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noper I meant nere u can say never means the same thing nere to me just seems so much more um classy I have no idea why it's from something I heard in Shakespear <3
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"I have been informed of love as complex emotion
simple words can nere compare to divinity apart
that which I experience lies beyond possible comprehension" Do you think this sounds better?
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"'yet have pondered at this standard words worth'-
the subject gets a bit jumbled and I'm not sure about
the verb being used." <<<<
er are you speaking of the subject in that statement or the poem itself? The verb I easily assume is "pondered". I find it hard to understand how I can be good at poetry and bad with the standard rules of english....sorry for all the comments by the way ....lol I am a very talkative person <3
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P.S.S. er I think I did mean to put complex twice....*thinks back* taha oh yes I did because "I have been informed of love as complex emotion
yet have pondered at this standard words worth
that which I experience lies beyond complex comprehension" er I wanted to make it certain the reader would know I was refering to comprehention pertaining to love and since I had refered to it as a "complex" emotion I felt sayin complex again would reflect the mind back to the previous statement to make an easier connection. hm..Maybe I think too much huh? taha. <3 *Jo*
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hm....I actually really HIGHLY dislike punctuation, but I was trying to try something new lol. I liked it when my friend did it, but I dunno I am usually content with just my .'s lol. <3 *Jo* P.S. I can try to edit it but I will have to look up something or um something? lol so I know how.
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daaaa Your so nice but you confused me I am 16 and although I am very intelligent for my age I fear that since I have just begun writing poetry in styles this week I am a bit low on my poetry lingo so I am not sure if I will compeltely understand your critiques although I will try my best. <3 Thank you for your sweet comments I am glad that people appreciate my poetry and have contructive critisism <3 *Jo*
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thankyou for all your comments on my work. It really makes me happy to know my poetry and lyrics aren't that bad...lol
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I want to thank you for being a sweet greeter and for talking to us in the chatterbox. That is very special to the members and I thank you for that.
Kari
Your a wonderful greeter!
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Jumps on just cause I am looking to get in some trouble today...hmm none here yet...sigh ok jumps off 
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Greetings, there was errors within my poem.
Read it again.
thanks for your comments.
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Apologetics research. What is that? Green name means a greeter?
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the critique/compliments are much appreciated!
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Ah my beloved Dianne! I was smiling when I read your page and see you've changed some things once again -- you are so clever and so versatile and SUCH a very good performer, meant in a sincere and amused sense! Hahahahaha -- you make me laugh out loud, for SHEER pleasure of enjoying WHO you are!
I was thinking of Paul, and another version of your quote sprang into mind:
The most intense love is when it was first great hate.
LOVE to you, always, dearest Poetess!
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Hi Cookie Dear!
I enjoyed our conversation-you are a wealth of wisdom all tied up in a pretty package-if I lived in the same city as you-I'd be tagging behind you everywhere you went hoping some of you would rub off on me.
I pray the Lord would continue to keep His hand on you and flood you with blessings and answered prayer! ♥  vj
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I'm sorry, but since it was on my author's page, I was late receiving it  Did you have a question, LegalEagle?
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thank you for your comment  I appreciate any and all criticism as long as it's constructive, though I may or may not use it. I'd love to hear your thoughts!
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Thanks for leaving a comment could you send me any critiques you think I willing to learn.
Thanks
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How especially gracious you are to say such nice things in response to the stand I make with Christ. If it isn't believable by love,.............well, it isn't believable, right?
Bless you so much!
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 Just a thought-- I thought that what you. .typed. .about true prayer in your profile was. .just awesome!!  Like. .refreshing!! I myself have been slipping on that, and searching (( more like wandering  ))for the way you're supposed to pray. . .So I see me nosing through your profile page here as a sort of direction from the Lord  Thankyou!! And i find it as evidence too that he is working through/in people  A good truth to wake up to, no?  So, CookieZeal, from browsin round your page, I do say, I think you are preTTy amazing  and I hope that I can delve into a poem or two of yours and see what other amazments you have  . But right now, I am thankful for God's revealing and. . .Im off to attemp to break my cycle of writers block
 . You'll see me again!!
Take Care and Keep Glorifying Him!!
~Elle Sancho
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I am humbly appreciative and thank you for your trust. I will do so 
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Hi- love your page and little dream. If it's not too much to ask, could you stop by and give me a Level Two comment of two? I'd appritiate it. 
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hey im ashley and im 15 i love the style of ur poems <3 how did u get ur backround like this..\
cheack out my poems my thingy is
take-the-bulletts
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Dear CookieZeal, I like your pillow tag poem - it struck a chord! We have recently gone 'green' in our household and no longer use chemicals etc, so we use pillows etc without fire retardent in. This means they are naturally (or have to be here in the uk) fire retardent, and made of a natural substance. My pillows no longer sport 'warning' tags.. But perhaps pillows over there have different warnings on? About smothering if you hold them too long over someones face? About them catching fire anyway if you hold them over a naked flame? About them breaking the washing machine if they are washed in a domestic machine? About not dry cleaning them so you don't die from dry cleaning chemical inhalation? I'm curious now! Funpum
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Do you have direction?
No one is accidental. As purposeful as
your feet are to stand, is your soul to seek
and experience the power of God, for He
is knowable. He's as much at your feet
as equally holding up the ceiling of heaven.
AMEN! I am a bible thumpin' pentecostal myself. I go to Abundant Life Fellowship in Roseville, California. Keep spreading the word of jesus, I guarantee that he will lead you to the living waters!
GOD BLESS
CARINO
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hey will you read my ltest poem please  ?
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Thank you for the ego boost.
And I hope I never see a poem like mine in a greeting card. Jaws will drops. Birds will fall from the sky. Young children might start wearing shoes. I dont think we need the chaos. Edited on May 19, 3:01 p.m. because 'mispelling'.
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Hi, you critiqued my poem "A Mother's Call." Please free free to critique any others. I really like detailed comments. You won't bruise my ego. It has already been bruised. Also I should state now that I developed my own style of poetry of mixing different types of poetry into one poem. Like rhyming one verse aaa,bb the a b a b, to free style verse to same syllable count. This seems to bother some people. I like to experiment with poetry.
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Hey! Congratulations on getting to 7,000 comments! I'm slowly making my way to 3,000... it's funny because everyone I knew when I first joined the site and had like 1,000 comments... I now have way more then them. I guess being a greeter really adds to getting a lot of comments, eh? Plus I guess I don't have any other life besides being on here so ya  God bless you, CZ. Thanks for everything you've been doing for me in the last couple of days
--Tim
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Justwanted to thank you for the comment on my poem. Yes i do play guitar. not very well though. and you read between the lines very well, it was based on a personal experience. 9 times out of 10 all my poems are. And again, thank you very much, im not too cocky of my own work and I wasnt really thrilled about posting
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Thanks for thinking of me sweetie, hope all is well in your neck of the wood, much love to you and yours!  -Timothy~
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i love ur creativity.ur writing is beautiful. i will like to have u as my friend ur good and i hope to be like u. write me at weightedsunny@yahoo.com
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Hello!!!
Just drop by to wish you a Happy Easter... I hope all is good with you...

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Hi Cookizeal...is your brother single? He's Cute..and U 2.
If you're to read my poems...you can use the 2nd Level...
I'm Glad to join you...
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 Ya think? lol thank you!
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i gotta go so just give me the info later.
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i'm back1  to you too!do you have a gaia or neopets usertname? if you do tellme. 
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you wanna know a weird thing?
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I like your author page it tells a lot about you and how you deal with poetry. If you come across my poetry and read it, please be honest. Any way that I can improve is a way forward to me and I except detailed critiques, that's the only way to learn. See you around 
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 Ok. I see.
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