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MidniteRae on March 22, 2007

hey my ap daughter, long time no talk. how are you doing? I just wanted to check up on you.

love your ap mom
chantel medeiros on November 5, 2006

LMFAO " I'm being stalked by psycho killers and I hide in the shower." Piper, Charmed
I REMEMEBR THAT EPISODE!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA
--CHANTEL
Fly Agaric on November 2, 2006

"We are not equally drawn to each other because we are equally smart, kind or beautiful, but because we are equally flawed. That's what makes the human relationship unique. It is between two people who share similar scars"

hey, where did you get this quote from?? Ive seen it before but cant remember where. It would bve great if you could tell me. Thanks, Cat
Sew in Dark Matter on October 16, 2006

i wanted to thank you for choosing my piece. you are a talented writer yourself so i really means alot. sorry i didn't reply sooner i just haven't been on recently and i certainly didn't think i was gonna win a contest. anyhow, thanks.
Anjole-Of-The-Artz on October 14, 2006

taha yea sorry about that it was like 2 am and I was really tired. Hard to think pfft. Thank you for your comment and I appreciate everything you have to say <3 Good luck with your entries and I'll be sure to fix the second one. *God Bless, With Love, Jo*
capricornpoet on September 16, 2006

I happened upon a critique where you critisized someone for copying your work, so then I followed and commented on one of your poems to be fair to both...she is only eleven, I know its still not right , I gave her suggestions ...be well and
keep up the good work ..many smiles down the road for you.
solarjinx on September 14, 2006

Whoa, are you MY girl?? How crazy is that! I saw the name "Jinxgirl" when you left a comment on one of the poems in my contest and I thought I'd stop in and check you out, you know, since you're my girl and all. LoL.
golden-angel13 on August 30, 2006

Love your page, laughed myself silly at your quotes! Very amusing, thanks for the cheerup!
Laura xxx
MidniteRae on July 25, 2006

do you have a myspace or a livejournal?
MidniteRae on July 25, 2006

please don't hurt yourself. I've had my ups and downs and things seems to be getting worse then they will get better for a split second then go back down. I'm always here if you need to talk. If you want, if you have texting, go ahead and text me when you feel like hurting yourself.
Jinxgirl on July 23, 2006

actually not so good. i'm going through hard times personally... i have started hurting myself. how have you been, I know you were feeling bad, are you doing better?
MidniteRae on July 19, 2006

hey ap daughter. how have you been. just thought that i would check up on you
dark desire on July 8, 2006

hey you didn't comment on my poem in your contest for teens. it was call teenage waste-land.
TaylorLOVESyou on July 1, 2006

hey, well even though that poem isn't true i'm glad that you're so caring. =D
Ladie Lee on May 31, 2006

Alex, which is ironic since her name is Alex and she insists upon being called that NOT her full name.
Ladie Lee on May 29, 2006

I'd been following your story daughters of none and was really enjoying it,I thought the characters were amazingly well written and believable, one inparticular was eeirly like my sister, same name too. I was wondering if you're you going to continue writing on it? The last part was quite a cliff hanger and it's driving me crazy not knowing what's going to happen next.
pine-needles on April 8, 2006

i luved ur story "fostering hope." it blew me away. i couldnt stop reading until i got through the whole thing... even though i desperately need to be doing my homework...

u lay out the situation so well and it all fits together amazingly... u know just when 2 end the chapter to leave us hanging and hungry 4 more. also, the dialogue is usually great, and u make us care about the characters and what happens to them.

it rings so true, how there's no quick fix and how she loves them but is still mad and never sure if they're really making a difference, if there doing the right thing, saying the right thing, just have to jump in in hope their doing it right, as cadence (awesome name btw) points out a lot more eloquently.

it does seem slightly categoric, uve got the drugged, "messed up,"disturbed kid and the anorexic and the weird, disturbed little kid. still, u make it work pretty well, with details, like how she goes to draw on the coffee table...

it seemed like there was a lot going on, constant intense drama, it seemed just a little much that it slightly stretched credence. i know uve got to fit it all into one day or thered be no end 2 it... but just thought id mention it.

also, the dialogue with "al" (sorry i cant remember how 2 spell her full name) didnt always scan the best, i dont know, shes the most complicated character 2 develop and i think ur story sputters just a bit there.

my only suggestion really would be that im not sure u need the introduction fully. it is nice to introduce the characters a little and their background so we know what 2 expect, and it establishes her open, friendly, casual tone... but to fling all that exposition at once... i dont know. mostly its the begginning with the "its probably apparent..." and "as you can tells..." that id take another look at.

still, this was just an AMAZING piece. i am amazed that u could right this, which rings so true and is so touching. wow. and i see uve written a lot of others too... (and managed 2 finish them 2, which is what i cant seem 2 do ) u write wonderfully!!! keep it up!!!

(now back 2 the cuban missile crisis)

p.s. sorry 2 slap this down here... the new storywrite... (sigh)
A-Jamais-Le-Votre on March 14, 2006

Thank you for the critiques (<- or however you spell that word there) on my story 'Sarah'.
Duchess Dizufish on February 16, 2006

I was reading a poem just a few minutes ago, and saw that it was part of a contest. I clicked on the contest (one of your "write a story based on this line" contests) and started to think about what to write. Then I noticed that the contest was closed.
Would you please have another contest soon, like that one?
They're my favorite.
=D
-Deni
theharper08 on February 10, 2006

thanx 4 the comment, it was a in interesting contest and i enjoyed writing for it

LOve D x x
queenie on January 12, 2006

thank you so very much for giving me the honor of the bronx in your contest.it was a fun effort.
yuu kiri on January 12, 2006

I'm loving the New Years Resolutions for Celebrities; THOSE are classic. I'm going to read the Evie - Voice of a 13 Year Old; it looks good! So anyway, I have the 4th chapter up, and if you're still interested in it, have a read. Sorry it took so long!!!
Sandygram on December 30, 2005

HAPPY NEW YEAR GRAMMAwww.things-to-say.com/holiday-greetings/ny-christian.htm
pattyann4500 on December 28, 2005

jinxie girl, I have followed your contests and entered some. You have wonderful ones, and I hope I can entice you to enter mine. I decided that it was finally time for me to hold a short story contest. allpoetry.com/Contest/1719910 I do hope to have an entry from you. Hugs, Patricia
Sandygram on December 19, 2005

Happy Holidays holidays.blastcomm.com/holidays03.html
yuu kiri on December 17, 2005

Thanks a lot for reading my chapters! I REALLY appreciate it and you leaving comments. It keeps me going. Thanks again!
dp robertson on December 16, 2005

thank you for all your comments this year, they are always appreciated- I am looking forward to reading more of your words next year. I wish you the happiest Christmas and all the best for 2006

David

hope santa fills your stocking with a full sack
wolfstein on December 13, 2005

About your contest, does it HAVE to be a story? Because I have a song that I think would go good with it.
Edited on Dec 13, 8:31 p.m. because ''.
tears.of.silence on November 27, 2005

Hi sis. Sorry I haven't stopped by more often, thought I'd do that right now and hugs y > < I hope all is well and if you ever need me, let me know Kahy
DuchessAura of Brie on November 10, 2005

i love ur quotes! ive heard them from random things i wached like the simpsons and charmed. they're really funny.
Lia<3
Catressa on September 12, 2005

Omg I am so digging your quotes first you have a Dory one I loved Finding Nemo lol and then Heather I adored that movie lol Great Taste you!
Frogzter on September 8, 2005

Great page! I am alos originally from South Carolina. (Fort Mill) but the rest of my family lives in York. I went to college in Rock Hill (Winthrop) and Baptist College at Charleston. I now live in Pensacola Fl. Nice to meet a fellow Carolinian. I'll be reading your poems. Have a great day! Frog~
unsexypenguin on August 21, 2005

There's a contest called Reel Emotion allpoetry.com/Contest/1465153 it's a contest about writing poems inspired by movies and prewrites are allowed. I know that I shouldn't be promoting someone's contest, but I was thinking since you have so many beautiful poems about movies that you'd wanna enter one of them in the contest. If you do cool, if you don't cool, I just thought I'd let you know.

-Miranda
unsexypenguin on July 28, 2005

I know that you don't need any help with your poetry, but if you're gonna keep writing poems about people I found an awesome form that you could try. It's just something different.

Quinzaine

The English word quinzaine come from the French word qunize, meaning fifteen. A quinzaine is
an unrhymed verse of fifteen syllables.

These syllables are distributed among three lines so that there are seven syllables in the first line,
five in the second line and three in the third line (7/5/3). The first line makes a statement. The next
two lines ask a question relating to that statement.

Example:
I'm a very strong woman
Are you a woman?
Are you strong?

It's just an idea, if you don't like the idea then you can delete this entry, but I've just learned a bunch of new forms thanks to a contest and I'm in a sharing mood. I thought that your talent would work well with a quinzaine. Have a great day!

-Miranda
NerodicNetta on July 21, 2005

Thanks for the tip on 'The Walk She Remembered', you can use it anytime if you like. I don't think I will finish it though because I'm already working on my novel called The Medallion, and I don't think I could finish it. Maybe you could finish it for me. If you don't want to, that's fine.
theoric1 on July 18, 2005

Jinx, Call me whenever you get this cause i would like to talk to you. Oh by the way yeah this is Josh.
Regicide on July 10, 2005

Memento is the coolest movie on earth, guy pearce is so hot in that movie. Have you seen Till Human Voices Wake Us? Pearce and Helena Bonham-Carter - seriously weird movie, i liked it.
Your Holy Cats quote made me think about one of my favs out of the bandits, the guy wakes up and says, "Beavers and ducks!" what's his name again, dammit, angelina Jolie's ex ... ... I'll remember someday. Billy Joe... no. out of my head.
reg
unsexypenguin on July 10, 2005

I'm loving your quotes. "When I was going up the stairs, I met a man who wasn't there. He wasn't there again today, I wish, I wish he'd go away." And one of your quotes reminded me of something else that I thought you might like it's one of my personal favorites maybe you'll like it. "Life is too short to live the same day twice." That was Jennifer Lopez in Monster-In-Law. You're an amazing writer and from what I can read an all and all awesome person! I think the point of this whole thing was so that I could tell you that I've added you to my favorites.

-Miranda
Edited on Jul 12, 10:13 p.m. because ''.
Aimee the Great on April 9, 2005

I could just kiss you!!! this is the first contest i've won... ever!!! Thank you!!!

Aimee
unsexypenguin on March 20, 2005

"As I Was Going Up The Stairs I Saw A Man That Wasn't There, He Wasn't There Again Today, Oh How I Wish He'd Go Away". . . . GRRRR I just gave myself chills!!
Edited on Mar 20 because ''.
crystalshiva on February 28, 2005

i have a dress that says you laugh because i'm different, i laugh because you're all the same on it.
Vicky^_^
Gunslinger-Zeta on January 16, 2005

Yola, dropping by to say thanks for the comment on Shade's Story, and to say that yes, I have, four times
Shadow Kitsune on January 1, 2005

Hey Jinx.

I just thought I swing by and say hell and Happy New Year. I hope that the new year starts out well for you and that another year of awesome poetry and stories makes its way to your author page.

-Michelle
Amphion on December 4, 2004

The story was inspired by the movie "Queen of the Damned." It wasn't that it was a perticularly good movie, but it made me think a little, and that's all that counts.
crazypoetboy on December 4, 2004

hey nice poem
blackheart217 on December 2, 2004

Hey Jinxgirl! Love ur work. Just wanted to let u kno that I just posted another part to my story "Mirror of Magic". Just in case u wanna read it. But beware...it's crappy. LOL. I'll be posting more parts to that this weekend.
Beautiful Irony on November 30, 2004

i will so read the rest as soon as I have done my homework!
teenageloser on October 11, 2004

I never really say in my story if Landon and Camille are bf/gf or not. I kinda just left that open to the reader. I didn't really mean for them to be a couple but I see how you can get that. If they were dating tho i figure he would have noticed before this how beautiful she was (in the parking lot) and would have told her he loved her before (in the note), but it really doesn't matter becuase they did love and care about each other a lot, even if they didn't have a title. Thankx for reading!
spiralchild on October 4, 2004

hey dood, i'm the guy who entered your contest with them weirdo sci fi stories about kendaria. if you're still interested in reading more about it, you can go to www.kendaria.cjb.net, that's tedium's main records of the planet and everything that he knows about it. its really long so read however much you want to, but the records start all the way at the bottom of the page. dont read from the top because you wont know whats goin on. im glad you like the stories, thanks for takin the time to read 'em. peace.

-0m.
Native Crow on June 21, 2004

Like your work!

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