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ObliviousReality on June 28, 2008Thanks for the comment, wondered where I'd be able to check out some of yours if you ever get on here again. I see you've moved. Sorry this is so late.
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regines on May 24, 2008thank you for your comment. your poetry is great. hope you put on some more soon
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feelingforgotten : Thanks on April 24, 2008Thank you for the lovely comment. As the the rhymeing I wasn't trying to rhyme any of the words. Thanks again!
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Milo Blue on April 21, 2008Hey thanks 4 the comment. i had a look through some of ur stuff, very powerful, a lot of emotion. keep it up.
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XNevermindX on April 19, 2008Your poems are so amazing ang moving, i have read though most of them (LOADS) and they are so so so good. Just thought i would post this as a summery to them as i will really run out of words to describe your poems...^-^ Like you profile, especially the stereotype section. Lol
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XxrockxXxgirlxX on April 19, 2008Your poetry is awesome

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jeanie111 : Hi on April 18, 2008Hi, I read your poems, there great. I am a member of peta, so I feel ya on the animal testing. Nice way of writing that. Oh and my favorite was the poem about taking risks. Really good for being only 17. I love that living means you're risking dying. Very cool.
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Darianna on April 18, 2008**Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile
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That is hilarious! Cause, if someone does copy paste it to their page they are actually showing that they are wanting to fit in to the 5% therefore actually showing that they belong to the 95% in a small way. I'm not saying that you did this, but I think it's funny. Is that why you have it on your page?
I think your profile is great btw. There's nothing wrong with being who you are and showing that you are you. I too think that stereotypes are crap. So what if someone likes to dress in "emo" clothes...doesn't mean they are emo. Unfortunately that's the way the world is. It tends to cope better when people are categorized and slotted into some sort of an order. I never fitted anywhere really, and I'm quite pleased that for the most part I am undefined by the worlds classification.
Keep being you...no one else can do it for you.
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cjjc0 on April 16, 2008hey.....dont diss on rap music like that....yes a lot of it is bad.....but listen to lupe fiasco.....he's bringing it back up to par...instead of 50 cents' rythmic speach....but anyway....time to read ur poems lol

from ur profile tho u seen really cool
ur an individual thinker, and u h8 steryotypes
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Short but cute on April 16, 2008Hey whats up?
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emoXlove : hey on April 15, 2008omg i love ur page,espeacially the hold on lyrics, i love good charlotte, and that song was just about the only thing that kept me form giving it,just returning the favor ^-^
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lovexinxcoldxblood : HI on April 14, 2008I like a lot of your poems. I hope to see more of them in the future.
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RavenWings : thanx on April 14, 2008thanx for the coment
yeah it was based on my ex who i'm still hung up on i have been doing alot of the shit that i shouldnt be and its not good but i cant stop
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Amber-Nicole on April 13, 2008thanks for the comment!i'm glad you liked it.my bestest guy friend wanted me to write one about him so i did
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Nickiyi : Ivy Veins on April 13, 2008Do you like?
Running tearing thourgh the night
Now flying through the silver light
Her fingers curled while the wind whrilled
Her toes lifted and her back arched
Leaving the boy she had just starved
She took the red liquid the wine that she craved
Right from the boy and sent him to his grave
One single tear could save his life
But no one was there to leak on the small bite
The feeling was cruel to the 16 year-old
Which sent a shock from his spine to his soul
He died there quietly twicthing with pain
And quickly rotted into dry Ivy Veins
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One Step Behind on April 12, 2008hey thx for visiting my page so now im gonna return the favour

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MuzikChica242 : thanks!!! on April 11, 2008thanks for checking out my poems! im glad you like them! yours are so beautiful! i really love them !

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monique green : LoVe all Ur Poemsz KEEp up UR GoOd Job on April 9, 2008likesz to express the way she feels.......
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Short but cute on April 1, 2008Hey how are you?
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Miss Belligerence on March 29, 2008thanks for your comment on my work!

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Lettingthingsgo : thanks for the comment on March 28, 2008exactly And I have allot of poetry that is reffering to God. I do write some though referring to people. But its up to the reader to decide!
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Mcr luver on March 27, 2008Your poems are really good. SPEAK THE TRUTH! lol
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OMGItsMaria on March 27, 2008That poem is actually about he and his sister, who is basically his daughter....but hte point is that he used to ALWAYS come and have fun with us...but he doesnt anymore...he can get her a babysitter for like, 3 hours ><
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