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PLEASE READ, I NEED FEEDBACK. MY PLACING IN A CONTEST IS AT STAKE.
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Time was when we were small
you and I playing on the streets
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Who am I?
I am the child of five,
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These years are so tortuous
without a reason why
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sometimes it hurts to believe.
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I look across the years and see
the shape of things that used to be
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When we were young all it took
was a tiny square card
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What happened to the old days,
when everyone was friends?
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She plays by the rules
...and she rebels against them.
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There was a time
When I wanted everything
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what if you could have had the ideal childhood, would you want it?
by blutearsofpain
25 lines, 4 comments,
on Jan 3 10:42 PM 2008. In life, change, what if, growing up, love, learning, sadness, pain, questioning
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My youthful anger adn confusion within me stay,
I know I'm young but no longer a child,
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Waiting 'til it's our time,
Our time to shine and take flight...
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My beautiful street
There’s nothing else
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Thousands of suns set and risen
Still emotion stays the same
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The chiming bells
Seem hollow this year.
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Like a little girl,
I shout at steep canyon
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realityhurts, it came so fast,
no matter how much i try to delay it.
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we grew up on the wrong side of the tracks
in an abandoned neighborhood
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Patch myself up piece by piece
Let go of empty guarantees
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how and why relationships fail no matter how hard one tries.
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Could be the boy next door, you never know.
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I walk around in circles,
Wondering what will happen next
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Why do I want to ask for a refund?
I'm ready to leave...
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Sometimes I wish to fall in love
I wish to have a family
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Every moment divides between paths.
There is no standing still.
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Tuck me into bed,
and tell me,
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Here's a smile for Daniel!
Catch it while you can!
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Solid and thick,
The red stuff that I could scratch with a penny.
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the lice of your lies / the beginning of your cries / we don't get along / but I will not give in / I will remain strong / I'll watch you crumble / your life will fade / into the darkness / your handmade
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Have you ever tried to put together a jigsaw puzzle?
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Once upon a time I thought, / That you were all I had. / Now I’ve began to realize, / Life without you isn’t so bad. / It’s been about a week, / Since I shed my last tear for you. / I’m slowly beginning to r
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Stumbling lost / Through the forest / Of deliberate pit falls / Refusing the help / Constantly offered. / Back home / With cut knees / An empty stomach / A thousand stories / Of the adventure / Tha
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Yeah, we gossip / our conversations have as much depth / and point as a chocolate teapot. / Yeah, we follow fashion / here today, gone tomorrow, / it's probably seen as wasteful. / Yeah, we chase lads
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The past is past and cannot live again / But memories hold fast and won’t depart / Oh how I wish to keep what I had then / Those days when I was hardly come of ten / Do call to me and cause an aching heart / Th
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Strange thing –Thirty Years, / The things it can do / It can take a young man / And make him look old / Not so long ago ’was the same age as you / So it seems….. / Take twenty or so / Just out of your
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Blue-eyed baby, golden haired child / Sundress sprinkled with yellow flowers / Mismatched sandals, and an energized laugh / Four years old, mommy's little girl / Unkempt curls and a gap-toothed grin / Glasses t
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Right now / all that matters / is the simple things / swings, dandelions, bugs / dirt / For now I am going to enjoy the suns kiss, / Try ca
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laced with memories, this place i'm not yet ready to leave / every corner tells a story, every step tells a tale / looking out onto the snow, summer is long gone / and with it pulled everything familiar /
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So what if I’m scared? I’m just a kid. / I have my rights just like you did. / I listen to music to pass the time, / I throw words together that often rhyme, / And I get lonely and worry at night / That I’ll never b
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WE'LL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR YOU! / The road ahead is awaiting your first step, / you have a world of opportunities to explore. / Remember that you are very special in
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My life is passing by / middle school, here i come! / homework, welcome! / here comes my freedom! / Starting out with sixth grade / then passing my life to seventh / then be the big dog in eighth / so now i am l
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No matter where in Aussie land you live
this land we love I know has much to give.
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I do watch the news, / I walked past the booze. / I walked past the blades, / I walked past the cliques, / The best decisions I’ve made, / Just ‘cause I’m fourteen doesn’t / mean I’m sick. / / I stray from th
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Little do you know, plastic diva, / That when that girl opens your box / You’re gonna have a new best friend / And her dog’s gonna chew you up / And you’re gonna be cold / Cause she’ll lose your clothes / But it w
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/ / I want to choose my own college / And my own career / I want you to step back dad / and change your gear / / I’m 18 years old now / you cant control me forever / if you would allow me to do things fo
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