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Eruvande Almare : pre on January 16

Oh drip in the rotted eyes of malice
and dark the poison
Denial, underswept
into oblivion

Flee and pause
Swiftly turn
And break... falter and gasp
Lost a lonely hope
Severed angel wings

Come, the ebony nightmare
Souless black
Scion on September 7, 2008

How are you?!? I totally have been skipping out on this place, but I came back for some more of your wonderful poetry.

-Siah
Sharcu on May 30, 2008

I'm back Hiya!!

--Tim
adios muchachos on April 15, 2008

Does your name mean evanrude to the sea?
adios muchachos : Hi and thanks on April 15, 2008

Thought to pay your page a visit since you did mine earlier. Have to say your page looks like the Taj Majal compared to mine. Loved reading the quotes. Beautiful stuff!

John
Beriothien : Happy Brirthday! on March 18, 2008

I LOVE YOU LIZABETH!!!!!
Beriothien : I love you on March 6, 2008

I ish sorry =
Beriothien : /= on March 6, 2008
Scion on February 20, 2008

I love your new do! miss you!
xpaperxcutsx on December 20, 2007

wow ur page is effing awesome!!!! i ♥ the used they rawk!!! heaps good
-ash xx
DeletedProfile3 on December 16, 2007

you have a really awesome page. love the pics.
Beriothien : <3 on November 6, 2007

Cause shes the bestest! Luff you ^_^
Average Superman on October 7, 2007

hey!
I don't really know you yet,but I plan on getting to know you
happy three year anniversary!,by the way. =]
Scion on April 29, 2007

I love you! You are fantastic and so talented. You inspire me, girl.
Remaining000 on March 1, 2007

...nice list of bands. I used to have a list up like that... I listen to all of those. plus a few more in a different genre. But... yeah. <3
jonny rockets on October 22, 2006

First, nice to know another blinside fan, Second, how do i join the group you started (Christian teens, or something like that)?
Allez ave Diu ~Jonny Rockets
Navi on August 10, 2006

Sorry I've taken so long to reply to the comment you left on my page...

But yes, that's fine. I understand... I haven't written much lately either, what with packing, vacating and saying goodbye to everyone I know...College will be.... interestin.

Yeah... Just whenever you get around to it. I'd be deeply interested in your impression.

Edited on Aug 10, 2:43 p.m. because 'Clearityness'.
Xxthe angry gothxX on June 14, 2006

your welcome
Leslie on April 15, 2006

Dear Daughter....

I hope you are having a nice Break... and I'm wishing you a Happy Easter.... May God Bless your heart always...

Always Thinking of you and sending you my love...
Eruvande Almare on April 10, 2006

Eruvande Almare is one of many translations from the Hebrew meaning of my name into the language written by J.R.R. Tolkien (Elvish) My real name - Elizabeth - means "consecrated to God" for example Eru is God in Elvish, etc.

Eruvande Almare ~ Elizabeth Ann
the finer point on April 9, 2006

what does Eruvande Almare mean?
Leslie on March 7, 2006

Hello!!!!!!!!!! .....

I Hope you are doing good ...
Josh Eaton on March 1, 2006

This is josh. I wish to make a partner ship betwen our groups. although im not born again christan i think we will work well to gether. my group is gods army. join if u like.
Shawnnessy on February 10, 2006

how is u
Eruvande Almare on January 20, 2006

"I just can't tolerate intolerant people"
NeferMaatNetjer on January 10, 2006

You seem to take a scholarly interest in Qenya. It's a good hobby. I'm fluent in Klingon myself, but I think it would be fun to learn Qenya. and no, i'm not just a sci-fi geek, I'm a foreign language geek. I'm fluent in German, have 2 1/2 years Russian study,and am currently learning Ancient Egyptian.
I also am fluent in American Sign Language.

Do you know any other languages besides Qenya?
vaseline on January 8, 2006

heya. nice to meet ya, im your AP sis vaseline leslie is my mum to. my real name is jane. nice page btw
Twist of Faith on January 5, 2006

It is wonderful to see such a talented teen poet here who is a Christian. And one of my daughter's favorite bands is Skillet.
Navi on November 5, 2005

You left these on my author page... lol.

Just thought you might want them back

P.S. I wrote a new short story.... I'd be greatly interested in what you think of it.
Edited on Nov 05, 6:35 p.m. because 'Must I have a reason for change?'.
Homicidal Maniac on October 23, 2005

lol interesting.......kinda confuzin but ook kool..lol
Eruvande Almare on October 22, 2005

Eruvande Almare is a translation from J.R.R. Tolkien's Elvish Languages when he wrote the Lord of the Rings. Eruvande - Elizabeth, Almare - Ann, their translations have to do with what their names translate in in their original languages. For example: Elizabeth, comes from the Hebrew and means "Consecrated to God" Eru - is God in elvish, therefore Eruvande.

~Elizabeth~
Homicidal Maniac on October 22, 2005

almost all ur poems r like............contest poems!! well kinda i guss....lol...awsome!! .......and wut duz ur name meen?? like....eruvande almare?? wuts it meen??..
Edited on Oct 22, 3:38 p.m. because '..'.
Butterfly Goddess on October 20, 2005

Your anime picture in your profile is so cute...I love it...well thanks for commenting on one of my poems, so I'll return the favor and comment one of yours. Thanks again...

*~*anime*~*
Leslie on October 20, 2005

Loves ya!!!!!
Lost in Blood on October 19, 2005

thank you for your comment.
Eruvande Almare on October 15, 2005

"Blindside - Pitiful"

as I recall when my stomach turned
and I was hiding away from myself
away from you
like nothing but something was terribly wrong
and I admit that I was only waiting for the right time (right time)
right moment for you to look away
though you never did I pretended for a while
so I could walk where I don't belong

I remember every word you said
come back in time come back
and I remember I was too beaten
pitiful so pitiful

but I know as they hammered those nails
into your beautiful hands
your eyes they tried to search for mine
but I look away
now your eyes are the only thing that can save me
I'm still afraid of them piercing'
you break into my prison
just pretended for a while
my soul is sad and I walk away

I remember every word you said
come back in time come back
and I remember I was too beaten
pitiful so pitiful

pitiful
pitiful
pitiful
pitiful
so pitiful

and I remember every word you said
but this time I won't look away
and I remember every word you said
and this time I won't look away

and I remember every word you said
come back in time come back
and I remember I was so beaten
pitiful so pitiful

and I remember every word you said (pitiful)
come back in time come back (pitiful)
and I remember I was too beaten (pitiful)
pitiful so pitiful
Leslie on October 13, 2005

HI
Eruvande Almare on September 30, 2005

Thanks for explaining, I really wasn't offended. I just wanted to know why you felt that way. Plus, about 65% of my poetry is rhyming, and I've just recently begun some freeverse because of my creative writing class. Thanks for the comments though, I appreciate them.
montez on September 30, 2005

Elizabeth,
This is the offensive one from England.
I've read about 6 poems of yours now, and despair that you don't try rhyme.
One of my objections to Bereavement is that it's free verse, and I believe ANYONE can write free verse - but rhyming poetry, that's something different which takes a particular skill.
Your own man Robert Frost said that writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down.
I totally agree with him.
I would urge you to try rhyme. It's a truly wonderful feeling when you get it right (which, I may add, is rare)
Good luck,
Robin.
x Loveless x on September 25, 2005

And, awesome anime picture.
x Loveless x on September 25, 2005

I want a cookie. Oh right, Hello. I'm randomly commenting on your authors page. Cool poems by the way.

† Raven †
Leslie on September 25, 2005
vaseline on September 5, 2005
Eruvande Almare on September 1, 2005

Relient K - College Kids Lyrics
Someone please save us, us college kids!
What my parents told me is what I did
They said go to school and be a college kid
But in the end I question why I did

I?m poor, I?m starving, I?m flat broke, I?ve got no cash to
spend
Sell all my books for front row tickets to dave matthews band
My girlfriend?s at another school, I know this year will test
her
I called, found out she had three other boyfriends last semester

And that?s why I say
Oh no! not for me, not for me
Call it torture, call it university
No! arts and crafts is all I need
I?ll take calligraphy and then I?ll make a fake degree

80 grand later I found out that all that I had learned
Is that you should show up to take your finals and your midterms
The party scene is kinda mean, I think it?s sick and twisted
The navy showed up at my dorm and claimed that I enlisted

And that?s why I say
Oh no! not for me, not for me
Call it torture, call it university
No! arts and crafts is all I need
I?ll take calligraphy and then I?ll make a fake degree

Don?t get excited. she?ll say "no" without a doubt you see
And I?ve decided college girls just won?t go out with me
They make me nervous and they always catch me off my guard
Like cell phone services I drop out cause college is too hard

It?s time to call my father
Cause it?s his alma mater
Good grades aren?t what they seem
I think he knows the dean
It?s time to call my father
Cause it?s his alma mater
He says he?s proud of me
But college always was his dream
And I would always say it?s not for me

Oh no! not for me, not for me
Call it torture, call it university
No! arts and crafts is all I need
I?ll take calligraphy and then I?ll make a fake degree

Someone please save us, us college kids!
What my parents told me is what I did
They said go to school and be a college kid
But in the end I question why I did

Do what will make you happy
Do what you feel is right
Only but one thing matters
Learn how to live your life

[in background:]
(phi, beta, delta, cappa
Someone please save us, us college kids!
What my parents told me is what I did
They said go to school and be a college kid
But in the end I question why I did)

Do what will make God happy
Do what you feel is right
Only but one thing matters
Learn how to live your life
Eruvande Almare on September 1, 2005

so it was jeremy in 1983
in his ocean pacific t
who got a bloody knee
on his skateboard
in the half pipe
in the backyard
that tuesday night

and i'm only gonna pierce my left ear
and i've been working on this mustache all summer long
and my favorite band will always be tears for fears
and i'm gonna wear a pink tux to the prom

cutting class through the first floor window
he's driving fast cause he never did a thing slow
and i look up to my big bro
cause in the 80's all the ladies grabbed his hand and couldn't
let go

and i'm only gonna pierce my left ear
and i've been working on this mustache all summer long
and my favorite band will always be tears for fears
and i'm gonna wear a pink tux to the prom (a pink tux to the
prom)

doo doo, a doo doo doo
pink tux to the prom
doo doo, a doo doo doo
pink tux to the prom

i am gonna wear a pink tux to the prom
live without a care...what could possibly go wrong?

when you're president of the breakfast club
and you're not hesitant to fall in love (to fall in love)
to throw it away to fall in love with the 80's

i am gonna wear a pink tux to the prom
live without a care...what could possibly go wrong?
i am gonna wear a pink tux to the prom
live without a care...
cause you threw it away to fall in love with the 80's
Eruvande Almare on September 1, 2005

Relient K - Mood Ring Lyrics

We all know the girls that I am talking about.
Well they are time bombs and they are ticking
And the only question is when...they'll blow up!
And they'll blow up, we know that without a doubt.
Cause they're those girls, yeah, you know those girls
That let their emotions get the best of them.
GO!!!

And I've contrived some sort of a plan
To help my fellow man...

Let's get emotional girls to all wear mood rings
So we'll be tipped off to when they're ticked off
Cause we'll know just what they're thinking,
Just what they're thinking...

She's so pretty but she doesn't always act that way
Emotions swinging on the swingset almost everyday
She said to me that she's so happy it's depressing
And all I said was "Someone get that girl a mood ring!"

If it's drama you want, then look no further
They're like the Real World meets Boy Meets World
meets Days of Our Lives.
And it just kills me how they get away with murder
They'll anger you then bat their eyes
Those pretty eyes that watch you sympathize
GO!!!

And I've contrived some sort of a plan
To help my fellow man...

Let's get emotional girls to all wear mood rings
So we'll be tipped off to when they're ticked off
Cause we'll know just what they're thinking,
Just what they're thinking...

She's so pretty but she doesn't always act that way
Emotions swinging on the swingset almost everyday
She said to me that she's so stressed out that it's soothing
And all I said was "Someone get that girl a mood ring!"

Cause when it's black means "watch your back" because you're
probably
The last person in the world right now she wants to see
And when it's blue it means you should call her up immediatly
and ask her out because she'll most likely agree
And when it's green it simply means that she is really stressed
And when it's clear it means she's completely emotionless
And that's alright I must confess

We all know the girls that I am talking about
She likes you Wednesday, but now it's Friday
And she has to wash her hair
And it just figures that we'll never figure them out
Well, first she's Jekyll and then she's Hyde...
at least she makes a lovely pair.

Mood Ring, oh Mood Ring,
oh tell me will you bring the key
To unlock this mystery?
Of girls and their emotions
Play it back in slow motion
So I may understand
The complex infrastucture known as the female mind
Leslie on July 21, 2005

Been Missing you...
Leslie
suicidal temptation on July 19, 2005

hey I will read your poems later, my sister is like chewing my ass right here to make me go out of the internet...lol so I promise I will read your poems later
Eruvande Almare on July 5, 2005

Copy and paste this on your own page and put a STAR by the ones that are true about you! plus add some true things about yourself!

01. I miss somebody right now*
02. I don't watch much TV these days*
03. I love olives
04. I own lots of books*
06. I wear glasses or contact lenses
07. I love to play video games*
08. I've tried marijuana
09. I've watched R-Rated movies*
10. I have been in a threesome
11. I have been the psycho-ex in a past relationship
12. I believe honesty is usually the best policy*
13. I love ice cream*
14. I like and respect Al Sharpton
15. I curse sometimes
16. I have changed a lot mentally over the last year
17. I have a hobby*
18. I've been told I have a nice smile*
19. I carry my knife/razor everywhere with me
20. I'm really smart*
21. I've never broken someone's bones*
22. I have a secret that I am ashamed to reveal*
23. I hate the rain
24. I'm paranoid at times
25. I would get plastic surgery if it were 100% safe, free of cost, and scar-free
26. I need money right now*
27. I love sushi
28. I talk really, really fast
29. I love pickles
30. I have long hair*
31. I have lost money in Las Vegas
32. I have at least one brother and/or one sister*
33. I was born in a country outside of the U.S
34. I shave my legs (females) or face (males) on a regular basis*
35. I have a twin ....actually i have a triplet
36. I have worn fake hair/fingernails/eyelashes in the past
37. I couldn't survive without Caller I.D.
38. I like the way that I look sometimes*
39. I have lied to a good friend in the last 6 months
40. I know how to cornrow.
41. I am usually pessimistic*
42. I have a lot of mood swings*
43. I think prostitution should be legalized
44. I think Orlando Bloom is cute*
45. I have cheated on a significant other in the past
46. I have a hidden talent*
47. I'm always hyper no matter how much sugar I have
48. I have a lot of friends*
49. I am currently single*
50. I have pecked someone of the same sex
51. I enjoy talking on the phone
52. I practically live in sweatpants or PJ pants
53. I love to shop
54. I would rather shop than eat
55. I would classify myself as ghetto
56. I'm bourgie and have worn a sweater tied around my shoulders
57. I'm obsessed with my Xanga or Livejournal*
58. I don't hate anyone. I dislike them.
59. I'm a pretty good dancer*
60. I don't think Mike Tyson raped Desiree Washington
61. I'm completely embarrassed to be seen with my mother
62. I have a cell phone (mobile phone)*
63. I believe in God*
64. I watch MTV on a daily basis
65. I have passed out drunk in the past 6 months
66. I love drama*
67. I have never been in a real relationship before*
68. I've rejected someone before*
69. I currently have a crush/ Like someone.*
70. I have no idea what I want to do for the rest of my life
71. I want to have children in the future*
72. I have changed a diaper before*
73. I've called the cops on a friend before
74. I bite my nails
75. I am a member of the Tom Green fan club
76. I'm not allergic to anything
77. I have a lot to learn*
78. I have had a relationship with someone at least 10 years older or younger
79. I plan on seeing Ice Cube's newest "Friday" movie
80. I am shy around the opposite sex sometimes*
81. I'm online 24/7, even as an away message
82. I have at least 5 away messages saved
83. I have tried alcohol or drugs before
84. I have made a move on a friend's significant other in the past
85. I own the "South Park" movie
86. I have avoided assignments at work to be on Xanga or Livejournal
87. When I was a kid I played "the birds and the bees" with a neighbor or chum
88. I enjoy some country music
89. I would die for my best friends
90. I think that Pizza Hut has the best pizza*
91. I watch soap operas whenever I can
92. I'm can be obsessive, and sometimes a perfectionist*
93. I have used my sexuality to advance my career
94. I love Michael Jackson, scandals and all
95. I know all the words to Slick Rick's "Children's Story"
96. Halloween is awesome because you get free candy*
97. I watch Spongebob Squarepants and I like it
98. I have dated a close friend's ex
99. I like surveys*
100. I am happy at this moment
101. I'm obsessed with guys
102. I am bi
103. Democrat
104. Conservative Republican*
105. I am punk rockish
106. I am preppy
107. I go for older guys not younger
108. I study for tests most of the time
109. I tie my shoelaces differently to anyone I've ever met
110. I can work on a car
111. I love my job
112. I am comfortable with who I am right now.
113. I have more than just my ears pierced.
114. I walk barefoot wherever I can.*
115. I have jumped off a bridge. (small one)*
116. I love sea turtles.
117. I spend ridiculous amounts of money on makeup.
118. I believe in prophetic dreams.*
119. I plan on achieving a major goal/dream*
120. I am proficient on a musical intrument.*
121. I worked at McDonald's restuarant.
122. I hate office jobs
123. I love sci-fi movies*
124. I have been in love before*
125. I think water rules*
126. I go to college out of state
127. I am Adopted
128. I like sausage*
129. I am a pyro
130. I love the Red Sox
131. I have thrown up from crying too much.
132. I still love old school Nine Days.
133. I love Taking Back Sunday.
134. I so couldn't live without laughing for a whole day*
135. I hate valentines day!*
136. I love poetry*
137. I love horror movies*
138. I excercise every day*
139. I read all the time*
140. I've never been kissed*
141. I watch old movies and/ or reruns*
142. I have a pet*
143. I have been white water rafting*
144. I watch NFL*
145. My favorite clothes are jeans, tennis shoes, and a T-shirt*
lunatick on July 2, 2005

Go you, Nickelback kicks arse!

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