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shattered.heroine on November 25i loved your page and reading your story. im a current drug addict, and don't really plan on stopping, but your page made me stop and read.
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Noir mariposa...x on October 16I seem to be able to relate to most of the things you've written here =\
I'll be back to read your stuff later I do think.
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GotLilt on October 16I'm glad I read your page. You've been through a lot and I couldn't pass up reading about a guy who's pen name is my main
med. Because you have experienced pain, a bit of anger comes through in your brutal critiques. Be gentle. Some on here are newborns to poetry.
Hope to see you about and read some more of your poetry.
p.s. I'm not an addict, I only take Ativan
for inner ear attacks.
i'm a dizzy brunette(with a little help)
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Wo Shi Wo : hey on October 9what's up. i wanted to say hi
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L0sT-iN-ThOuGhT on June 2Whoah.....I wish I had time to read this...commenting so I can come back to it.
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Sheriff Chelsea on December 24, 2008I understand your addiction completely. I really have no advice, as I'm in the same positon you are- but I wish you all the strength to fight. If you ever want to talk to someone who knows what it's like, I'm here. You're never alone.
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Lucian Valcor on November 15, 2008wow now thats a bio page I admire you for opeing up so much of your life onto a page in the hopes of some day even teaching one person hey this is what happened to me and so you shouldnt do it , I liked your poem and so I decided to check out your page
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Sheli : SALUTATIONS on October 28, 2008having read 'leaving but never going', i went to the next poem, saw the title, scrolled down to see how long of a delight i felt sure awaited me, all i can say is from that glance i came over here and added you to favorites, i cannot wait to read many more, so, have a day that doesnt suck, and i will get back to your scarecrow poem, i have a scarecrow poem my ownself, its called crow-god, part 1 is levi's lament and 2 is ruby's wrath, check them out sometime if you want, that'd be cool
ok, coolness, glad i found your writing, asta la ding dong, dont get ate by ling kong!
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Kochibo on October 27, 2008Yikes, I read your bio, I also wish you hadn't had to go down that path. I pray that live is going better for you these days, and if it's not, I pray that it turns around soon.
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witchtruckerbass : no no no nono i try to make you go to rehab yoiu say no no no no on August 6, 2007suicidal person deppressed go to rehab
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Poetdontknowit : TWINS on June 27, 2007I've always heard that you have a twin somewhere. I think I have found mine, not in physical body, but in poetic mind!
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Whoochi on May 30, 2007Stopping by to give ya this
and this 
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Nola-999 : Hey! on May 4, 2007I am infatuated with the way you write. It’s so simplistic yet so flamboyantly powerful; there is a certain flow to it which makes it beam out. It’s rare, that I have honestly seen anyone write this way, and I’m not just saying this as a false sense of flattery or anything like that I mean every word I say. Kudos!!
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Manda Kathryn on April 29, 2007Not very common I stumble across such honest and real people, specially males when it concerns drug and alcohol addictions
I wanted to applaud you for being so honest about what you have been through and I think it is great you openly invite people with problems to talk to you so you may help them
Wonderful to see
I wish you luck in all your choices
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Child of an Angel on April 3, 2007Ok..so...I miss you so damn much it is driving me crazy. I swear, i thought drugs were addictive? No, Ativan is much worse than actual drugs. I feel...weird not having talked to you lately, very sad, and very lost. I need my happy dose of Max damn it I love you so much, and yet, I tell you everyday, but still, I dont think you understand it. Or believe me, MAx, you are one of the most important people in my life, you are my eerything, and I love you so much. Please dont ever leave me, I think I need you too much now. Ive become dependent on you
lol Great huh? Ok well I love you, enough emotional breakdown for today!
Always and Forever
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Whoochi on March 30, 2007~~~~~~~~Hey Pill Bug...whatcha know or don;t know??? And I love ya too!
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Child of an Angel on March 11, 2007
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Child of an Angel on March 11, 2007
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Child of an Angel : You know I love you right ? lol muahahahaha on March 5, 2007
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Whoochi on February 28, 2007Traipsing through your garden, oh, excuse me, did not mean to step on those little yellow pansies...Pardon me, purple tulips...oooppss..! Sorry, blue iris! lol
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Child of an Angel : AWE MAN on February 15, 2007Max, but i want the mean spirited smart ass back! I loved him
Nah just kidding
I know life has given you the worst possibly imagined, and I know all you are talking about on this page, but I also know you have and will earn the utmost respect from MANY because you pulled out of it. I am soo proud of you, you make my heart swell, and you are so lucky you are gay As If I care anyways huh? I love you so much, you wouldnt even begin to comprehend it. Thank you for pulling out of that and realizing what was soo wrong. Thank you for being my inspiration in life and always being there, even though you were hurting. Thank you so much. Your book deal should go on, because all you have been through is what people want to see, people just like us making it in the real world. Not some fancy rich spoiled brat buying their way through life with money, you bought your way up here with you life....sad. but true, I dont know where I am going with this, I just want you to know. I LOVE YOU SO DAMN MUCH! Dont ever forget me ok!
Love ALWAYS AND FOREVER
Your Angel
Emily
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lucy sky-diamond on February 10, 2007thank you very much for all the comments you have been leaving, and i would like you to know that all the poetry i have read by you so far i have enjoyed immensly. im very glad that you managed to survive your drug addiction; i had a friend who went through conflict with drugs, though not nearly on such a large scale, although i can not say i know how you must have felt. i just want to wish you the best of luck in the future, and that you will continue to write amazing poetry like you have done till now.
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xstitchedxclosex on May 9, 2006thanks for the comment, it made me feel special
your an amazing writer. keep writing and I'll keep reading! (I'm addicted to you Ativan)yeah I know, I'm a witty fool. Well, thanks again.
xxJunexx
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Child of an Angel on April 16, 2006OMG MAX GET A GRIP!!!!!! You know I and many more people know how amazing your writing is, so enough with the you suck bull shit lmao. I hope all is well in your end of the country. Wanted to dropa line and say hi. Love you and KEEP WRITING YOU ARE NOT A FAILURE!!!! Well Love you
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independentartist on March 27, 2006i have read all of your poems, and you are very talented, i know what it is like to be into pills and stuff ,because i do it too. my favorite poem of yours though is "I am Broken- Won't work-Cannot be fixed
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superdoug on March 22, 2006hi this is super super doug read some of your work very super
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StoneLion on March 12, 2006Just cruising around AP and ended up here. Congratulations on your being published that rocks.
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Stingersinger53 on March 7, 2006Hey you!!! Where have you been? I haven't talked to you in a while. Just thought I'd tell you I miss you! Hope to talk to you soon!!! Hugs & Kisses- Cayla
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Linda King CT-USA on February 28, 2006i talked to my mom...showed her what i wrote... she is going to call the hospital that is where her doctor is and see if he can get me in the ward... i took my prozac now... i know i will feel ill... but i had to do something. thanks for caring... i needed you all... i am gonna miss this group something fierce when i go to jail...
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grannyeri on February 28, 2006Congratulations on getting published. Bet that feels good. Saw where you'd checked out my No Tears poem, and wondered what you thought of it. Hope you are having a great day.
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Stingersinger53 on February 21, 2006Ativan! I have spent a while looking for you! So now I guess we're even! LOL, no really I saw you message and tried to click on you name but it wouldn't take me to your page it kept wanting to send you a IM and you wer not online, Sooo I had to go back through all my comments to find you. BUT now I will add you to my favorites list so I can get to you easier next time. Well now, Yes most of the time I am a nice person, but I do have my moments, LOL! And about all those poems of someone else, were they good? Should I be jealous? Have you cheated on me??? Did you give them all my smileys??? LOL Just kidding!! I'm glad you sent me a message, and I'm sorry you had the wrong person, but thats okay I'm sure you left them good advice. So if you get another hour or two :] come find my page and tell me what you think. And I DO want you to be honest!
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Stingersinger53 on February 20, 2006And I just read your comment dated april 19th. I don't understand why people would leave a "bad" comment if you've left one. Of course you left me a very postive comment on my poem you read but I'm sure if you read others of mine you would leave ME a "Bad" comment. But thats okay, I'm here to learn as well as write my poetry. This world is too full of people who THINK they are perfect. No one is and no one will ever be. When you start thinking that, is when you become the greatest failure of all. Everyone needs to keep their minds open and understand that something one person might like, someone else will hate. It's what makes us all individuals. with our own minds to think with. What a boring place this world would be if everyone were the same. So... keep reading .. and don't change your comments at all, good or bad. the people who don't like them can just delete them, but if they are smart they will read them, think about them and try to learn from them as I do!
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Stingersinger53 on February 19, 2006Thank you for the great comment you left on my poem "One moment"
I hope it wins the contest I wrote it for. And what does the MTB
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Jaded Lily on October 25, 2005
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sophonax on October 11, 2005Feel free to criticize away on my poems, I'm not so immature as to want to "get you back" if you don't like one or all of them... lol so pointless. I am always open to suggestions and corrections, and I had wondered why you were apologetic when you criticized my stuff. Now I know. And by the way I don't think your writing is bad, some of it could be improved but a lot is really good e.g. Splattered Sand. That really brought the emotions out well. Keep it up and never look down on yourself, you can acknowledge the fact that there are better people in the world than you at some things like e.g. tennis or rocket science, but that must never make your opinion of yourself change. Haha pretty preachy but its true. I had to learn that, and it's helped me immensely with my life.
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pointlessdayz on October 9, 2005where were you published??? and how can I get ahold of a copy??? and whats it called.... sorry, but I wanna know!!!!
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StarrieNacht on October 6, 2005Everyone can use improvement whether we acknowledge it or not. Sure no one likes hearing something isn't to a reader's liking, but that's tought I say. Just like everyone else you're entitled to express what you want whether it's consider "good". I always am I person who leaves a comment no matter what even if others don't feel to do so themselves. I like hearing what others have to say like how the write they read made them feel and such. Failing just isn't falling flat on your face it's like a latter that makes one a better person and molding them into something better then the next person...! Bah... Thinking too much as usual.
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lunatick on June 13, 2005Well, Max, that was a pretty deep thought, and I agree with you. I don't leave a lot of negative comments, and then again, I don't leave a lot of comments period. Although most of the "negative" comments I have gotten included that they were to help me become better, I still know what it's like to get just a dud, if you will. Anyway, I'm gonna go shower... enough of my pointless words... <.<
Later
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Ativan on April 19, 2005I'm posting this... well because I wanted to let this thought go somewhere but I didn't know where then I figured I'd put it here... I figured nobody would really read it but... it is really for my own self comfort I suppose....
You will see- if you are bored enough to read my comments- that if I am critical of somebody they will come back and be critical of me, not for any other reason than to be mean. I am not being arrogant- in all truth I do look down on myself. I believe my own poetry to be awful. I am bad at spelling, my flow does not work, the ideas are often not complete, they often are overdone, the rhyming pattern is sometimes bad- simplistic- if not completely missing the mark- well--- I only have a couple poems I think are any good--- but I guess that isn't even my point- I post my poems because I read them because I like them and I try to get better- a lot of comments are helpful. I hate more than anything when people I comment come back and do that... not because they are being mean to me *but* because I know that they thought what I said wasn't fair or just. I know that I made them feel somehow unfair about their poetry when they comment back on my poems. This often makes me wonder and many of my comment- have- no comment at all because sometimes I guess it does sting. I know I never like bad comments- there's always got to be a positive- but I do know they are being honest at least when I get some negative thoughts. I am no Walden or Webster for that matter. Yet, somewhere in this misconstrued thought I guess my point is that I and everybody else is vulnerable somewhere but it should not get the best of us. I think that is somewhere along the lines of what I am trying to say...
"True knowledge is knowing what we do not know," - Walden.
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ShadowStalker on April 18, 2005I won I won. Thank you soooooo much for choosing me!! Yeah!! I'm going to read sooo much of your poetry and I'm going to comment!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!
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A Deeper Blue on April 12, 2005If you like rhyming poetry you should check out my friend "Ghoest". Most of her stuff rhymes (I suck at rhyming
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Ayla YellowRose on April 12, 2005I would be most honored to join your group
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ShadowStalker on April 9, 2005I really liked your poems. I've been reading a few and I see you have a talent for poetry....
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Ayla YellowRose on April 9, 2005Hey I really like your stuff! I enjoy reading your work!
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Ativan on April 5, 2005my name is actually Max, and you are quite welcome... Most people don't write as well as you so it is somewhat of a relief to read something of value. No you didn't offend me- I was only kidding- I am gay but no no offended at all. I will eventually go back and look through some more of your stuff if you have anything else posted. I hope you write poems...
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YourSaviour on April 5, 2005Welcome To Desolace.. I hope it didn't offend you in anyway, overview to a book, sounds like a good idea. The very start of it, was actually in another piece of mine, which is probably why it doesn't flow quite that well. The piece is actually my version of a look at homophobia and homo/bisexuality, by straight out confronting the issues with a very short overview of one gay guy, and another guy's first gay experience and how this would change his life. Thanks again, Tim.
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YourSaviour on April 5, 2005That was one of the best comments i've ever had, thanks alot. Lawsuits just aren't fun though are they?. Thanks, Tim.
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Ativan on March 31, 2005hey visit Ativan's site at mtbook.hypermart.net/
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