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MabusC22 on March 15Welcome back! And thanks for all those comments! You were SO right about the 4th stanza... it's removed... and yeah I mostly just care about depth of thought ;D Everything else comes after. I've been trying to work on imagery and rhyme primarily but not with every poem.
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meandmypen on March 23, 2008Hey Vids, Its bikkil from Nepal. how you doing? back to allpoetry after a year gap. feeling bit strange.
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MabusC22 on January 8, 2008Sorry! My last 'poem' about losing a computer is true. I'm on my parents computer right now checking how long until my new one gets to my house. Not sure how much I'll be around until then but once I get all set up I'll be around much more ^_^
Love the new poem! Keep it up! Thanks for showing us the older one
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MabusC22 : Thanks on December 28, 2007Hey I just wanted to say thank you so much for all the well-thought comments. They mean a lot to me. I'm going to go through everything with a fine-tooth'd comb a little later and really take it all in.
Looking forward to reading your work, too. I'll be watching
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Theater Of Dreams on August 20, 2006

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xxkayleexx on April 1, 2006hello its kaylee thank u for the comments but im actually strait it was for a drama performance im very glad u made good comments ive looked at ur poetry and its very good well done xxxx
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apromisedperfect on March 30, 2006hey love!
aww your comment made my night, thank you soo much. You my lovely sister are an amazing poet!! I admire you and your poetry tremendously! I'm always waiting for your latest work, but I need to stop rambling. haha talk to you later dearest. -
Theater Of Dreams on March 28, 2006Hiya VidZ!!!!!!!!!!

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apromisedperfect on February 26, 2006hey hun!
yeah work before play, thats how it goes. good luck with everything and dont get too stessed out!
Love Always,
Megan -
HangingSoul on February 25, 2006hey babe...i've just been busy so don't get much time...i had a terribly heavy workload this past week...hope to be on more often but it's just that it's year ending and all papers and submissions are due!!!
Luv u lotz
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apromisedperfect on February 24, 2006hey sis,
long time, no talk
how are ya?
<333Megan -
Theater Of Dreams on February 14, 2006I appreciate you visiting my page. I was floored by your vision of poetry at the heading of this page. It is exactly how I write, but music is usually my Muse. I am very interested in reading. Thanks again.
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eternalpoet on February 11, 2006sorry i keep on coming here again and again.. really sorry.. but do you need an AP family?? then there are many people i know who are looking for AP family members
.... just tell me in case you need any family
...
.. just one relation and you will come to know that you have GREAT family to take care of
though i am an Anti-AP-Family-guy
... but still i have made few excellent sisters here( not just AP sister
)...and few excellent ladies who take me as there son.. plus some cool guys calling me bro... its all fine
...so if you need an AP family, tell me... I will try to help you
.. ( its easy
)
and for the above comment, if you are planning for contest and you need points.. then kick me
... but i still think option 4 is best
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eternalpoet on February 11, 2006wow
.. i just read your comment saying you won your first gold..
.. wow
you know what? i won my first trophy after more than an year.. and my first trophy winning poem was "sacred saint said".. the one you commented lastly..
Now you have points, so you have four options now
1 ) promote your works with help of these points
2 ) start a contest asking ppl to do what YOU want them to do
3 ) save these points (i do that alot
),
and the most important one
4 ) give your points to me
tee hee
anyways.. i see two trophies.. good for you.. i hope to see MORE.. *muahaha*
.. lol...
byebye for now.. enjoy it here.. thanks for reading my works..
.. i tell you something, if you aint free no need to get busy by reading my works
... enjoy.. ermm... and yes..hows option 4
( jk )
take cares and have anice time
*hugs and kisses*
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eternalpoet on February 11, 2006by the way.... VICSMAS IS COMING!!
- vic -
eternalpoet on February 11, 2006Hey Vidz.. just dropping to say hiiiii.. sorry wont be able to read your cool works todaay.. but after exams i will
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i hope you are fine.. and how did your presentaion work go?
.. my rape poetry is not over.. i have begun though... i am sorry hbut i wont be able to complete it before exams
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i will catch you back some day sooner
take cares an dhave anice time
*hugs and kisses*
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apromisedperfect on February 10, 2006ohh, very cool. Yeah having an AP sister sounds like a really good idea. It's always nice to have someone there to talk about your writing and whatever else with. thanks for the details. Just to let you know, I'm a pretty open person, so if you need help with anything whatsoever, dont be afraid to talk to me. talk to you later.
Love Always,
Megan -
eternalpoet on January 22, 2006allpoetry.com/group/1283
thats the link to the group of indians in this website
. I hope you apply for it and join it too
take cares and have a nice time
- vic -
eternalpoet on January 22, 2006wow hey, you are an indian, well i am from india too.. anyways.. whats your name? where do you live in india? if you need any help here, feel free to kick me.. i would love to help you out.. again.. there is a group here for indians.. i will send you the link.. you should join it, i am sure you will like it.. as you will be able to intereact with different people from india
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i will send you the link soo..
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend
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KaleidoscopicRage on January 20, 2006Hey!! Just wanted to welcome you to AP!!!!!!

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Wee Beastie on January 16, 2006little boy????
what a cute baby...
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