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the critique/compliments are much appreciated!
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Ah my beloved Dianne! I was smiling when I read your page and see you've changed some things once again -- you are so clever and so versatile and SUCH a very good performer, meant in a sincere and amused sense! Hahahahaha -- you make me laugh out loud, for SHEER pleasure of enjoying WHO you are!
I was thinking of Paul, and another version of your quote sprang into mind:
The most intense love is when it was first great hate.
LOVE to you, always, dearest Poetess!
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Hi Cookie Dear!
I enjoyed our conversation-you are a wealth of wisdom all tied up in a pretty package-if I lived in the same city as you-I'd be tagging behind you everywhere you went hoping some of you would rub off on me.
I pray the Lord would continue to keep His hand on you and flood you with blessings and answered prayer! ♥  vj
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I'm sorry, but since it was on my author's page, I was late receiving it  Did you have a question, LegalEagle?
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thank you for your comment  I appreciate any and all criticism as long as it's constructive, though I may or may not use it. I'd love to hear your thoughts!
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Thanks for leaving a comment could you send me any critiques you think I willing to learn.
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How especially gracious you are to say such nice things in response to the stand I make with Christ. If it isn't believable by love,.............well, it isn't believable, right?
Bless you so much!
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 Just a thought-- I thought that what you. .typed. .about true prayer in your profile was. .just awesome!!  Like. .refreshing!! I myself have been slipping on that, and searching (( more like wandering  ))for the way you're supposed to pray. . .So I see me nosing through your profile page here as a sort of direction from the Lord  Thankyou!! And i find it as evidence too that he is working through/in people  A good truth to wake up to, no?  So, CookieZeal, from browsin round your page, I do say, I think you are preTTy amazing  and I hope that I can delve into a poem or two of yours and see what other amazments you have  . But right now, I am thankful for God's revealing and. . .Im off to attemp to break my cycle of writers block
 . You'll see me again!!
Take Care and Keep Glorifying Him!!
~Elle Sancho
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I am humbly appreciative and thank you for your trust. I will do so 
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Hi- love your page and little dream. If it's not too much to ask, could you stop by and give me a Level Two comment of two? I'd appritiate it. 
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hey im ashley and im 15 i love the style of ur poems <3 how did u get ur backround like this..\
cheack out my poems my thingy is
take-the-bulletts
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Dear CookieZeal, I like your pillow tag poem - it struck a chord! We have recently gone 'green' in our household and no longer use chemicals etc, so we use pillows etc without fire retardent in. This means they are naturally (or have to be here in the uk) fire retardent, and made of a natural substance. My pillows no longer sport 'warning' tags.. But perhaps pillows over there have different warnings on? About smothering if you hold them too long over someones face? About them catching fire anyway if you hold them over a naked flame? About them breaking the washing machine if they are washed in a domestic machine? About not dry cleaning them so you don't die from dry cleaning chemical inhalation? I'm curious now! Funpum
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Do you have direction?
No one is accidental. As purposeful as
your feet are to stand, is your soul to seek
and experience the power of God, for He
is knowable. He's as much at your feet
as equally holding up the ceiling of heaven.
AMEN! I am a bible thumpin' pentecostal myself. I go to Abundant Life Fellowship in Roseville, California. Keep spreading the word of jesus, I guarantee that he will lead you to the living waters!
GOD BLESS
CARINO
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hey will you read my ltest poem please  ?
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Thank you for the ego boost.
And I hope I never see a poem like mine in a greeting card. Jaws will drops. Birds will fall from the sky. Young children might start wearing shoes. I dont think we need the chaos. Edited on May 19, 3:01 p.m. because 'mispelling'.
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Hi, you critiqued my poem "A Mother's Call." Please free free to critique any others. I really like detailed comments. You won't bruise my ego. It has already been bruised. Also I should state now that I developed my own style of poetry of mixing different types of poetry into one poem. Like rhyming one verse aaa,bb the a b a b, to free style verse to same syllable count. This seems to bother some people. I like to experiment with poetry.
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Hey! Congratulations on getting to 7,000 comments! I'm slowly making my way to 3,000... it's funny because everyone I knew when I first joined the site and had like 1,000 comments... I now have way more then them. I guess being a greeter really adds to getting a lot of comments, eh? Plus I guess I don't have any other life besides being on here so ya  God bless you, CZ. Thanks for everything you've been doing for me in the last couple of days
--Tim
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Justwanted to thank you for the comment on my poem. Yes i do play guitar. not very well though. and you read between the lines very well, it was based on a personal experience. 9 times out of 10 all my poems are. And again, thank you very much, im not too cocky of my own work and I wasnt really thrilled about posting
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Thanks for thinking of me sweetie, hope all is well in your neck of the wood, much love to you and yours!  -Timothy~
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i love ur creativity.ur writing is beautiful. i will like to have u as my friend ur good and i hope to be like u. write me at weightedsunny@yahoo.com
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Hello!!!
Just drop by to wish you a Happy Easter... I hope all is good with you...

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Hi Cookizeal...is your brother single? He's Cute..and U 2.
If you're to read my poems...you can use the 2nd Level...
I'm Glad to join you...
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 Ya think? lol thank you!
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i gotta go so just give me the info later.
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i'm back1  to you too!do you have a gaia or neopets usertname? if you do tellme. 
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you wanna know a weird thing?
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I like your author page it tells a lot about you and how you deal with poetry. If you come across my poetry and read it, please be honest. Any way that I can improve is a way forward to me and I except detailed critiques, that's the only way to learn. See you around 
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 Ok. I see.
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Oh yes, and also I meant 'their' empty lonely to be possesive once again.
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Hey, thank you for the comment. Actually the 'their' was intentional because I was talking about how it was their honor. Thank you anyway though. Edited on Apr 03, 5:22 p.m. because ''.
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that what it read origianly and someone years ago had me change it. it goes back to their pleas. thanks for the comment on the flames.
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Type, in the address bar:
allpoetry.com/poets/
And after the last slash, type your poets name 
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Thank you for your comments. Your the first one.
I would like for you to tell me how you really feel if you read anymore.Thank you again!
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Cookie dearest please mail me some recent pictures of you I have a bulletin board on my wall of my special friends. I like to have you on it some photos. You can send them email or regular mail and ill put you on it. I have some older ones of us but they aren't very good of me. Oh by the way please get rid of that aweful picture of me on the chat page lol. That is terrible I'll mail you one to replace it k? Thanks love you.
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You looked at a poem of mine and asked about the form. The only real form is that it is an acrostic, and the end words of the individual words down rhyme, elsewise, as you said, there isn't a particular syllable count or anything. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Peek-a-boo Just hanging around and thought I would drop by and say hi so... High Gregg 
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Hi there. Sorry for the late response. In the event you didn't get an answer, all you do is go to the "Poetry" tab at the top and when the menu drops, choose "Authors". It should bring it up.
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im new and would like to find a poet, name FadetoBlue, how would i do it?
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Dianne, could you please review my contest poem, Know Now this Silence? The review is a requirement of the contest, and I would be honored if you can do that for me.
Thank you, dearest Friend.
Myra
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Hallo my dearest Friend
How are you doing? I am so busy lately -- but it is NO excuse: I should read you more. KNOW that I think of you almost daily.
My prayers and love
Myra

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I want to thank you for your critique and you can give me the highest level you've got! I am brand new to this site and having trouble understanding everything at the moment. Putting a poem on is easy but I don't understand all the little boxes to fill in for others nor do I understand the little green camera thing! but ... I hope to get it all worked out eventually by making mistakes. Excuse me if this is not the place to post this message as well. I am of the "old school" of poetry (form, rhyme, lyricist) and therefore a person that writes more prose, like yourself, is a challenge for me because my mind just don't seem to flow as well when I read them! I'm working on appreciating them and will try to give you my most honest critiques. take care, joy 
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