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CookieZeal : re: the Ignored subject--- not me! on July 13, 2007I don't do that. Never have. Never will. It would have to be an horrible trespass.
You mean it isn't resolved? Shall I take it a step
further?
I'm receiving all your messages. I'll post this to your author's page too. So sorry if you thought this.
Blessings, CookieZeal
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Agony Creeps on February 5, 2007Thank you for all the comments that you have left on my works, the site had only told me about the two i originally had talked to you about but upon entering my "notes" page I found a plethora of others that you wrote on. So I thank you.
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rvh1956 on October 29, 2006D P ... Rich dropping in to say hello. My situation is interesting at the moment and I will here and there. I hope all is well with you. Peace.
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rvh1956 on October 26, 2006Seems you and I have some things in common. I ran into a retaining wall at 65mph. Things have not been the same since then. Things are just now getting close to being 'normal' again. Thank you for sharing with us. Rich.
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Karmacanbiteme on October 18, 2004Is your name really Dennis Pickering? That makes me happy.
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Night Dragon on April 7, 2003You seemed to have a few questions regarding Themeaning of life & Aftermath I wrote awhile back, you said to be consistant well i don't usually think consistancy I just right and as for rot it stays cuz i find it to be a powerful word, and the aftemath is the realization that after i wrote this poem and had it published nothing in the world would change, just fyi
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candace22 on March 10, 2003hey dennis. thanks for checking out my poem. but please dont sit around critiquing my grammar. i wanted it to come out just the way it did.
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silica on March 6, 2003Yes – I agree, I much preferred Birchwood’s – I made/told her to put it on her list lol.
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Nosferatu on March 5, 2003I, just now, saw the comments left on my poem The Mage. Thank you,
I would like to tell you of the experiment. I was begining to think that people around here wouldn't say shit if their mouth was full of it. So when I reposted htis poem I was carefull to make the changes you pointed out. IE war/wore, road/rode etc. to see if anyone would have the courage to call me on it. I thank you for fostering my faith that some will in fact be somewhat honest and tell me if something stinks. I know you were only poinitng out spelling errors but it is a start towards getting honest critiques on my work and for htat I thak you. -
John the poet on February 10, 2003Greetings Dennis. Thanks for visiting. My latest poem might be to your liking. 'SO WHAT IS GOING WRONG TODAY?' shows the madness and sadness of this century! I look forward to reading more of your poetry soon. Take care and best wishes, John.
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sheshe143 on January 13, 2003thanx for the comment on my poem truth speaks lies
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TanyaB on November 24, 2002boy you're pretty rough on chocolate there buddy, may not be a perfect rhyme throughout but i wasn't the one judging
you sound like you could use some chocolates
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Brazos on November 16, 2002Dennis, wazzup man, haven't seen anything new from you lately. Have you quit posting, or are you just posting on a different site? Let me know, dude!!
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Stacey69 on October 26, 2002Thanks for your kind words Sir.
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Brazos on October 6, 2002Dennis, I took your advice and changed 'says' to 'sez' in my poem 'Mister George Bush'. Down here in South Texas we pronounce them both the same, but I realize not everyone does elsewhere. Thank you for your constructive criticism.
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Desiree Darkk on October 6, 2002Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, The Missing Piece. Not necessary to delete anything. I prefer that all comments remain as originally written. Thanks again for your suggestions..... Desiree
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NurseChilly on September 8, 2002Dennis I would like it if when you leave messages on my IM..that you could at least explain yourself instead of being cryptic...I am at loss for all your messages today????
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Lapis Rose on September 6, 2002You're the second person I've seen here at AP that seems to have a greater than average knowledge of poetry. I like that and put you on my fav list so that I can come back and read you, and perhaps learn a thing or two. Thanks for your comments on my work. It's refreshing not to have only sappy comments on everything I write... sometimes I think people are just blowing smoke up my a-- , just so I'll do the same for them! LOL Sorry but, it's nice to know I'm still able to learn new things without all the haze. 1000 thanks! *_*
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John the poet on March 16, 2002Greetings Dennis,
Thank you for sparing the time to send me your comments. Yours are the first I have received that give food for thought and that is much appreciated. My recent poems about Scotland seemed to attract interest and I decided that this was worth pursuing.
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Michael Dennis Rivers on February 24, 2002Dennis, thanks for you kind comments on my poem about the statue of Liberty. We all inflict/influence each other. It is nice when it is a good influence. My age albeit old, came on me rather suddenly... watch out!
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Ava Noire on January 1, 2002I have judged my challenge 'Write me an enchanting fairy tale poem.' The winner is 'The Land of Lolight and the Traveler Kyle' by Alphabetjox and the runner-up is 'The Maiden and the Wolf,' by Sharon. All the entries were wonderul & all simply stunning. I enjoyed reading these enchanting tales. Thanks to all who entered & remember you are all winners!
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Hi Dennis, would you mind looking at 'The Flowers of Levant'. I incorporated most of your suggestions. I looked at the metre very closely and got most of it down to 11. The last line still has 12, but there's not much I can do without changing the meaning. Thanks for your critical commentary.
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boiledegg on December 9, 2001G'day Dennis
I got all your message from my IM. I e-mailed you back but that addy don't work. I thank you for for teching me the metre/beat thingy. I am yet to apply to my work. I am sorry it doesn't come naturally but hey a bit more practice will help :) Thanks again ok.
Seasons Greetings To & Family
~Mary -
Hey Dennis...thanks for reading 'Fingernail Salad'...just to clear things up (for what it's worth) the poem was written after Cara (pen name Caramelah) wrote a comment, number 11, on my bio page. I think it explains everything...the whole poem is about a nightmare which know no rules in reality. And I don't do drugs.
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nell on December 8, 2001Hi there Dennis,
thank you for your kind comments, i really appreciate them.
most of my work is made up,'wrong again' and 'i want to be with you' are amung those..as well as all of my other 'love and'lost love' poems.
i have read a few pieces of your work and i think that they are amazing!!!
and i will be reading more.
anyway thanks very much again
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Brazos on December 3, 2001Thank you, Dennis for your kind comments about my little Xmas poem, and all of the other comments you have given me as well. I always appreciate comments from knowlegeble fellows as you, much better than the 'Uh, ok, uh.....cool dude', that we so often receive. In case I don't get the oppurtunity to talk to you again in the near future, I want to take this chance to wish you and yours the greatest holiday season ever. Methinks, we will talk again, however......Brazos
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sheshe143 on September 25, 2001thank you sooooo much for the comments you left on my poems...i really appreciate it. i read your bio..and i just got into a very bad car accident sept.1st , i broke my neck, had to have my spleen tooken out. i wuz nearly bleeding to death, but you know i believe that i did die...those are my thoughtz. but i have a poem called "I Am Alive"....i wrote it when i got home from the hospital, if you are willing to read it sometime. Itz kinda weird now, i don't know why---life-you know what i mean? i dunno.
well just wanted to say that u are a very talented person and i'll be looking forward to more of your submissions.
thanx again for your comments............=D
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