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The flame of my courage grows weak, Restless I sing,
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Enveloped by a gray mist, The sky opens up with a clap of thunder.
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Love most true whom it is I live for and will die for, Why is it as I wish to be nearer to you that it makes you faster ill?
by Atnok Vladimeer
24 lines,
on Sep 24 11:15 AM. In sad, death, love, darkness, light, joy, drowning, heart, rebirth, odd, differant
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I have heard alot of compliments from friends for this poem, so I would like any constructive criticism. Anything that may help me.
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What would you do?
tell me!
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The shadows come with mirthless laughter
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First Attempt and it's good - come see...
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O Lord! You escape me, ever escape me!
My soul so filled, so filled
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Darkness of anguish
Darkness of distress
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Death chasing me into the darkness, Suffocating me, I longer can breathe,
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I can’t believe it Threatening for so long
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Corrí a la umbría...
La vida sin la luna no tenía sentido.
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It was five years ago when this pain all started. My brother and his love became parents. I don’t remember the day well but I remember the pain too well. People gathered for a funeral, I couldn’t make it. It hurt too much to
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My life at its fullest its never all that great
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For you, my friend,
I'm still standing here.
by DarknessOfSanity
37 lines, 1 comment,
on Aug 22 1:15 PM. In friendship, thoughts, personal, pain, hope, life, darkness, lyrics, dedication, other
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We say the night is ending, When its only just begun,
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Who the fuck am I?
Just where did I go?
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Who I am, has changed,
Yet I'm still the same.
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I’ve tried to wake the fallen,
But all has failed
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We are no longer guided by the angels of the light,
but by the angels of darkness
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Released from potter's wheel
my clandestine dream
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Thorns tearing you about. A title suggestion is needed.
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The secrets of the darkness
The devil's best friend
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letting the blade fall
i sit there wondering how to end it all
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So we're doing a lot, so what?
Too many mindless tasks.
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Across the ribboned sky,
The colour of blood,
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A seething heaven of nightmares,
expanding hopelessly outward,
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The first thing I see
when I close my eyes
is darkness.
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