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The.poet.of.hearts on October 23Assalam o Alaikum
I'm Collecting and Gathering Urdu, Hindhi, And Arabic Writers and Poets and Readers Here at
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/Urdu%20And%20Hindhi%20Writers%20and%20Readers
I was awarded by a group but now I'm changing the theme and background of this group..
first time ever, I'm bringing some change at AP for all of Us..
For Pakistanis, For Indians and For Sub Continent Friends and Mates.
Love for All~
Please Join Me, I have spent my four years at AP.. and AP has no good Strength of We Pakistanis And We Indians
I'm a Pakistani but My Mother land is in India and My Forefathers Belongs to India.
Also, I'm a Memon. So I have no Country to represent myself,. but I'm Global Person.. but I live and Die With My Country, With Urdu and With Languages
Please, come and join me and bring your those friends as well, whom I don't know
Allah Nigehbaan
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Prodigy : Hey there on March 11, 2008I don't think I ever wrote on your page. Or did I? My memory fails me. Anyway I hadn't visited AP for some time so as long as I can stay, I've decided to visit around and read and comment, lest the AP flame dies forever. You're welcome to review my poems all the time, even if they suck hehe. Take care.
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Iana on August 29, 2006Dear Ahkam,
You misinterpreted what I said. I do not think that love comes with force. What I meant to say is that love cannot be held by force. It is appreciated when love is accepted by the other party if there is a freedom of the two lovers (husband and wife)
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Skawe on February 4, 2006hey, how is everything? i never really thanked you for that wonderful poem you left on my page, so THANK YOU! lol. and now i've decided to return the favor. and this is actually posted on my front page (because im lame like that). but i absolutely love this poem, Goethe is such a beautiful poet...
was unterschiedet
Goetter von menchen?
Dass viele wellen
Vor jenen wandeln
Ein ewiger strom
Uns hebt die welle
Und wir versinken
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What is the difference
Between Gods and Humans
That many waves before each
From an eternal stream
The waves lift us up;
The waves overcome us,
And we are swept away.
-Goethe
well, thanks again! and i hope all is well
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gothchyld on January 27, 2006Ahkam, YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
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gothchyld on December 29, 2005Perhaps I should pursue philosophical studies where one can always voice their pessimistic views on society. I suppose love is your source of energy to think; but mine would be simply being an observor on the lonesome streets.
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gothchyld on December 11, 2005Thank you for your compliments. Indeed, sometimes society changes so much that you wonder if there is anything absolute..at least we can still retain our paradigms that way. Currently Romeo & Juliet's romantic essences have disappeared as two people committed suicide due to the consequences of lust here. I guess...we really need to evaluate our society and that there is much to be done. Is it the same in your country?
By the way, you are a great poet..YOU NEED TO UPDATE! I am running out of poems to critique. -
BluexxEyes19 on December 25, 2004Thank you very much for your kind words and I wish you well!
Megan -
Diamond on December 23, 2004Thankyou Ahkam and I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a blessed New Year!
Avril -
gothchyld on December 3, 2004hey thanks for the translations. The moon does look nice today. Hope you are over depression if it is 'unnecessary'. But it can be necessary, like deprsesion is just a vital part of me. Anyways, long live depression.
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rufina caraid on October 24, 2004oldpoetry.com/poetry/24938
oldpoetry.com/poetry/24875
Ahkam - I need to ask you a favour. the two poems (links above) could you please tell me if their format/language is correct.
I would appreciate your help on this very much.
Thank You
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Shanny Snyder on October 14, 2004yeah i love that quote too! daria is the main character of an old TV show that used to air on MTV but got taken off the air. no it airs on "The N". my favorite show ever! lol.
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Shanny Snyder on October 13, 2004thanks for your comments on my poem, and thanks for the applaud!
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BluexxEyes19 on October 11, 2004I am not sad....I just haven't been inspired lately to write anything and if I have it's not my usual, I admit....but thank you for the beautiful poem and your concern. This may be what I need to write something "me"....
Megan -
BluexxEyes19 on August 5, 2004Thank you so much for your applause and your comment! I really appreciate it!
Megan -
BluexxEyes19 on May 11, 2004Hi Ahkam! (Do you have a name? ) I just wanted to stop by and thank you for your comments. They are so upbuilding to me and I would love to read some new stuff from you so I can comment as well. Thank you again!
Megan -
philophant on February 5, 2004Hi Professor
Any new madness coming? 
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phatalvision on January 8, 2004Hi I see you are from Pakistan. I think it is great how we can gather from around the world to share our poetry. I am impressed by those who can write poetry in a second (and sometimes third) language. It is a task just doing it in my one and only language!
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nokiddin08 on December 18, 2003hi how r u?
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Ahkam on December 13, 2003Hye! Dear! Hope u r fine, m fine 2. have a wonderful piece of tranquility by Alxander Pushkin.
“I thought you had forgotten, heart,
Your ability to suffer pain.
That easy gift would come, I thought,
No more again! No more again!
Gone were the raptures and the griefs
And the dreams you half-believed. . .
But now I know, while beauty lives
so long will live my power to grieve.”
Oh! That’s it.
Have a nice time.
Ur well wisher,
Ahkam. -
Ahkam on December 6, 2003I know Urdu , english ,and to some extent persian & arabic but my native is urdu.
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philophant on December 6, 2003dear Mr. Ahkam,
do you speak French and Arabic? if so, have you written any poems besides in English?
philophant -
Ahkam on December 6, 2003Dear Rosi ! Hello!
Hope u having a nice time
Well good lady though I am not some poet of a type u my expect but one thing is common in both of us the we love the classic literature to the level of madness
I am sending you one of my poems for your kind remarks.
“I Am All Alone”
Though I was not the one,
A perfect match for you,
I loved you for my own sake,
It’s altogether true.
Well, let me put it straight___ ,
My love was extempore,
I couldn’t see and wait___ ,
A couldn’t love you more.
My days are now numbered,
My dreams of you are gone,
My love is your companion,
But I am all alone !
By: Qazi Mohammad Ahkam,
E-mail. qaziahkam@hotmail.com
Hy! Do you like haikus , well I love haikus
Here is one of my own , I mean composed by me
“ I am alone___ ,
where is the God?
My only companion”
I love basho___ the father of haiku
Have one by basho:
“Winter rain
falls on the cow-shed;
a cock crows.”
Have some more!
How very noble!
One who finds no satori
in the lightning-flash
Breakfast enjoyed
in the fine company of
morning glories
Traveling this high
mountain trail, delighted
by violets
I have a good no. Of basho’s haikus
Hope u well also like it.
Take care,
Your well wisher,
Ahkam
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philophant on December 6, 2003Dear Mr. Ahkam,
That's a very beautiful sweet poem of yours. Do you know how to post poems? All you must do is click the little 'add' button, and type your poem into it. You can put your poem in a contest if you like, and if you win, you can get points. Do you have any other poems in French or in Arabic? If so I'd like to see them.
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Ahkam on December 6, 2003Dear whatever! Hello!
Thanks a lot, you being a great help to get me out of this dilemma
I am much obliged for your kind consideration
Secondly, I am an immature in poetry,
I love the classic poetry rather the classic literature to the level of madness but m not capable of composing any good verses
Kindly guide me in this regard as well
I m sending u one of my poems for your kind consideration,
“I Am All Alone”
Though I was not the one,
A perfect match for you,
I loved you for my own sake,
It’s altogether true.
Well, let me put it straight___ ,
My love was extempore,
I couldn’t see and wait___ ,
A couldn’t love you more.
My days are now numbered,
My dreams of you are gone,
My love is your companion,
But I am all alone !
By: Qazi Mohammad Ahkam,
E-mail. qaziahkam@hotmail.com
Moreover, its really surprising that you are a Girl
Well, even then I proudly pronounce, “I Love you” because you love pushkin, also m grateful for showing me ur real identity
Thanks allot,
Your well wisher,
Ahkam -
RoseBlossom on December 2, 2003Lol, that's ok, I meant are you going to post any poetry or anything?
I love the poem, it's beautiful
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philophant on December 2, 2003hello.
here is another english translation of this poem:
"Oh, I have loved you, and perhaps my spirit
Still harbours a warm glow of love today.
But God forbid that you be burdened with it;
I would not sadden you in any way.
I loved you in a wordless, hopeless fashion,
Sometimes in jealous rage, sometimes struck dumb.
I loved you with a deep and tender passion.
May you be loved like this in years to come."
and here is another translation:
"I loved you: love may not have died
Completely in my soul,
But don't let it disturb you,
I don't wish you any pain.
I loved you without hope or voice,
With diffidence, jealousy,
As tenderly, truly, as God grant
You may be loved again."
This is a sad poem, yet beautiful. It says, "don't be hurt by this love of mine, this silent, jealous love which I bear thee. Only, may God grant that you be loved like this in the future." This poem is very ironic, for while he says his love is not worth her pain, he wishes that she may be loved like this love he has for her in the future. A beautiful poem. You have good taste.
Peace
Phil (I'm a girl, but I use this name in place of my real name.) -
Ahkam on December 2, 2003Dear rosi! I don’t understand ur message perfectly
Thanks any way!!!
Forming some new page for web? Well I well send u my details as well for this purpose as u told me that its ur hoby, my I take advantage of that?
Ur well wisher,
Ahkam.
hy! it's my favorite poem,
Enjoy
"I Loved You..."
I loved you: and, it may be, from my soul
The former love has never gone away,
But let it not recall to you my dole;
I wish not sadden you in any way.
I loved you silently, without hope, fully,
In diffidence, in jealousy, in pain;
I loved you so tenderly and truly,
As let you else be loved by any man.
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Ahkam on December 2, 2003Hy! dear , found you on my page with a wonderful message, as I said already , I love all those who love Pushkin, I love you
Listen Dear if you can explain a little his very simple poem ,” I Loved You”
"I Loved You..."
I loved you: and, it may be, from my soul
The former love has never gone away,
But let it not recall to you my dole;
I wish not sadden you in any way.
I loved you silently, without hope, fully,
In diffidence, in jealousy, in pain;
I loved you so tenderly and truly,
As let you else be loved by any man.
By Alexander Pushkin
I will Be Grateful
Thanks
Ur well wisher
Ahkam
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RoseBlossom on November 29, 2003Lol, are you going to post anything?
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philophant on November 22, 2003nice comments in oldpoetry. you like pushkin...that's great. he's one of my favorites.
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