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Why so serious : hi on September 26

hello!
im15 yrs old!
More than that im Rohith!
IF YU DONT MIND...plezz add me as yur frend!
Been thirsty of indian poets!
individuality on September 9, 2006

I rewrote your poem

FirstScript

Flowers roam beauty's realm; delicate thoughts
inside the heart beating with love's passion,
rain dances beside her cool summer smiles;
singing to the heaven's mystery where
robotic worlds wink imagination.
Softly sliding seductive scenery
cruises dreams; fulfilment's sanctuary,
reality waits for another time
in the future's welcoming arms of peace,
pleasantly perfecting generous laughs,
the whole world skips rainbows for her pleasure.
eternalpoet on August 26, 2006

My earliar comments I made on your poems got deleted.. thats why I had to comment on them again...

Again, previously the contest pages had some problems, so it didnt really let me see the pics... I am happy, more than happy to have read them again and thus understand them in a better way

Hope you didnt mind my "twice commenting" !!

take cares and have a nice time

shya

- Vic
eternalpoet on August 26, 2006

All the links on the main page.. !!!

I am trying to improve my form writing skills too...apparently I dont like my works when it comes to Form Poetry...

anyways.. take cares and have a nice time

- Vic
Epitome Of Man on August 3, 2006

Thank you for your comments, my dear. I used to thrive off the negative feedback I received for my poetry, but after a few of my poems were banned, I gave up on posting anything. Nowadays I post the odd thing, but nothing that I know will rub people up the wrong way. I shall return the favour very soon.
Floorboards on July 20, 2006

aw, i'm on your homepage!
cheers for that my friend,my contest ends in 12 hours,hurry!
if you need more time let me know,
love,
alex
individuality on June 24, 2006
individuality on June 1, 2006

well no doubt going on now dvd singles i ashve to go cos i am not on my own here - just checking in
FirstScript on June 1, 2006

here too... just " my immortal " blasting out her
individuality on June 1, 2006

wake me up inside -
save me from ther nothing
i've become - evanescanse (on now full volume )
individuality on May 27, 2006

in the contest with your new sestina you need to put 'kisses to die for' in author comments
individuality on May 25, 2006

how goes life with you? is your yahoo sorted yet or can you still not get in it? i hope all is well with you
individuality on May 13, 2006

thank you
Floorboards on May 8, 2006

i just want to say,thank you so much for the time you've taken reading my work,it's very much appreciated,i'm rather busy at the moment so i'll just have to leave brief reply's,but i'm so chuffed with what you've done,take care and i'll be reading some of your stuff soon,
alex
FirstScript on April 28, 2006

Apologies?? I'm a bit confused here... Wht were you referring to dear?
FirstScript on April 25, 2006

Too many indeed... but well they're moulting now
Tk cr
xNeonVertigoLipsx on April 24, 2006

Hi!....Just wanted to pay my respects...Oh and thankyou for your kind comments on my poetry..I think its cool that your fiance is a scorpio....
individuality on April 23, 2006

too many chickens
FirstScript on April 15, 2006

I'll go back to FS soon... Don't really think this suits me Keep your eyes peeled...
individuality on April 13, 2006

lol, at new name
individuality on April 2, 2006

thanks wiggles a robotic arm at you hehehe
individuality on March 24, 2006
individuality on March 19, 2006

hehehe you liked the nelson's column poem then
fusaoufh on March 18, 2006

wow- thank you so much. mark up my work, cross out stuff and take out words- feel free.. i feel honored when someone cares to do that and help me.
fusaoufh on March 16, 2006

thank you again. i'm 19 yrs old... and i can get discouraged easily and that comment meant a lot to me
fusaoufh on March 16, 2006

wow- thank you so much. i usually get comments like, i really liked that poem or that was good. i appeciate your indepth editing tips on how to improve my piece. thank you a bunch
individuality on March 13, 2006

Thanks for all your coments earlier done that seven group poem though don't look in it if you are going to enter! as that is part of the rules of the contest
individuality on March 8, 2006

well done on getting the job you were after yay, i'll have a large brandy please
FirstScript on March 5, 2006

That's real nice A treaure trove of poetry you are for me ... Am I glad you found me on AP Love you
individuality on March 5, 2006

i found a rictameter i did earlier when i was looking in my files

Bureaucracy - Rictameter

Here, now,
breath's forever,
merging with pillow clouds
that soften angels' feather brows
while they watch the world's bureaucracy slide
through humanity's helpless lives,
language no barrier
as they stretch wings
here, now.
individuality on March 5, 2006

i was being bombarded then from all sides comments just threw themselves at me lol and i did a new poem to for a contest.
FirstScript on March 5, 2006

Only because you deserve it
individuality on March 5, 2006

as ever your are too kind to me
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

Thank you again... you're a darling I have seen that form before... will make an attempt soon... and send you the link first
individuality on March 3, 2006

The paradelle is one of the more demanding French fixed forms, first appearing in the langue d'oc love poetry of the 11th century. It is a poem of 4 6-line stanzas in which the 1st and 2nd as well as the 3rd and 4th lines of the first 3 stanzas must be identical. The 5th and 6th lines must use all the words from the preceding lines and only those words. The final stanza must use every word from all the preceding stanzas and only those words.

allpoetry.com/Poem/1815138
hehehe
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

Catch it later... I'm posting it
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

Thank you ... too sweet really I will try one for sure ... I'm really eager to learn Thanks a million
individuality on March 3, 2006

too hectic for me right now lol to watch that
Night Hope on March 3, 2006

How 'bout a cinquain???

1st line ~ 2 syllables
2nd line ~ 4 syllables
3rd line ~ 6 syllables
4th line ~ 8 syllables
5th line ~ 2 syllables

& here's a link you might just enjoy...

www.duirwaighgallery.com/inspiration_trailer.htm
individuality on March 3, 2006

that's an easy one really i have some more trickier forms information
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

Thats so sweet of you... yes I will try a nonet now for sure Thanks so much for being so nice to me here...
individuality on March 3, 2006

why not try a nonet?

Wonders Never Cease

Perhaps then a Nonet placed right here,
maybe I could do a Sonnet,
my mind is in turmoil now,
a Nonet - a Sonnet,
wonders never cease,
I've decided,
a Nonet,
Sonnet?
No!

A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes with one syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.

Line 1 - 9 syllables. Line 2 - 8 syllables. Line 3 - 7 syllables. Line 4 - 6 syllables. Line 5 - 5 syllables. Line 6 - 4 syllables. Line 7 - 3 syllables. Line 8 - 2 syllables.Line 9 - 1 syllable.
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

Hehe... Learnt it from you Thanks for the brilliant idea
individuality on March 3, 2006

its better having the links in your page i think for people are lazy, they wont look very far in your lists, this way they can pick and choose
RogueRiverPoet on March 3, 2006

FS, I am continually impressed by your poetry. You are clearly driven in your work and have accomplished much already. I am excited to see what you come out with in the months to come!

RRP
FirstScript on March 3, 2006

awww. ur my FAVOURITE here... i try my best to make you smile And that couch offer is nice... so good for you
individuality on March 3, 2006

thanks for all your lovely comments making me smile yaya just bought a couch/bed, and i don't have to pay a penny till jan 2007 i have been looking to get one too but couldn't really afford one till around june, this special offer let's me buy it now pay later
individuality on March 3, 2006

just off for a sec. tempted to buy a new couch with a special offer.
individuality on March 2, 2006

you changed your page it looks a lot brighter i will read your poems later, i have shopping day today eek have to get ready to go out.
RogueRiverPoet on March 1, 2006

You are SO nice! I dont think anyone has been so friendly to me on AP as you have been! I am adding you to my favorites... I will check out your poetry anytime!

RRP

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