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if you wouldnt mind i would love a critique from you. anything to help me improve as i hope to one day be published.
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Reading you...Blows a hole in my imagination!
Ever write, Poetess.
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Kastor : Cookie! on October 20
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Thank you for all your help and positive comments and getting me started once I get to Il I will have no computer but can get together through cathy or phone
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campanaro : Absoluetly love your page on June 10
Hello and thanks for making my visit pleasant
and inspiring.
Take care
Love Peace
campanaro
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Hey Beautiful,
I was thinking about you today and thought I would come and see how you are doing. I hope that you are well in every aspect of yourl ife.
sending love,
Criss
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You've been a Greeter as long as I've been a member. Actually, I think longer than I've been a member. Does AllPoetry still have the life time memberships? I wish I'd gotten one when $150 in 2003. I wasn't Pay Pal savvy then. How much are life time memberships now or does AllPoetry even have them now?  Thank you 
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Good morning & hoping you have a great mum's day
 xxx mia
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thanks for the critque on my last piece for Hummingbirds. yeah I needed all of it!
good to see you, I am at the library these days once or twice a week.
take care
love
Tamara
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I wrote a book that i hope to get published and I need someone to prologue it for me. Would you mind helping? BTW You sound like a great Christian Woman. I used to go to Grace and Mercy Outreach in Evensville Indianna. My sister Amanda lives there. Please message me back. My actual e-mail is snyder_candt@yahoo.com
Thanks so much! God Bless! I am having a hard time messaging you through all poetry.
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*wonders who you're are*
Either way cookies are delicious!
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or coming..  I cant spell!
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Coing to send you a hello my friend.. I hope that life is treating you well 
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yours till niagra falls - rosalie
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jacantina : I'm a novice and new at the site on February 20
I can't say yet, n.o reading or reviews
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About the rhyming and non-rhyming lines, there really isn't a purpose. I was intending to make it a free verse poem, but I love rhymes so much and couldn't help adding some. Thank you for your review, by the way! It was much appreciated.  Have a lovely day!
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I just wrote my first 2 poems, pretty much ever, so i dont expect them to be good, and put them on my page so i would like you to comment them and tell me what you think. You can be as tough as you please.
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I have just written my first poem (in 20 years,Or so). and have posted it on my site. Of course I would appreciat your comments on content and style,(be as brutal as you wish, don't spare my Ego, which could do with a good spanking anyway,LOL) Having no idea how to promote it I would like your advice. I have earned a few points and understand that they can be used to promote this poem, but I have no idea how to do that. I love your page, particularly the introductory poem. When I get more time I will be looking more closely at your work. Any advice or help you can give will be appreciated
Regards David
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Kari on December 25, 2008
Merry Christmas! 
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MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!
-Pettirosso
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"If pain doesn't drive us
to the highest level of change,
it didn't hurt enough." Me
I believe this... I always say something similar to this.... if the pain does not move you forward and teach you a lesson, it didnt hurt enough... I like yours better
p.s. Hi!!!
Criss
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I just noticed you are in the group " Proudly made in Lebanon", my little Sweet Pea Nour runs that group.
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Hi CookieZeal  Guess what? You’ve been ambushed! The group, ‘The Poetic Bandits’ do something called Hood-Wink, where we all come together with a chosen poet and comment on their poetry. You are our chosen poet, and it’s very exciting right now, because this is our 100th Hood-Wink and we are celebrating by commenting on your poetry. Hope you were encouraged by this and found it to be a blessing. Keep up the great writing and thank you for your contributions through poetry and the great job you do as a greeter on this site
All the best...
-LilacThOughts-, Haiku-bless-you and Polaja ~(Group Leaders of The Poetic Bandits)~ and all Bandit members
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Your poetry is exquisite, your spiritual writing is wonderful. I am adding you to my favorite list so that I may be blessed by future reading of your poetry. Thank you for being a shinning light of love and truth here at AllPoetry.  God Bless!
Dennis 
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LionessK : is it tomorrow yet? on October 29, 2008
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Soft-Rain : Hello Cookie! on October 28, 2008
Thanks for signing my guestbook. I have a second site here also. You would probley know me better from there. As that is where i started and you were one of the fisrt people to comment on my maybe first or second writing.
So with that said you encouraged me to keep penning, now i have been here since Dec 07.
Oh! The name is " Beautifulflame ".
I will also enjoy reading your work also it has been awhile, glad we could catch up again.
  
~Lisa~
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how do i get a custom background on my page?
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Welcome to Cloud Eight! We hope you will enjoy it. 
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Sherry : :) on August 31, 2008
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Dear CookieZeal,
Thankyou very much for all your help, I truly appreciate it, it's very sweet of you 
If ever I can return the favour and help you with anything, please do not hesitate to ask me.
Best wishes,
Katie 
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Dear CookieZeal,
I noticed that you were one of the site's greeters, so I was wondering if I could ask you a question, please?
I really want to send some points to a friend of mine who also has an account on allpoetry. How do I do this?
Thank you so much for your time,
Katie 
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yeah sorry i just decided to read all of my comments today sorry although thanks
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Thinking of you and the sweetness of your heart. Love you. Hope all is well.  Joyce
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Leaving you love
Because I can

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I miss you!!
--Tim
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Sprite : Thanks~ on June 2, 2008
Whatever brought you to say that in my guest book, I thank you profusely! You are always so beautifully kind, and passionate in your faith too.  Joyce
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Hey beautiful,
guess who?
--Tim
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Hi.. I was just looking over your page... If you read my poems, I am looking for a level two critque as I do want to improve my skills. thanks!! hope you day is going well..
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I just wanted to thank you so much for the welcome and for your advice. I appreciate it. I have also read some of your work and it's wonderful! As to the comments, a level one would be fine because I'm not a serious writer- I just wanted a place where I could let out my thoughts and feelings- a sort of release. But anyways, thank you again for the welcome and looking forward to any future comments!
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good to visit with you, how is your family these days? this is what I wrote and shared with him I told you about. I asked him today how many children he had. He pretty new to the site and i don't even know his name other than his writing name which you will see on this piece.
Have a blessed day in all you do.

:Tamara
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