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I am a bad poet. Please forgive me!!! 
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hey!
HAven't seen a lot of you lately..were've you been?
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yo thanx for the comment, and to answer your question- to bleed a black is kinda hard to explain so bear w/ me- the black is kinda like sadness or sorrow. and when she left me it felt like my heart was filled w/ that feeling, so i hoped that helped, and thanks again.
reiche
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*blinks*
omg your fave author is Robert Jordan!!!
lol
sorry, I'm a wotmainiac, shown by my membership at wotmania I suppose.
newayz, yes that was kinda the original feel of my poem "the girl" but i kept it spare cause no one really knows why she's sad, even I don't know...I see it almost as a mask people use to hide themselves kinda.
I was trying to portray a lot of joy and abandon and then when her mother calls she hides it all from view.
lol, I got ramble-y, didn't I?
L8RZ!!!
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So the grundle beast has been released,
Or simply broke its cage.
Then come to mourn its poor deceased,
Ego, on repo's page.
He ranted raged and tore his hair,
But never had a clue.
That repo can be everywhere,
Even behind you...........BOO!!!!! nyah nyah grundle beast????
(whats up guy? where ya been?)
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hey sweetie miss you and your writin...hope you come back soon xoxo
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Care on February 14, 2003
when are you gonna pick a winner from the challenge you started like... 4 months ago??
*anxious*
-Care
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miss you *hugs* God bless you
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<----- walking around aimlessly... Looking down to her little dog,
'Toto... are we in Kansas yet?'
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hiiiii just thought id stop by and say hi miss ya bunches since youre just such a busy boy hope you had a great new years wish you everything the best love ya
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Interesting challenge you have issued...I just closed a 1000 point challege (1350 pts, actually). Getting entries was like pulling teeth. Do you have a closing date in mind? I would imagine with the points you are putting up, you are looking for well crafted pieces with a respectable investment of time.
-Nando-
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la pena es contigo....tu mensaje desia Y tu mama tambien...que significaba eso..insulto.. que lastima tienes mucho que aprender
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Hah and a HO HO
No I haven't forgotten..
I just got back from Chicago. Believe me I am so freaking happy to forget about school. After this semester I was completely burned out.
But aww..the holidays and HEre!!!!!!!!!!11
Merry Christmas to you got grundle....
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I really enjoy your poetry, you have a great amount of talent. :)
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UP
PUP
Pup is Up
Pat pat
they call him pat
Pat
SAT
pat sat on hat
HOP
POP
we like to hop
we like to hop
hop on Pop
LOL
my first Dr S book
Hop on pop LOL bad bad bad things in my head
:S
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Merry Christmas, love. Hope all of your Chirstmas wishes come true and you get all that you deserve. ~*Amy*~
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your poems are really good i like then a lot take a look at some of mine and let me know what u think im eager to find out ppls opinions
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Heheh....my turn to leave my mark. I am so not the poet that you are so I haven't written a rhyme. I just wanted to stop by and say thank you for you sweet comment on my page. Poor Sunshinejls thinks I stole ya'll.....but I told her I will share, lol. You're a sweety. Thanks as always for dropping by on my page. *loves* ~*Amy*~
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LOL..I get it now, Oh my gosh I can't believe I didn't get it in the first place. Thanks for letting me know though. I appreciate it :D
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I had a GRRRRRRRRREAT halloween ....how did the whole monk thing go? Sound like you had a good time...it was snowing here in colorado so it was cold
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Ah tis a shame I sit here bored
leaving my homework mostly ignored,
I'll resign myself to fail again
and finish college these years ten
I'll blame my addiction to poetry
for a degree done so nominally
in the end I think I'll prevail
and happily end this sad sad tale. Edited by Grundle on Oct 25.
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I decided that I will be shaving my head, not all the way, however, but very very short. The only think that urks me is that winter is coming on and I usually grow it out. Oh well it is for a good cause :>
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Hey there...ok cool you take a pic on Halloween so I can see you as a monk. Have you decided to shave your head yet...I still think you should...
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Well if you are going to be a monk I would shave it if I was a dude...I really like that idea to by a monk....really cool
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Hey sweetie pie! How you been? I missed you! It's not everyday someone implies that they think I'm intelligent. LOL. We'll have to catch up soon. I have to go now, so buh bye & BEHAVE!!!!! ~Sincerely, Sunny~
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HEy grundle...HAVE A HAPPY HALLOWEEN AS WELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you going to dress up for halloween and go to a party? I hope I catch you online sometime again...:0)
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being alone is bad...especially when you lose your soulmate =(...like i think i have...*sigh*...it hurts, bad...
melinda
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Hey Grundle....geuss who...Just wanted to come by and say HI so HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thank you also for the comments grunbdel they were very appreciated and yes i thought you would enjoy the mis spelliungs lol j/k -smarty
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Oh I am sure some comments boiled your blood. Sometimes I am nice and sometimes I am not ^_^ I usually feel the need to defend my poetry if someone misinterprets it...mainly because of bad high school experiences where we would sit and draw the wildest analysis out of poems when they were simply what they were stated to be and nothing else. Does that make sense? I am glad you thought some of my poems sucked, because I feel the same way (just focus on the good ones)
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Hello Grundle...I hope I didn't offend you in the chat box...I was just being stupied tonight...I really am not that crude...well take care
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Thanks for the comment on my crazy poem. I fixed th errors! :)
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Thanks for reading my fist poem..you're a doll.;)
I'll be reading through some of yours..Mackenzie :)
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heeh, first off...my daddy, eh? heeh...second, i know you saw me...heeh...you were there helping me...lmao =) and of course over all...you are nice *nods*...cuz well you just are. and and and i still want muh booty sexxxxxxxx!!! muh mr pyscho therepist person =) heeh...
By the way...I've read a few poems...and i like your style =)
--Lindy
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hmmmmmm... Grundle - have you every read the death gate cycle?
(just wondering if thats where the name comes from)
going to read some of your poems now.
have a good day.
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Hello Sir,
Can I interest you in a charicature of yourself....AS A FISH???? Edited by trippin boogie on right now.
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epale que mas...gracias por leer el poema...es un loquera pero no importa jeje...de donde eres? =)
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Pigged out on your poetry this arvo and enjoyed every delicious morsel. I look forward to the next feast. Cheers! xx Tilly
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Thanks for the visit on my page,and the nice comments.
I don't think there is much I could teach you other than a
different set of eye's and view.
You write well and are very creative and everyone should be alittle different but,sometimes were not.
Us humans in general have a lot to learn.
I look up with need of help everyday.
Thanks for sharing and posting your thoughts and heart.
Your time is precious and thanks for giving me a piece of yours.
May God continue to bless you with your talent. Bye for now.
-Timothy
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read a few of your poems... and enjoyed them very much! Wish I could have helped you, but it seems you didn't need any help! lol
Stop by my page some time!
~Deathy
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thanks for the comment mate, interesting thought!! :)
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Thanks for the comment... burned? I didn't get burned.. the poem woulda been different if I'd gotten burned heh.. so off to check yer work.. ty again..
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hey, thanks for the comment. i'm glad you liked it and you caught the whole bi-thing. i didn't know if it was too subtle, but i didn't know how else to fit it in.
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haahahaa .. Grundle .. I sniff out subtle humour .. :-)
Thanks for the comment on my author's page ..
-Dudesss
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ThAnK yOu FoR cOmMeNtInG oN mY pOeM!
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go to the name butterflykisses an youll see more of my work ok:) That is my other name on here!!
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Thank you for your comment on my work...I will be sure to go through all of your work and let you know what i think:)
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Im sorry you couldnt find the theme in my poem 'But,..' it was simply love.. or well atleast the contradicting things love brings into your life. Feeling like your old and dying because youve lost love...but youre truly young and alive.. having a hunger though its not for food.. and having a quenchless thirst though its not a drink youre thirsty for. Then the stanzas that described the love itself.
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about vamp[ixy, the pixy's smearing my blood on her but i woudlnt mind a hot tub anyway....:)
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Hi... I would like to see some Haikus, Tankas, Rennets, Rictameters from you.
Here are the sylables:
Haikus - 5-7-5
Tankas - 5-7-5-7-7
Rennets - 4-4-6-6- 10-l2 (last line)
Rictameters - (my favorite)
2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2
If you would like an example of each of these, send me an e/m at senkbeil@webtv.net and I will give you a copy of each. One that I had written. Maybe we can get something going for these short poems. I had sooo many posted on other sites, but so far this site doesn't seem interested. Del
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