Guestbook entries for Creatress at All poetry

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Lowell Poe : SHE SHALL RAISE HELL IN PURGATORY on July 2

In the twilight of the Comanche
and the Navajo,
with their peyote dreams,
our count down to their existence
which was on the rise,
had not yet brought her upon us.

When American slave owners
who cried for freedom,
killed their own,
her descendants were
waiting for her arrival.

The daughter of Muhammad,
the bride of Jesus,
the poet laureate,
kin to Elijah,
friend to Lazarus,
the profit of revelations,
the first lady of revolutions,
who would give birth
to the final great struggle,
of our Armageddon,
was yet star dust,
waiting to show us the way.

The damsel who's only distress
was she must wait in the wings
for her turn to come forth.

Out from the glare
of the Sun King she comes.

Throngs of faithful
waiting for her to come forth,
to burn her at the stake,
and steal her scrolls,
to claim as their own,
and attribute her writings
to idols of false Gods,
to serve their own believes.

I tell you now!
Gather her words!
Bring them forth
to your children's children.

She is a disciple of no man,
living or dead.
Her scrolls will take us
to the new order,
her very existence,
that is here and now
and may never return again,
Will lead us
to our new world
of tranquility.
MissStranger on June 21

GO,sis!!!
OnEbAdApPlE : hi on April 5

I adoreee ur page...
OnEbAdApPlE : hi on April 5

I adoreee ur page...
The Palbearer on February 26

PS you've been fav'd
TheSilverQuill : Awed on February 26

Your essence ... there is sometihng very soulful, simple and almost majestic about you. You surpass spiritual and make a something.... familiar, but very unknown to me. I envy the deep, soulful beauty you carry. And in your peotry! Your writing style is that which I crave to create, and yet fail to by all means. I do not envy you, but you impress me beyond belief, and are now idolised, to a tame, tame degree... furthermore, your backgrounds are beautiful, and you've kept this short and sweet (while I couldn't bare to contain myself from the world)...

You.... ROCK!!!!
EarthToJim : Knowing you like politics... on February 7

...perhaps you'll allow me a shameless plug on your page? If not, delete at earliest convenience--

http://allpoetry.com/list/30421-Political

Keep on fightin' the good fight.
BrokenMind on January 27

Hey, I liked your poem on the US. Great use of words, keep on writing!
Friday on August 31, 2007

I was just popping by to say hi and thank you for reading so much of my work
SilentMind on August 29, 2007

wow, you've done some wonderful background work
MessedupMarionette on August 28, 2007

Yay, I'm a leo too! You're probably right now thinking "Ok, who the fuck is this random-ass girl?" Or not. Probably not. Hi. I'm kind of hyper right now, usually I'm not such a blabber and painfully... ugh person.... but I've read a few of your poems and just wanted to say, you're brilliant. Love it all. Keep up the greatness.

(wow, I'm annoying)
The Burning Year on July 31, 2007

so....you being a wait/ress and a poet...a..creator...

wow....you are brilliant
HeavenScent4U on July 12, 2007

Just wanted to stop by AP daughter and see if all is well. I haven't seen you ffor awhile and I miss you Hope all is well in your world. Be well and be blessed
Biciaksr on June 9, 2007

beautiful artwork, it seems u have many talents =)
HeavenScent4U on June 7, 2007

i just wanted to stop by and say hello and you're such a sweetie for always coming by, reading my poetry and leaving such wonderful comments
be well and be blessed sweet spirit
HeavenScent4U on June 3, 2007

i love your motto
sidewinder on November 10, 2006

Hiya!! I'm Bill!
Temptrysse on November 8, 2006

Your backgrounds are really beautiful and like poetry full of depth.
TravisB on November 7, 2006

I never saw the bird before. Thanks.
nickkiwick on October 26, 2006

Hey, love your author page! I live in Phoenix, AZ and I am also a Leo! Nice to meet you
Manic Panic on September 29, 2006

Thank you for reading, and commenting on my poem. Your feedback meant a great deal to me. I will be reading some of your poems very soon, as well. Thanks again.

By the way, I really like the background that you have added to your Author's Page.
Creatress on August 23, 2006

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bubbles48463 on July 29, 2006

I love your background. I love Rome. And the colors; the lion's face ... just beautiful.
MissStranger on July 29, 2006

I LOVE YOUR BACKGROUND!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hekate on July 10, 2006

Thank u very much for your sweet words
bubbles48463 on July 9, 2006

It's definitely very cool to learn that you are (relatively) near my age, too! I'm excited that we found each other on here and I am looking forward to reading a lot more from you! I like your writing very much.
Wesley Storer on July 1, 2006

Thanks for your comment on "A Vampire rules the Moon". I was inspired to write this poem when I remembered my friend, C.M. Archer, a true gentleman who liked to dress up as Dracula, and we were in a college play together at S.F.C.C. in Spokane, Wa , 1973, that went really well for participants and audience as well. He certainly looked the part. He was one handsome devil. He was only 51 when he died, unfortunately. He always befriended me knowing I was just another down and outter on the street, and he always took a few minutes to brighten my day. The poem is symbolism for our friendship and the alienation of my existence. Thank you for your interest.