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Emosie Vloei on June 23, 2006Hi Isi,I don't know if you remember reading any of my poeyrt but I know that you give great critiques.I have 2 poems I wrote that I would like your comments on."I Love You To Death" and "Look Mommy".Thank you for your time.
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Deja Vu Feeling on April 29, 2005thanx for the comment!!! I really appreciate it. BTW, how did u find my poem anyway? Thanx!
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brokenpoet on February 4, 2005- Men always believe they are in control of everything around them. When they find out they are not, they think they have failed, instead of learning a simple truth women already know.
-Aviendha/WoT
Best quote I've ever read.
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crysolia on February 3, 2005Now we must have a dire need to learn in common...lol. You are in the three classes I am taking too...that is awesome can I turn to you for some help if needed? Mainly on post-modern poetry...well let me know till then
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markmag on November 15, 2004Thnak you for your comments on my poem. I appreciate it alot. Who knows, maybe someday there'll be a recording of it out there...sigh(probably only in my dreams). But thank you anyway.
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pozo on September 15, 2004Thanks for commenting on my poem, I'll explain my 'form'.
The poem (as you know because you read it twice, sorry to patronise you
) was about three people, so I decided to split it into three verses- showing a difference. Thanks for commenting and keep writing -
Keith on August 27, 2004Thank you for adding me to your favourites. I'm flattered. I'm returning the favour.
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Arian Stasir on August 5, 2004Isi, I was very touched to read your comments and kind words in my guestbook. It's a very nice thing to admire someone, nice to be admired... but blissful when it's mutual. It makes me very happy that you can get something out of my writing, because I adore your work and as I have said on my page, really admire the way you weave words. Always, I hope you can be honest with me (I get a real kick out of reading your crits... they are great, your honesty is great and it's how i got a handle on your type of personality besides just your poems) because I really appreciate what you have to say and truly hope to learn from and benefit from being a friend of yours.
Brightest blessings,
Arian
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SheWasPreternatural on July 22, 2004Thank you for you comment on "chance" you are very observant... but i have to disagree with you on the last line.. you say it was already expected and was not needed.. i disagree... "chance" was not written for others to read... but i added it to my poems anways... the last line was not added intentionally...if the truth be told.. the poem itself was actually suppose to be a letter.. the begining i had been working on for the past few weeks ( a month or few ago) and the last few lines were sentances from a letter i was writing to one of my ex's .. and somehow or for some reason i combined the 2... and well to me.. the outcome did not look good without my closing sentance... but everyone has their own opinions.. and thanks again for reading my poems
very much apreciated. 
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SheWasPreternatural on July 19, 2004Thank you very much for your offer... and you are very welcome... opinions and ideas on my work help me get my work out in the first place, so i am always happy to hear someone's comment on it. Sometimes i dont agree, but atleast they gave me an opinion in the first place. But i understand where your coming from.. people on this site can get... umm well.. sometimes when it comes to an opinion that they dont agree with, they can become very angry. lol well anyways.. i would like it very much to have your opinion on my work, feel free to look at any of my pieces.. as i plan on reading more and commenting on yours once again thanks. ~rayvin
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SheWasPreternatural on July 19, 2004Thanks for you comment on "Killing you with smoke" i myself WAS against smoking and drinking etc... i was clean for almost a year before my friends got me high... the end result was that poem.. i never try at rhyming... if i do it's comes naturally, not at my intention... it's not suppose to be rhyming or posses intellectual words... it suppose to be read as a poem and expressed as a poem.. not searched for flaws or how the flow goes...so thank you once again, very much apperciated.
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