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 Merci!
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oh pretty page..

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thi is very nice very very nice
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 U redid your page
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just thought id drop in so how is life treating you out there
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Thank you so much for your advice about my poem. Also thank you for featuring me even though I don't really know what that means considering I just joined this site a few minutes ago. Thanks
~Noelle
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I sure understand that!! lol.
It happens. Glad you go them. Thanks
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Your comments on my poems on Aug 20 must have slipped through the cracks... I only noteced them about 5 minutes ago. Thank you for your critique and marvelous support.
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Hey!!!!!!!!! 
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Kari on September 18, 2006
prounces on Aunties page.....myyyyyyyy auntie I'm not sharing u at all! lol
Love ya muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Hi cookie. I got banned from the chat for spamming but I got a warning and i stopped the mod said it's ok just dont do it again. So I was like ok and i stopped. Next thing I know I'm banned! Can you talk to the "leader mod" for me?
luv,
Jj
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hi. Plz come to the chat. it's me chayennekimball or jayde devil. plz come to the chat room cause ppl are being like really mean to me. Just come to give me a little incouragement plz.
luv ya girl,
Willow 
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Kari on September 13, 2006
Auntie Im me when you can...I hope your doing ok!
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Kari on September 11, 2006
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Kari on September 11, 2006
auntie you'll need to give me the link again lol I lost it lmao I tried to go through all my Im's but I have to many lol cough Lol 
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Kari on September 10, 2006
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Beautiful  you are!

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Kari on September 8, 2006
 I luvvvvvv u auntie very very very much!!! 
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hi cookie be my fwiend? I'm 11 and need comments srry to promote. I dont meen to. really. Just be my fwiend plz.
~Jj~
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catz on September 6, 2006
that's right, Dianne... if it wasn't Kari and it wasn't me.. it must have been you
But love ya anyway...lol
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Kari on September 6, 2006
your fault  not ours and u already know what u did! 
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hey Di, I saw you in the book Tokens and wanted to commend you for your talent of the Lord to share his Love with us all.
If every you choose to visit my page for a critic I would enjoy the Level 2 to see if I need a rework of things.
God bless you today in all you do.
Love,
 Tamara
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awwh..How kind!
Thank you. They're not my personal pets. Outside our city, there is a country orchard who keeps them! 
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you are so pretty I love your animals.
~Jj~
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Kari on September 2, 2006
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Ahh, just figured out how to work things on this site.
Thank you so much, :]
I edited it like you told me to, and it looks much better.
I'm not to sure if this will stay as is, I wanted to take it and make it a story. I just don't know where it will take me or how far I can take it.
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of course I do...

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awhhhhhhhhhhh...reAALLY? Kristy..thank you! I mean it. How kind!
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ZOWIE!!!! You cameth! How are you??
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Your'e as beautiful as ever, dear Cookie. Miss the site and you!
Eventful year...
Hugs.
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prounces on big sisters page and takes off 
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noper I meant nere u can say never means the same thing nere to me just seems so much more um classy I have no idea why it's from something I heard in Shakespear <3
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"I have been informed of love as complex emotion
simple words can nere compare to divinity apart
that which I experience lies beyond possible comprehension" Do you think this sounds better?
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"'yet have pondered at this standard words worth'-
the subject gets a bit jumbled and I'm not sure about
the verb being used." <<<<
er are you speaking of the subject in that statement or the poem itself? The verb I easily assume is "pondered". I find it hard to understand how I can be good at poetry and bad with the standard rules of english....sorry for all the comments by the way ....lol I am a very talkative person <3
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P.S.S. er I think I did mean to put complex twice....*thinks back* taha oh yes I did because "I have been informed of love as complex emotion
yet have pondered at this standard words worth
that which I experience lies beyond complex comprehension" er I wanted to make it certain the reader would know I was refering to comprehention pertaining to love and since I had refered to it as a "complex" emotion I felt sayin complex again would reflect the mind back to the previous statement to make an easier connection. hm..Maybe I think too much huh? taha. <3 *Jo*
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hm....I actually really HIGHLY dislike punctuation, but I was trying to try something new lol. I liked it when my friend did it, but I dunno I am usually content with just my .'s lol. <3 *Jo* P.S. I can try to edit it but I will have to look up something or um something? lol so I know how.
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daaaa Your so nice but you confused me I am 16 and although I am very intelligent for my age I fear that since I have just begun writing poetry in styles this week I am a bit low on my poetry lingo so I am not sure if I will compeltely understand your critiques although I will try my best. <3 Thank you for your sweet comments I am glad that people appreciate my poetry and have contructive critisism <3 *Jo*
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thankyou for all your comments on my work. It really makes me happy to know my poetry and lyrics aren't that bad...lol
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I want to thank you for being a sweet greeter and for talking to us in the chatterbox. That is very special to the members and I thank you for that.
Kari
Your a wonderful greeter!
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Jumps on just cause I am looking to get in some trouble today...hmm none here yet...sigh ok jumps off 
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Greetings, there was errors within my poem.
Read it again.
thanks for your comments.
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Apologetics research. What is that? Green name means a greeter?
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