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Ted E Bare on May 22
Happy Memorial Day weekend and please be safe out there (I'm driving to my brothers and I don't want you to hit me...seriously, please be careful so I can see you here at a later time)
Ted E -
Ted E Bare on February 2Dropping by to leave a
on your face
Since it's been a long time I've been to this place
Take care as I hope to see you soon again
Hope you will find some rain my friend -
Clockwork on October 27, 2008Thanks for the comment on my poem.
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drumdog79 on August 20, 2008welcome to my favorites list.
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drumdog79 on August 20, 2008Oh yeah, about alliteration, I'm a huge fan of it. I believe it was in the intro to Robert Pinsky's translation of 'The Inferno' where he states how hard it is to keep thinkgs rhyming when translating from italian to english so he adopted a wide deffinition of rhyming which included alliteration. But I was a fan before reading that.
About my suggestion in Tomb of the Ultimatley Unknown; I think you used "my" twice in that line and changing it just made it flow a lil better and feel less repetitious. Feel free not to use my input (obviously), I am far from a perfect poet.
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Death of the Author on July 10, 2008Excellent choice of lyrics, if I may say so
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Death of the Author on July 1, 2008Just cos my muse has kicked the bucket, doesn't mean yours has to as well!!!!
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Rianna Bear on May 20, 2008dead cowgirl???
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Death of the Author on March 12, 2008I picked up a seashell
To illustrate my homelessness
But a crab crawled out of it
Making it useless - damn I love that!
I promise to catch up with your poetry when I am little less stressed with school work!
But NO!! The background. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
(It's cool - but bright red or purple is so...you!) -
Death of the Author on February 19, 2008No matter how many times I come to your page your background always manages to blind me o.O
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Ted E Bare on February 14, 2008If you're single, don't be sad.
Cupid's arrows broke and he feels bad.
He and I want you to know it's okay;
To celebrate and to have a Great Valentine's DAY!
Ted E Bare
PS: If you do have someone, that's good too
May your partner bring Valentine's of true! -
Slinky-milinky : Smurfs... on January 13, 2008i am afraid it is not smurf poetry tropheys!!!! if only...they are for doing the classes! haha. thanks for your amazing comments my darling ill be looking forward to reading some of your new work when i get a chance! xxx
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-LilacThOughts- : Ambushed! on January 10, 2008Hi BermudaHighway Guess what? You’ve been ambushed! All your friends here at ‘The Poetic Bandits’ have got together to Hood-Wink you and comment on your poetry. Hope you are encouraged by this and find it a blessing. Keep up the great writing and thank you for your contributions through poetry and your friendship to many in our group and on this site
All the best...
~Lilac
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DeletedProfile on December 9, 2007You know the Indie band Okkervil River? I just found them on Myspace. Very cool they are.
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BurmaShave : The total package. on December 2, 2007Why is this author great?
I can't think of anything not great about her, she has some of the most creative imagery in her work that I have ever read, and I must admit to hating her just a bit for being so young and talented. I just hope she remembers me someday when she is famous. -
Death of the Author on November 20, 2007You write fantastic poetry
Rhyme or free verse you can do both just as well
Your descriptions are amazing
Your titles are the best! They are...excellent. Most people who post on here don't even think about the title they put to a poem but it is evident you care as much for it as you do for the poem underneath.
You are a wonderful talent
You have already won many trophies
You should keep it up and I shall continue to read
Take care -
Slinky-milinky on November 12, 2007lol i just noticed your one year younger than me and you join one day after me...hehe (sorry just found that amusing )
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Slinky-milinky on November 12, 2007dude, ive just seen on ur myspace link that u like gogol bordello...and ur poems rock so im adding you as a fav enjoy my shinny presence xx
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Ted E Bare on November 12, 2007s and
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piccola on November 7, 2007A warm welcome from Poetic Bandits (clap clap clap)
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greyghost on October 18, 2007You're welcome little lady!
Awesome homepage!
Awesome poetry!
Signed:
Biker dude lol
Adam -
Random Thoughts on October 11, 2007Hey welcome to AP, you are a very talented and passionate poet, keep up the good work,
-Brenden
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