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Guestbook entries for Blue Eyed Skies

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  • slightlyFey on February 24, 2007
    so I hope you do not mind, after reading a few of your poems I am adding you as a favorite so I see as you add to your work. You put so much emotion in your words...well done in my opionion and do not put that pen down
    Michelle Fey
  • Blue Eyed Skies on August 30, 2006
    Hey, sorry it took me so long to reply. I really enjoyed some of the imagery you used in this piece, particularly the last five lines. The overall message is very powerful. One thing that I thought could benefit from a stronger word choice was the lines "Leaving me with the effects of
    A dialogue with the mirror." More specifically I was wondering if "impression" might work better than "effects", but then I'm not sure if that would change the meaning too much. I really like your take on things though, I'll definitely be perusing more of your work.
  • thestreets son on August 18, 2006
    I'm working on a poem. I want your feedback on it but keep in mind it's a work in progress


    When I thought myself small
    His stature made me feel shrunken;
    When I thought myself weak,
    His presence averted my eyes;
    When I thought my words a waste of breath
    His voice subdued mine into a
    whisper,
    Leaving me with the effects of
    A dialogue with the mirror.
    Only when no longer blinded
    by my reflection could I see
    Perched upon his robust body
    in between his gaping shoulders
    Lay the face of an infant.
  • thestreets son on August 18, 2006
    alot of my pieces aren't that good. I wish I could organize my poems into like a good and bad pile on this site.
  • Blue Eyed Skies on March 26, 2005
    Chrissie: I would be delighted if you showed it to your friend. I have endless respect and admiration for people like him, and give him thanks for sharing his incredible gifts from me. I'm so glad that you enjoy my writing, and I'm truly touched that you put me in your favourites. Peace. -Nicole
  • Magicvegan on March 26, 2005
    I have just read some of your work. Healer is really touching. Would it be OK for me to show it to a friend of mine, who is himself a healer, but could do with some upliftment himself at the moment? I have added you to my favourites. Your poems are lovely, Thank You.
    Love and Laughter, Chrissie x (Magicvegan)
  • tieed on March 22, 2005
    It was my pleasure to comment on your poem. You're very talented, i think i'm going to read some more of your works.
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