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  • phoenixonfire on September 30, 2006
    Random fact to spice up your life: I like cold, rainy days where you can sit inside with a good, strong cup of coffee and a long book and just relax.

    hehe..u can say that again..i always love sitting inside the room drinking ok not coffee but hot coco and reading a book when its raining outside..can anything be more beautiful...

    great background and nice profile..

    preeti..
  • Fly-ing-Mun-ky on September 9, 2006
    Hi, I see you applied to my group. I have to ask you first, Would you read my poems if I add you? and Did you look at my profile? i'm not in much of a mood to add someone right now, so send a message and i'll probably do it later.
  • MysticalMelindy on August 17, 2006
    Boo! Sorry bro, had to do it, heeheehee. You heading back to school soon?
  • MysticalMelindy on July 26, 2006
    Howdy brother! *ruffles hair* Sorry I've been awol, I've been without power, and had an out-of-state friend pop in for a visit. So what's going on in your life, eh?
  • Lithium n lollipops on July 23, 2006
    Hey 'ap bro' how has your weekend been?
  • silentvoice16 on July 13, 2006
    hello, I'm in your contest, I wrote the poem "uninspired" I know you most probly get alot of messages like this but I would like to clarify my poem for you. My poem was feeling based, the imagery was mainly for the first few lines in which I wanted the reader to see where I used to be, which was pretty clear. and once you get into the poem it seems the images are flown around and confusing not creating a full image. Well that was the main idea. I wanted the reader to see me then, and now. Thus the title "uninspired" comes into play. I wanted the reader to feel the rest of the way through, with also the flashes of images and the wonder or should I say "confusion" though in a way understanding from a writers piont of view of how it feels when it feels like you've been out of touch with a "gift". I sometimes have a hard time with my writing too, because when I write my heart controls the pen and the words just flow out. my mind works in simple flash images sometimes and not full settings, which inspired me to write this poem. Well I hope I explained myself well, and I am not justifying my mistakes cause I am just a natural writer with alot to learn. I just felt like after my explaination it would bring some clarity to my poem. But thank you for the comments I appeciated it very much. ~Robin~
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