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  • Rellacence on April 28, 2005
    hear me... can you really hear me?
    HEAR ME!
  • gedec05 on March 4, 2005
    How are those potatoes coming?
  • Lonely on October 31, 2004
    lol.. I really like your profession HiramDiaz!
  • anyonita jenea on October 7, 2004
    hiram...long time no chat....didn't know your fave book was one flew over the cuckoo's nest...im currently re-reading that right now...heh...
    The Fruad
  • Rellacence on August 8, 2003
    My Darling Diaz,

    My past theories of you "the charming boy", stolen attention, the skip and the hop to one another ... futile

    Truth is You're brilliant.
    If you lost WORDS you would still intrigue, beseech play, and be an essence of ... beauty

    It is the You that occupies this power, it is You, this wand....it's yours

    Sway & Command; your greatest complex is obsolete to the greatness that inhabits, you.
    You're a nimrod genius....


    ...you are beauty

    inculcate
    Edited on Aug 13 because ''DISCLAIMER: BECAUSE OF IT'S VERACIOUS NATURE I HAVE NOT EDITED THIS COMMENT. HOWEVER, I NEED TO DISCLOSE AN IMPORTANT DETAIL, THIS WAS WRITTEN DURING A "TRIP". be good''.
  • Rellacence on May 16, 2003
    hirum,

    inculcate...
  • candyxrain on December 11, 2002
    thank you SO much for your explination about that one poem. I loved it..it wasnt too lengthy and I actually really enjoyed the lesson..I've been trying to learn about things like that, but i have no proper teacher. Anyhow, I re-read your poem, and LOVED it after reading it. You're absolutely amazing. thanks a bunch for all your help and comments on my poem =)
  • trippin boogie on September 16, 2002
    Dead cats, dead rats
    Can't see what they were at, all right
    Dead cat in a top hat, wow
    Sucking on the young man's blood
    Wishing he could come, yeah
    Sucking on the soldier's brain
    Wishing it would be the same
    Dead cat, dead rat
    Can't you see what they were at?
    Fat cat in a top hat
    Thinks he's an aristocrat
    Thinks he can kill and slaughter
    Thinks he can shoot my daughter
    Yeah right! Oh yeah!
    Oh right! Yeeah!
    Dead cats, dead rats
    Think they're an aristocrat
    Crap, now that's crap!
  • HiramDiaz on February 13, 2002
    :O)

    thanx

    hiram
  • Priestess on February 12, 2002
    ...you are very gifted...
    ...I like your nonsensical ramblings...
  • HiramDiaz on February 12, 2002
    No Problem Residual Paradox!
    I love being able to be influential.
    Thank you.

    :O)
    hiram
  • ResidualParadox on February 11, 2002
    Hiram,

    Thanks for sparking an interest in my for poetry. If it weren't for you and David, I probably would have never began to write.
    Thanks again.
  • on February 3, 2002
  • Katrina Armour on January 3, 2002
    Hiram,

    Thank you so much for your comments on my poetry. They mean a lot to me. I would also like to say that when I read your poems I feel like an idiot. lol. I could only hope that someday I can write as well as you, and I'm not just kissing ass here. I really respect you and your work and hope to read a lot more from you in the future. :O) Thanks again for your wonderful comments.

    ~*~Kat C~*~
  • HomeGrown on September 17, 2001
    Hiram, "Believing is Easier" is just about the lie that is too often called Love. It is abbout those who claim love and turn to cruel and vindictive means to show it. I wrote it about my ex-wife, who loved sex, not me. I knew it, but I stayed. I just thought, or rather believed that one day she would change, and the believing was indeed easier. Thanks for the comment.
  • on September 10, 2001
    Your really good with your words. I love the great imagery that can be so many things at once. Its a shame these other "poets" here can't see enough to appreciate the real gems of your poems. You have a real mind for true writing. I think you would really like my poems, check em out. I would love to have your opinion. I think your writing has what mine lacks, and vice versa, whatever THAT may be, I'm not gonna delve into that right now. The way you set up your poems, it's very interesting, you think that trait would boost my poems effectiveness?
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