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  • Steffeny on September 24, 2006
    With your chest against my chest,
    with the open air in our nostrils,
    we will begin to shine.

    In the clear blue morning, who bathes you
    in the wine of the day.
    And when the shivering wood bleeds
    spleechless with love

    From each branch, a drop of green,
    pastel blossoms,
    there is in these opening things
    a tremor in my flesh.

    Dressed in your white nightgown,
    you throw yourself into the alfalfa
    Blushing at the sight of these bags
    beneath your eyes.

    Lover of the countryside,
    scattering everywhere
    like champagne foam,
    a laughing madness

    Laughing at me, harsh with drunkeness,
    who could bear you
    like that - such beautiful hair,
    oh - who could drink of

    your raspberry and strawberry liquer.
    Oh! flower's flesh
    you bring laughter to life with a kiss
    like a thief in pink,

    you, my lover,
    gently rob me of my reason,
    leaving just this laughter
    in my crazy head.

  • AaronDavid on March 4, 2006
    Wow. That was pretty interesting.
  • Night Hope on March 4, 2006
  • Stingersinger53 on February 22, 2006
    Thank you for the comment you left for me on my poem "MY ANGEL"
    I was hoping people would read this and get SOMETHING personal out of it, so it seems maybe you did! Thanks again for the comment!
  • Eterno Amar on January 9, 2006
    Hey Aaron. Glad that your writing more stuff! and even if it is all about muffin...its sweet i guess. I cant member which ones ive applauded so i'll just go and um comment on them all sometime when i get a chance. Alrighty. Hope you have a groovy day! ~Jenn
  • Dreamweaver on January 2, 2006
    AD Thanks for reading my featured story. Hope you enjoyed it.

    DW
  • LovesWithTheBreeze on January 2, 2006
    K Im obviously gonna have to read 1984 now. Just wanted to add here...New to poetry or not, your really good at it and I love knowing that the words your speaking are from your true life love. She is blessed (as are you) to have this love. Keep penning.
  • burningcello on January 2, 2006
    1984 is awesome...and I am glad that you are doing this for your girlfriend...keep up the good work
  • vaseline on December 12, 2005
    holy shit, i adore 1984
  • Steffeny on November 1, 2005
    I am so into you right now.
    There, thats a comment.
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