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Will do, Quill! Will do! Thanks 
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glad to see you back ,keep the ladies at arms length, and this time stick around.
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Nah, I was living with a girl for awhile and never really had time to myself to write...Not quite alcatraz...Pretty much the same thing, though!
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yeah ive done a few, where you been alcatraz?
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Not bad. Not too bad at all. It seems you've added quite the poetic collection to your profile since the last time I was on here.
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Purple cow?!
Well...I never saw a purple cow either...but I did see one (black & white) at DisneyWorld with a Mickey Mouse logo on it...hope that helps
sVento
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Who but you would think of a flying porcupine?
That's a hoot. Reminds me of "I never saw a purple cow".
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Quill on December 12, 2005
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Quill on December 12, 2005
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okay, sweetie?...
I'd strongly urge you to renounce your membership and faith in the Church of S.P.D. (Swoons and Poetic Dental-floss). Just leave your confessional booth of a high-horse and take your ortho-tricyclen like a good little cunny-rack. Good. Now, bend over...yeees, like that...Oh! And watch where you aim that thing, you little squirter, you!...I just bought these sheets!
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I am surprised that I made you cry...I haven't done that to anyone since middle school.
As for me not having any feelings and being a mean asshole, you were the one who started this little fray between the two of us about a month and a half ago, fucker!...you wrote the same kind of cruel review about one of my most personal poems.
My recent barbs towards you in your poems had nothing to do with making light of the fact that you are a shitty writer and that I need you to inflate my ego...it was revenge! When I saw your poem on the featured list (just like mine had been when you insulted it 6 weeks ago) I figured you needed a taste of your own medicine! I'm not sorry because judging by some other poet's angry comments towards your harsh lack of tact, I have a hard time feeling sympathy if you get a harsh taste of your own "Roastmaster" medicine!
Soo...Yeah! Go ahead and cry about it, NAK, you earned it!
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you suck at insults, too, so you might wanna back off on the compliments to yourself, it may effect the sex life that you probably dont, and never will have. just some advice, which you probably wont take, either. fucker.
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you made me cry you fucking jerk, why do u have to be so cruel? what did i ever do to you? dont you have any feelings or are you just a mean asshole that goes around picking on people who arent as ingenius as you at writing? just becuase i suck at writing doesnt mean you can compare it to yours and call yourself good. im sorry, but i will not be used to sustain your ego. fuck off. u really hurt my feelings this time.
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That Birthday Spring & Summer's glee both fell to Autumn pride
and when they died, the Winter chose to run away and hide.
The eighteenth saw the ashes of Valero's Damned ignite
when Autumn dawns, I'm still a Pawn to mid-September's might!
With Winter gone, I am a Pawn to Bexar's fallen Knight!
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it's zac again email or call me 757 270 0581 bynx_730@yahoo.com
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HOla Brady. This is you're long lost friend Zac. Where are you and what has become of you. It took me forever to find you. I'm still in virginia beach. Call me at 757 270 0581 and ask for me, email me at Bynx_730@yahoo.com or go to myspace and look for me. I hope you get this. By the way thanks for giving me credit on our comic idea. I've become a much better artist and i can see you've gotten a lot better at writing. Let's pick up where we left off. I miss you man. Contact me biotch.
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Hey, you commented on my poem "The Creation of Love and Peace Through.....". The title of that poem was making fun of someone who posted about the contest. The contest topic was "Creation Through Destruction". It was pretty much write about anything. Someone suggested a topic, The creation of love and peace through.... That poem was about weeding out everything bad, therefore weeding out everyone except newborn children. Thanks for the comment.
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hey..i know i am a little ( ok alot) late getting back to you on this, but since you wrote a poem for my "big words" contest and didnt get to enter ...let me read it and ill give you some points just for being brave enough to write it. 
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Oops...uh, nope...  Just an alias 
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Its just boring...so you're gonna go through with your plan then?...Seattle sure beats the hell out of San Antone! 
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almost got my associates degree, moving to seattle soon, i'm decent  why does your summer suck?
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Oh, my bad! I must have accidentally overlooked your comment...sorry  . Yeah, I got a B in that class too!
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I got a B in the class... you?
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Yes I turned in the paper on that guy, I haven't seen a grade posted for that class or my History class, has me a bit scared...
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you've got some nice poems though...
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 . HI i like ur wrk~!~!
just thought id let u know~!
Lorren 
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it WAS him lol, i noticed him eating his snot in class, it was disgusting, man who wouldthink of seeing that in college eh?
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Hello, just returning your message. and for what you said about strict measure and whatnot for poetry, it doesn't make it more emotional, just different usually. It lets you have words play upon eachother better, more intellectual like, but i think things that are written as they are thought have more raw emotion, but thats just me.
-Cecilia
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hey josh. Yeah, I changed it a week or two ago. Oh, and you can IM me that piece you've written whenever you want...nobody but me will read it, and I do look forward to doing so, btw  ! How's your job going?
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Since when are you svento's cruTCh, anyway?
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Que' pasa Quill? How've you been?
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Brady(if I may), I just had to stop here & say once again...THANK YOU for sharing so much of yourself with me,tonight. I needed a break from my world,so glad I found yours
 Deena
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Hey! I have a new contest. http://allpoetry.com/Contest/1214799
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Thanks for your comments..I am wiothdrawing from Allpoetry, and I wish you success and happiness........
Robert Fullerton
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I'm afraid I don't understand just what you want..I apologize for that. Just omit my poem from your contest if you care to..I will enter another when I grasp wht is expected of me.. I do thank you for your interest, and I wish you well..Peace to You and Yours............Bob
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Thanx for the advice...I'll try and ask a moderator or something...
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I have begun to work on it now, you will see it soon! 
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You have some very good points about free-form vs. structured poetry. But I love free form, honestly--I loved free-form before it was a popular-ansty-teenage form. Yes, it CAN be where you just throw a bunch of cool-sounding emotional words together...but for it to be GOOD, there's a rhythm, a flow to it. Good free form just has a current that grabs you and drags you along, relentless to the end...in my opinion, at least, lol.
Structured poetry is more of a challenge to write, but it doesn't usually satisfy me--possibly because my poor attempts at it almost always come out sounding childishly simple. *sigh* Ah well, to each their own, right?
Anyway, I'm done babbling now, off to read some of your work...hope to see your entry in my contest soon!!
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Brady: Thank you for commenting on my sonnet sequence. I see by your page that you are into sonnets and haikus, so this form would be just perfect for you to test the waters with. I am busy writing a term paper right now, but promise to take a much longer peek into your library on Saturday when I devot my day to just reading poetry and commenting here, so I will be reading some of these treasures you have hidden here. Best writing to you, from your front page here I can hardly wait for saturday to roll around, I have bookmarked your page so I can find you easier. Gregg 
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Nah, I wish I could draw like that, but whenever I come across a good picture(especially one of Zelda or Link), I save it to my computer. I'm in the prewriting stages right now for a Zelda screenplay. I know, most people I've talked to who know anything about either writing screenplays or The Legend of Zelda tell me that it is not a good idea to do so, because it would be so hard to write one that is interesting and intriging enough to be filmed. But that's what I like about it, it is a great challenge, and if I were to write a good Zelda script and it were made into a good movie(good scripts and good movies are two very different things!)imagine how many fans like yourself would want to go see it! (but writing screenplays is actually more like poetry than writing novels cause of the imagery needed to film them. Most people think it's the other way around, but scripts have to be "shootable" as they say, and most novels are dictated, and thus not "shootable".)
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cha, i love zelda. i really like that picture... did you draw it?
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Thanks for adding me to your group, and yes, this is a picture of Zelda and Link....You like?
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