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humblpye : I have well noted ... on March 13
that a lot of extremely good poetry comes out of Asia, it is a very spiritual part of the world, age is of no concern to me, a poet is a poet...I have known young people with more talent than a lot of older ones...I always wanted to visit India, to experience the ways and thinking of the East
congratulations on your poetry and best wishes as you travel further
John
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Heyyy 
Just wanted to drop by to say that I love your background and your username! Desert Roses are such beautiful flowers. You have a great day, and best of luck with your writing!
Peaceee ♥
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Hey Rose-lady You gots a pretty cool page yourself. I've never been out of the US and I have no idea what a gypsie type skirt is but what they hey have fun with it anyways! Haha. Thanks for the compliment about my page i usually add a little more to it every month to keep up with my... ever changing life. adios and thanks for stopping by. - awsum guy
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I like your background 
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Haha yeaah I changed my name a few weeks ago, it's the name of a song on Panic at the Disco's album Pretty.Odd and....I'm pretty obsessed with the album lol.
I just had my last exam like two days ago (bio...ughhh). Now I've officially started summer!!!! WOOT!!! Haha but the only vacation I'm going on is to the various softball fields I'll be playing on sooo I'm jealous of you. Where are you going on vacation??
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Hey!!!
Just wanted to know how you've been???
Boy, it's been ages....
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Hi there - just wondering how you are doing - hope all is well.
Granny
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Hi princess, thank you for your message, you sound so busy...I hope you are enjoying your break from school...
There is a new group started run by sharcu...it has grown quick in just 24hrs...I'd like to reccomend it to you...please take a look and see what you think
allpoetry.com/Application/2295065
Love you loads ~mum
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Hi, where are you Princess?...
I'm missing my daughter
~mum 
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Have a lovely day
Love ~mum~ 
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Hugs for my princess...
Waiting for your next piece to read...I guess you must be very busy right now
Always thinking of you  ...love ~MUM~ 
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desert rose I wanted to send you my new email address it is
patdegroff@hotmail.com this is a new one and i need someone to send me an email to see if I have it set up right. And to see if I can send an email back thanks
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Hello Areeba.. How are you? Areeba is the name of one of my very dear friend and I really like this name too! 
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I appreate your applause, please comment, Rick
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thanks for your comment on my quote
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hey! i haven't talked to you since you were eliminated from quest for power and i miss talking to you!!! i've had such a busy summer and schools starting soon so i've been really busy!!
i was so sad when you were eliminated!!! you are such a great poet and such an awesome person!!! the contest has finally ended: I WON!!!! i was so shocked!!!
I really hope we can stay friends!!! i was wondering if you'd like to be part of my AP family, like my sister or cousin or something??? let me know!!!
Love Always,
Caroline
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Granny here - just checking to see how things are with you in your neck of the woods? Hope all is well with you and your family.
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OMG Areeba! You been busy, grl!
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wow cool page u have there
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hugs *hugs and kisses  to u too! thank u for such a warm welcome!
DesertRose 
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OH MY GOD WE WON THE CONTEST!!!!!!!!!!!! i was like holy crap, we won!!!!!!! wow, i guess we really work well as a team!!! congrats to the both of us!!! good luck in the next round!!!!
love always,
caroline
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that's great! Although I've already come up with something. The poem is called, "Destiny is all it takes"
thanks for ur help!!!
that poem, the one u put on the author's page; I think u should add it as a new poem cuz it's really good.
<3
DesertRose
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an answer to your poem
I look into his eyes thst once was filled with love
He looks right through me these days its just not enough
Its not what i have done that puts the distance there
Its the come on looks from other women
Watching him he thinks they care
Some women care not the families they destroy
They just know they will be coddled and given fine things by this boy
Yet if given the reponsibility of careing for this man
That lady with the come on smile goes looking once again
I know your hurting for i have been there
I have walked in those same shoes
I wasnt willing to share
But I didnt want anything new
sO I dolled all up and i left as he would come in
He would say where the hell are you going
I replied
Theres men out there to with that come on grin
Oh nothing ould have it he flew in a rage
I decided to do as you are and turn to another page
I would much rather stay here with you
But the last few months you always had something else to do
So i will be back later dont you worry about me
I want to have fun as you have a little time to be ME
That is something you have seemed to forget
Because you thought i would always be right here when you would get back
So get yourself all fixed up and you go out once again
This time dont you worry about me later i will be in
Its not to easy to have so much fun when someone else is dancing with your loved one
But tonight is my night Its one you forced on me
Its the night you will find just how much you love me
I know in my heart i am not to blame
For on this family you started the shame
So if you want a woman to love
Look no further than right here
For baby theres not many of us left
That loves a man so dear
note i kinda got carried away but when this all happened to me i was honest all the way . I started realizing it wasnt me that was foolish and went looking . so i decided to dress and act like the girl he thought he couldnt live without and he didnt like other men looking at me like that and he didnt know exactly where i was so he was worried. Y OU CANT HAVE FUN WHEN
YOU ARE WORRIED ABOUT ANOTHER SO WE ARE BACK TOGETHER AND IN LOVE MORE THAN WE HAVE EVER BEEN. This may not work for everyone but it worked for me
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yupe 
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Hi Areeba! Lemme mention that I really lyk your name! One of my bestest friends name is also Areeba  Thanks for visiting my authors page and thank you for liking it! I'm glad you did.. and yep I joined AP when I was well round about your age... I'm going to read some of your stuff..
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your apage is great girl, I love it, and leave saudis, do it, pleaase, they dont deserve you, I was everywhere but wont like to go to islamists, sorry, listens bad but truth is always bitter
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lol to answer the question at the bottom of your page... I DO I DO!  Just stopped round to say hi
~Chelle~
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hi, i got your message, and it looks like we're partners!!!! this is such a cool contest, and a cool topic for this round!!!!!
do you have any ideas on what we should do??? i was thinking maybe maybe like someone has all these questions about love and if their feelings are returned and the other is either saying yes i love you, or not i don't. i may think of more ideas later send me some of yours!!!!!
love always,
caroline
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Hi princess...just to let you know I will be around more now...I've had some personal emotions to deal with and a busy schedule which didn't allow me much time on line...all will be much better from now on except lol, next weekend...  so I hope to be around to read your work
All my love ~Mum~
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that's cool! sounds like a lot of fun you had. my summer is going well too. parties and outings... beach.
so, did u go to nova scotia for the first time?
have a nice day!
with lots of luv,
great granddaughter
DesertRose

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Hi aweetie,
Just got back from two weeks holidays in Nova Scotia where we ate lots of lobster, explored many coves and bays off the Atlantic Ocean, and visited with my brohter and his wife. Hope you are having a good summer so far.
Lots of luv,
Great Granny
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Have a lovely day princess
all my love ~mum~
PS. I won't be on line again till Saturday, I will drop by and read some of your past poems then  ....hurry and write somemore, longing to read them 
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thank you...  sure, I'll let u know when i need u.
with luv
~DesertRose

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Hi sweet daughter...sorry I was off line last week, just when I needed to get to know you...
Feel free to drop me an IM anytime your passing my page, I am on and off here quite often and will always get back to you..
If there is anything at all, at anytime that I can help you with, don't hesitate to ask
Hope you are well...speak with you soon
love you lots  ~mum~ 
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Im honored to be your Uncle........
Hugs
Mal
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oh. cool! hope u enjoyed!
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thanks so much desert rose i will talk with you later my motherinlaw is having her fifty eith wedding aniversary dinner
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this ahppens...it is a site problem!!
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hey! no, I don't get what it means by 65,535 poems... if it means that's how many poems i've written, that's totally wrong.. I've probably only written about 20, and maybe some copies with little changes, so abt 25 or at most 30. I just don't get it!
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oh my sis thats a lot of poems,  go team you 
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Hey lil sis!!! Just thought I would let you know that I am really proud of ALL the poems you have written... I still havnt read them all but I'm getting there... you're an amazing girl!!
<3Alice
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Stranger-Identity mentioned you to me. I'm muslim too! i've always wanted to visit Saudi and my parents are insha-allah going to hajj this year. see you around! (on AP =)
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I can't believe you're only 13! Your poetry is outstanding. If you're this skilled at 13, I can't imagine how awesome you'll be when you're 22!
I also enjoyed your author page. It was interesting reading about India and Saudi Arabia. There is a bias in America that in those places women are invariably miserable and oppressed. You are a fine example that that is not always the case, as you seem educated and happy to be where you are. I also suspect that you are better educated than the average American 13-year-old, as your grammer is nearly perfect! I've never seen a 13-year-old with such flawless grammer, and this includes when I have read over my old journals!
I'm sorry for rambling so much. Your work just really caught my attention. 
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 Whoa... I would have never guessed you were 13 from your poetry. It's amazing. Just thought I'd take a look around after reading your poem "I miss you, Daddy". 
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Yay Bollywood! lol I live near a college town and they show them here every now and then for the local Indian population... I was seeing a movie next door and we both got out at the same time, and I felt like a giant walking through them! (I'm 6' tall, 200 pounds)... but I admired them for some reason... (maybe because they don't over eat! lol) I've had many Indian friends in real life through work and have enjoyed them all (I like when they have weddings, and invite 600 people! That's a LOT! lol) When I visit their homes they have the carpets on the walls and incense and stuff, real Indian-culture-like, and I go Ooooooo!  Well, enough out of me, I'm glad you liked my AP page, as you can see it is possible to interact with people here... I see you know Ellis... well, we knocked heads politically already (he was a Liberal, me a Conservative!), but otherwise I think we'd get along... (and people do change!) Very nice introduction you have up there, I read it all, for every little bit helps to improve our view of the world! Well, that's my story for now. Take care!
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AREEBA!!! I think you've written more than Julia did, LOL  . By the way, Roxy changed her username. "roxjo" now right? Oh, anyways, just dropped by...see you
~Chelsea
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