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where are you ?
well hope you're doing alright dear take care <3
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hey love <3 how are you doing?
whats that bit on your page? it sounds beautiful 
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are very impressive for someone 16, you have a lot of words at your disposal, i would imagine as you mature you will become more selective in their use but its great to have such an aresenal in the beginning. yer already writing at college or even most graduate level. (you probably already know that)
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i'm baaaaaaaaaack  <3 xxx
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thank you so much for considering my poetry good!
and that blurb on my author's page is about high school, actually. I used to totally be in love with being in high school, but now I'm sick of it, basically. and I can't wait to go to college, for the first time in my life.
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i miss you 
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Love 'em and leave 'em
Love'em or they leave you
Some see the glow but some glow is see through
As life leaves her body he screams me too
All he ever wanted was to teach you to reach you
Death is the cousin of sleep
Just close your eyes count sheep and breathe deep
Think about the sound of relief that surrounds you
You were already gone before I found you
[i love this song.. its hip-hop but omg.. it just.. wow blows me away, its called bleed slow by atmosphere ] ♥
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this is the first you spoke of it
in your black magic house
in a cold damp attic
two windows stare at us like eyes
behind them
december's dark
early morning sky
and a couple of
dead trees
with their ornamental stars
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Oh, but hold still darling your hair so free
Can't you feel the warmth of my sincerity?
You make motion when you cry
You're making people's lives feel less privite.
Don't take time away
You make motion when you cry
We all hold hands, can't we all hold hands,
When we make new friends?
♥
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mmm, english mostly, some chinese, some korean, and a spattering of german swear words.
i'm awful with languages. it's pretty pathetic. x)
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your BACK!!! YAAAAY!!! <3 ily and i'll write soon; but you need to write soon too.. please please pleassseeeeeee
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i miss you lauz . . .  ♥
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come back come back come back =[
i miss you.
x
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http://allpoetry.com/contest/2405579
I would love it if you entered :]
It's really easy and I need people who have talent :]
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~Princess of Shadows~
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that sounds absolutely lovely bby.
tell me when and where, and i'll be there.
♥
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Hey i like ur writing. I just wanted to c ur profil but i had noticed that u dont have decrotives u go 2 custimize backgrounds if u were just wonderin. Well we should chat sometime.
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i don't think that it is possible!! lol.
marry me?
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ily.

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i love that song..
the strokes
-drool- the singer is yum  lol
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ily ever so much.
you have to promise me that when you get publish you will let me know right away! ill buy like 10 copies and hand em out as gifts hehee 
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birch on January 16, 2008
i must read more from you.
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there is no way you're fifteen.
wow.
you'll be published by twenty, then. seriously. send it in.
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I like how you mold the stolen lines
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those are beautiful words
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hi pretty bby
i love when you change your author page
its always something interesting.
miss you tons!
♥ ily!
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i've got bad writers block.
i mean bad.
like nothing will come out,
not even shitty stuff.
so i've decided my best fix would be
to read through a bunch of your stuff.
<3+<3
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Rybo5000 : Beautiful on December 17, 2007
Your writing is so fantastic, you have amazing talent.
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the little snippet of poetry on your page... im not sure but is that oscar wilde? or.. someone else? i cant put my finger on it
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aww; i still love you tink.
forever and ever♥
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uhp! well, hello! :]
I'm so glad you stopped by.. considering it feels like a million months since I've seen you [well, not SEEN but you know..]
how have you been lately?? ♥
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ahh! I love your new user-picture! ♥
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I'm a big fan of Philip Gross...his "All Nite Cafe" was the reason I started writing poetry...and the sequence you added looks like it's from the "Wasting Game" poem? Anyway....regards, Col 
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haha aww the notebook! :]
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I'm glad you've been okay sweetie =]
eh; I've been up and down; mostly up.
Plenty of things to write about. So as soon as I find the mind set and time to do so; I'll be posting.
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mmmbaby; I know. It has changed. But I like it better now. Don't you?
How has my tinkerbell been? ♥♥!!!!
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this might sound stupid but
even if you say I have nothing to say
you still have that nothing left to be said
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I can show you the world
Shining, shimmering, splendid
Tell me, princess, now when did
You last let your heart decide?
I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways and under
On a magic carpet ride
A whole new world
A new fantastic point of view
No one to tell us no
Or where to go
Or say we're only dreaming
A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here
It's crystal clear
That now I'm in a whole new world with you
Now I'm in a whole new world with you
Unbelievable sights
Indescribable feeling
Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling
Through an endless diamond sky
A whole new world
Don't you dare close your eyes
A hundred thousand things to see
Hold your breath - it gets better
I'm like a shooting star
I've come so far
I can't go back to where I used to be
A whole new world
Every turn a surprise
With new horizons to pursue
Every moment red-letter
I'll chase them anywhere
There's time to spare
Let me share this whole new world with you
A whole new world
That's where we'll be
A thrilling chase
A wondrous place
For you and me
Ily lauzzz♥
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ohhh yeahh i know exactly what you mean heh
well hun whatever happens just know you make me oober proud to know you ♥ your the bee's-knees
♥ ily much much
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how are you tink?
I've made you a new pair of wings♥
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"i still have no words.
maybe i'll never find the right ones, but i know that you did.
this is so perfect i don't even know where to begin. it makes me want to cry because i've never even met you but you mean the world to me. and it's like you've written my entire existence here. which is scary.
but you've made it seem beautiful which is something i thought nobody could ever do..
you are an amazing writer my loverly.
so so talented.
it's like a story, like a fairytale gone wrong. breathless.
wow.
wish i could give you more happy clappy chappys
ily ♥"
Remember that? I miss you doll;;
where are you? ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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ily.
Let's go to never land?
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my dear i realized that you are very special to me when it comes to reading great poetry and i didn't always know you were on this site so i would like to go through all your poems and comment each one. i cant do it one day sadly but i will definatly not give up! you are that awesomely talented that i have become addicted to your words  tee hee
well i hope everything is doing well, miss you much! take care
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You are my sunshine;
my only sunshine
you make me happyyyyy
when skies are grey.
You'll never know dear;
how much I love you.
So Please don't take-
my sunshine away.
ily lauz/tinkerbell/bbdolly sugar face
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haha;
yes well.
I've got your back sweetie.
♥♥
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[ http://www.evanbailyn.com/peterpansyndrome.jpg ]
incase it didnt work...
iloveyou lauzzzz
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Awww;
really?
bb I can't wait =]
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