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I'm not going to argue with you about that, no strong lines is no strong poem.
Anyway, I just felt insulted by your comment, maybe I overreacted.
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Hello. Thank you for commenting on Words Drip to Nothing.  It is appreciated.
Love and hugs
B♥nnieQ
Associate Editor, WA
Waltsan Publishing, TX
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Ola Pistola! Just dropping in to say "howdy". And yes I do like the title "Apple Spliced Bliss", its rather interesting. Hopefully I'll be able to stay online long enough to do some reading and critiquing this time. Thanke for still checking up on mine.
jill
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go FP, your work gets better every time i read it
you know the line burnt sugar promises i was wondering ifi caould use that in a song
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youre a great writer! keep up the great work!
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i entirely agree... the new incubus album does not suck. Megalomaniac is my fav song on the whole thing. "you're no jesus, you're no fucking elvis." that's a great line. oh, btw, read your poem for Wingless Bat's contest.. I loved it. Botany: my emerald muse. Great lines. Much love.
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hey
I'm just beginning to love incubus actually. I'm starting with the old albums which I got on sale. haha. I'm so stingy. I can't buy the new one yet because it costs too much. but I'm dying to hear it. and I agree, Brandon Boyd is probably the best poet in the music industry these days.
Kannika
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Hey there FP, round two is goin on now. Are you gonna sweep the cometition and take home a gold in both rounds? There's a link to the contest on my page, good luck!
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Wow, You got some skills man!
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my address is changeing again as of monday so ill e-mail it to you, i found out last week i am alpha company 4th lav (light armored recon) so i found out they havent been activated yet,looks like im stayen in cali for now,AND im reservis so i only have to come to work 2 times a month(thank fucking god!) ill talk to you later(if you ever come to ap anymore)bye
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Ah, i like your poems, we may see diffrently but eh, who cares. Good arguing with you. Peace ::holds up three fingers instead of two, looks around panicked, and runs into a door::.....
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Just goes to show me. Don't see anything new by you for a couple a days, then pow! You get busy. Enjoyed all your latest. 
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sorry if my spelling is lack luster, it wasnever really important to me, I figured that if my words spoke, and were interpreted the right way, than I did my job, well, the cds pink becuase................hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i honestly dont know all I know is that it only has like three good songs on it, and that "float on" is not one of them, its catchy but whatever, feel free type me any time you want
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WOW...lol...thanx for taking my author page so...literaly. Much <3
~MOONZ
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Thanks so much for commenting on my poem, Nine Inch Nirvana. You may want to check out my latest pieces Tap Tap Tap, Heaven Scent, and Divine Love. If there are a couple poems you'd like me to critique, feel free to IM me or leave a comment on my author page and I'll read them ASAP. Thanks again and keep penning!
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hey, it's me! (Jessie) I've always been a fan of your poems, which you know. I stayed up til 5 am go me. miss you! <3
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What the f*ck sudden..........cr@ck head........hey fire!when are u going on line i havent talked to you in a while, and i only have a week left before i have to go again. tu ta lu!
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haha...hi *waves* 
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Just to say hey... and i agree with you on settle for nothing. The solo in that song is so beautiful. I attempted to learn it once but the tab was wrong. 
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thx for ur comment on Twirling.
what is this " chineese water torture on my forhead" thing?
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Shit sorry you already entered sorry just about to read yours now i apologize most sincerely  but atleast i was correct about what sort of person you are.
Nokie xx.
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Another incubus fan way-hey hmm sorry yeah just wondering if you'd be interested in entering my contest? It's called ** DRUGS ** and will be ending 2days from now heres the link; http://allpoetry.com/Contest/595652 try it out im sure you are more than capable.
Nokie xx.
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 sorry if i made you cry  lol
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hahah, yup, that's what he says, "beautiful" jimi is god
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'when I'm walkin' I strut my stuff and I'm so strung out. I'm high as a kite I just might stop to check you out.' Didna think ya young (and talented) chicks would have any knowing of the Violent Femmes. How suprised am I? Looking forward to getting to know your work better. How could I not, you know of the Femmes!
JillBob
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Happy Easter! 
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looks like u have a sure trophy if some more people dont submit poems. i was hoping to get more entries than this. your entry was realy good by the way.
Bobomite
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Incubus is a great band! One of the best bands! I like their new album! hehe...i really like the song "Here In My Room" so yeah!
Lidi
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This peom was very good. I like your perspective and writing style and thank you for complementing on my poetry.
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I am glad to see you like Incubus as well. Please put that song at the top of your page in quotation marks, they deserve all the credit possible. Well I am off to read some of your poetry now.
-Incubus
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Thank you for coming by my promoted poem. I hope that you enjoyed the read. I guess I will never know though, as you didn't bother to comment.
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Indeed we did tell them! But if anyone dared say anything against the asshole, they would deem you "Unamerican". Fucking morons
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Thanks for your comment on Why now...? one-liner...I had a blast reading the subtle lyrics from Incubus and the author of the Prophirias lover. Your spirits remind me of my best friend, poet jdollanketo .
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hey there and thanks for all your wickedly good comments...now i'm off to read some of your writes.
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Thanks for the comment. I wanna say that I don't dislike the Incubus of now, but I like the Incubus of about 1994 much better.
Keep on Keepin' on.
Trent
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Thanks for the comment. I see that I shall have to read you then read you some more. I think that we are on the same page
rhiannon 11 (sarah)
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Hey there thanks for the comments and applaud...you are right, I forgot the title for the BOB song lol I posted up today and didn't look at it. 
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yeah! kill bill was awesome! we totally hav the same movie taste here... hahaha thanks for checking out some of my poems and commenting - much appreciated. i actually have no idea what kind of gum comes from gum trees (doh!) but u can call them eucalyptus trees also so maybe eucalyptus gum??? i think i am too stoopid to think rite now. i will check out ur poems instead and hope that they cure me
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hey! thanks for the support on my contest...people seem to be very ignorant about American rights.
Very cool..I'll check out some of your work.
Peace!
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Sending you the warmest wishes of the New Year
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MERRY CHRISTMAS [or] HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!
May your Holidays
be merry and bright!
And May you year
be filled with happiness.
Love
Mal
yawn good night
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Thanks for the comment you left on my latest poem. It sparked a bit of a debate. You should check it out. 
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hiya,
feeling a bit chemically altered, & loved the Browning poem.
big grins
me.
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Hiya FP!! Its been awhile, I know, and I haven't read ne of ur stuff in awhile either, but I shall, promise!! I was wonderin tho, didja hear from db? Seraph said she got a letter from him, so I wanted to be nosey and ask,  These new smilies are great!!  is the best one.
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i loved kill bill aswell but i just didnt get how after she came out of the coma her legs didnt work but her arms did and they were super strong!
oh well it was awesome!
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Porphyria's Lover is one of my most favorite poems, too. A sick, twisted freezing of the greatest moment in his life. -Jena
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"Miachael Moore is a genious..."
Yes he is, Bowling for Columbine oh how I cried through that movie.
Anyways, um Hi, just roaming around reading and had to stop and say I agree with you. Hope you are enjoying your day. 
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sorry 2 post here but can't im 4 some reason! thanks 4 comments on gideon the bible, not angry tho!! promise, wrote it as a joke, thats all! werent meant to offend just to point out the uselessness of prayer! we pray we waste time coz like i pointed out in poem, if hes infallible why would he change his plans? really didnt mean 2 offend tho, thanx 4 comment (aint gonna edit it tho, if i cared 2 much about what people think i wouldnt have posted it)
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