a special umbrella and a spoonfull of sugar. Also lots of socks.
~Morgan
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haha.. you sound interesting, Morgan  ... your author page had me laughing hard... love you for the same!!  ~parul 
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This is sick ima lovin it ya know
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Just stopped by to wish you well... 
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Hey, Morgan! I've been missing you. Hope you're a doin' something else that's fun or productive or both or whatever you want it to be. Toni
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Wow!! "Sensitive Arstist" is an awesome poem. i think everyone who is honest has had a moment like this where no one got your poems and your patience as an artist finally led you to the conclusion that you were from another planet far more superior than the one you're on now or else they'd understand the flippin poem!!
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random hugs for the bestest poet ever. 
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ohhh sirs. 
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Aha, another cummings fan. I was begining to think I was the last one. I am also half of a husband/wife poet duo. Its good fun, isn't it?
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