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Jamais Oublier on June 8, 2007

ello live!
um.....
Shakari on August 23, 2006

Hey, I am sorry, but you are on my favorites list and I thought that you might've had your name changed. Otherwise, I love the name....just don't recognize you. That might also be because I just got back from like.....a month or two of being gone.
Alice Anesthetized on July 28, 2006

bla
Jamais Oublier on June 15, 2006

RAWR!
ur a monster.......
FirstScript on June 4, 2006

Oh well... I thought I"d drop in and let you know what a sestina is ...
Sestina

The sestina is a strict ordered form of poetry, dating back to twelfth century French troubadours. It
consists of six six-line (sestets) stanzas followed by a three-line envoy. Rather than use a rhyme
scheme, the six ending words of the first stanza are repeated as the ending words of the other five
stanzas in a set pattern. The envoy uses two of the ending words per line, again in a set pattern.

First stanza, ..1 ..2 ..3 ..4 ..5 ..6
Second stanza, ..6 ..1 ..5 .. 2 ..4 ..3
Third stanza, ..3 ..6 ..4 ..1 ..2 ..5
Fourth stanza, ..5 ..3 ..2 ..6 ..1 ..4
Fifth stanza, ..4 ..5 ..1 ..3 ..6 ..2
Sixth stanza, ..2 ..4 ..6 ..5 ..3 ..1

Concluding tercet:
middle of first line ..2, end of first line ..5
middle of second line ..4, end of second line..3
middle if third line ..6, end of third line ..1

It's my favourite form, and I hope this explains the multiple use of certain words in my poem... Thanks for the comment though
Poetic Memory on May 13, 2006

hello aunty eel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pink Absinthe on April 4, 2006

tanx, srry if ive forgotten u but my heads in a mash wit AP mates n der names!!!!!! whos dis again? nice page n tanx 4 d comment, n srry 4 my stupidity me so silly!
Alice Anesthetized on March 2, 2006

if what was weird?
come again?
on March 2, 2006

sorry if that was weird .
scorpanther on March 1, 2006

Thank you very much for all your wonderful comments on my work
Jamais Oublier on February 26, 2006

Live. i hate the picture on my page.... and i was wondering if u could put a different one on there for me. if u want, my password is the same as my myspace one. i got wasted with Katie Padilla and Chelsea this weekend. i'll tell u about it later. luvs much! and alison is sick...
on February 25, 2006

nice page!!!!
Alice Anesthetized on February 18, 2006

hey you should enter my contest. that would be cool.
TeskoSuicide98 on February 18, 2006

I love your author page. The Distillers rock. And so doesn't Panic! At The Disco. That's radtasic <3
Alice Anesthetized on February 11, 2006

ello ello. whats up?
Grungie5 on February 11, 2006

Hi!
Alice Anesthetized on February 11, 2006

Emo at the disco?
Um. yeah. they're awesome.
emo the hero on February 10, 2006

P!ATD RULES!!!!!!!!!

emo! at the disco
Panic! at the disco=love
Alice Anesthetized on February 6, 2006

Wow thankyou ma'am.
Thats quite the compliment.
abstruse on February 6, 2006

Thank you for all the lovely comments. It means more coming from an awesome poet such as yourself. :]
Alice Anesthetized on January 25, 2006

I used to.
But now I'm into all sorts of other music.
Mostly... The Academy is... fun music. And grunge/punk.
Metal still rules the world though.
inspiteofangels3 on January 25, 2006

ahhh
well, if you like death metal
black dahlia murder ownz
Alice Anesthetized on January 24, 2006

Not really.
My Black Dahlia is a song by Hollywood Undead.
And I looove it.
:} Your name reminds me of someone that goes to my school. I think her name is Sam.
inspiteofangels3 on January 24, 2006

i see your name.. do you happen to like the black dahlia murder?

lolz i dont know..
just wondering
Jamais Oublier on January 16, 2006

sis sis! shame on you! i've changed my name after 2dollars4sale. and you still haven't changed it. oh well. now you can. Anya picked this name so don't ask. luvs much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xoxox dust
Alice Anesthetized on December 30, 2005

My Christmas was excellent. I got a record player!
Ahhh, I see.
I'm pretty good actually, I think my ex and I are going to get back together after much deliberation. [I'm switching schools . and I crushed his heart not once but twice already.] But all is well in the kingdom of Live.
How are things in your kingdom?
♥
on December 29, 2005

hi! i know i haven't written anything in like forever! i need to be in a writing mood or else they don't turn out well. i wrote one for my bf but i didn't put it on here. hehe. i don't know when i'll write something though. maybe soon. anyways how are you? and how was your christmas?!
♥
Alice Anesthetized on December 29, 2005

um um um OK!!!!
Grungie5 on December 28, 2005

LIVE! I'M SO SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED ON YOUR POETRY
MY AP BROTHER STOPPED BEING MY BROTHER AND MY FRIEND. AND I'M OFF HIS FAVORITES LIST AND BLOCKED FROM HIM JUST CAUSE I WOULDN'T SAY I LOVE HIM. I'm so sad.
I LOVE YOU AND DYEI...
and it is easier for me to say that to you cause your girls.
please be my other best ap friend.
on December 22, 2005

Hey sis I missed you > <s and stuff missed you

Mortikie 4 U
Alice Anesthetized on December 11, 2005

me neither.
Grungie5 on December 9, 2005

You're Live!
I havent seen you forever.
Wesley Storer on December 9, 2005

Merry Christmas and strike it rich in 2006.
Alice Anesthetized on December 5, 2005

you're welcoooommmeee!!!!!!
LOVEYA.
Jamais Oublier on December 5, 2005

hey sis sis!!!!! AHH!!!!!! s THANK YOU!!!!!! for putting my pic up. laters! luv ya!
♥ dyei
AnimalYeah101 on December 3, 2005

rocknroll queen. please give a qoute for your contest, I love rock n' roll mealte and grundge, especially Nirvana thanx,
KDB
Jamais Oublier on November 25, 2005

hey sis! god how i miss you!!! ah! bleck. just droppin' by to ask how thanksgiving was. mine... was weird. i cooked and cleaned for hours, stuffed my face with fruit salad, and slept. laters hun! hope things went well for ya!
♥ dyei
nightman on November 23, 2005

hey sorry but forgot tp put the opion # in the authors comment so here it is 3 and uumm this "chemical chemical"
DarkenedAuras on November 19, 2005

Hi I saw where you wanted people to leave their poem links on here if they would like them read so here are a few I would like read more if you want to (no pressure though):

allpoetry.com/poem/1501699
[Suicidal Depression]

allpoetry.com/poem/1512941
[Nightmare]

allpoetry.com/poem/1516946
[The Little Girl With Long Black Hair]

allpoetry.com/poem/1518779
[Powder]

allpoetry.com/poem/1521922
[The Big Death Tonight (Song)]

allpoetry.com/poem/1529200
[Murderous Temptress]

allpoetry.com/poem/1535465
[Evil Ghost]

allpoetry.com/poem/1550516
[Don't Go To Hollow Springs]

allpoetry.com/poem/1581377
[The Rain~]

allpoetry.com/poem/1592286
[Two-Tone (R.I.P.)]

allpoetry.com/poem/1598980
[Freddy Vs. Jason]

allpoetry.com/poem/1601164
[Fate's Destination]

allpoetry.com/poem/1628628
[A Night At Midnight Run]

allpoetry.com/poem/1636133
[Bleed Like Me]

allpoetry.com/poem/1639724
[Cast of All My Children]

I know there's is a lot but you can pick just one or read them all or just have them there if you want to maybe read one a week or something...they are just ones I want to know what people think on them
Alice Anesthetized on November 19, 2005

Donnie was pretty thin too. but he had some squishyness. which was awesome and just fine. now he's like anorexic looking almost.
looking at him now... I rarely see him. but i think he's getting better.
maybe. he hasn't changed at all. and says that he hasn't dated since moving.
fucking dedicated. He told my best friend (who moved with him to take care of him for me) Veralidaine that he was going to kill himself when I started dating again... so I haven't really had enough guts to try and really have a serious relationship again.
likeavirus on November 19, 2005

Yeah. Drew lost a lot of weight, and he was thin to begin with. He's over 6ft tall...and so skinny now.

His face looks so sad, especially when he looks at me.

I told him to lose my number and lose my address. He just said, "no."

He wont let go...but I'm gonna fall if I keep holding on.
Alice Anesthetized on November 19, 2005

we both want to get back together. But Maine is a long fucking ways away... its heartwrenching isn't it? He used to be so beautiful to me, but now he's so dead looking. hollow. not like he was. Other people think he looks better, thinner. yeah and paler and sad. ug.
Heroin sucks.
likeavirus on November 19, 2005

That's how I think things will be for us. We'll always love each other, but I guess it just wasn't meant to work out. I think we taught each other a lot. When we were both sober...things were great. When I was the only one sober- it was hell. I'm almost 21 and he's almost 22.
Alice Anesthetized on November 19, 2005

wow. that blows. I never really let go of my guy. We still talk. but he moved across the country to get help. I'm only 15 now almost 16... now he's 17. He's not lived with his parents since age 12. lived with a 'big' brother. whos only 2 years older. I'm in foster care, we were meant to be... that kinda shit. we still love eachother. but we'll never be back together.
likeavirus on November 19, 2005

Thanks for your comment. He's relapsed three times since we've been together, and this last time he had sex with her while he was high on heroine. I have never relapsed...and it hurt really bad to watch someone I loved doing that to themselves. If you want, you should check out "Jack Daniels." I wrote that after he came back this last time...before I knew he'd slept with her.
on November 7, 2005

SIS!!!!! im back i got a new computer hehe im so happy except my babie isn on here well ya so how have you been i like the name
on November 7, 2005

SIS!!!!! im back i got a new computer hehe im so happy except mt babie isn on here well ya so how have you been i like the name
on November 5, 2005

lol well i'm glad you had fun! sounds like it would be...hehe
on November 5, 2005

hey i'm alright i just got home...i walked like 4 miles with my friend. it was fun. what have you been up to? ♥
Yahiko on October 30, 2005

hey I'll be ur AP mom (saw ur post)

~Yahiko~
I luv u!

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