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Hey there fellow poetry lovers. Thank you for showing enough interest in my work to check out more than one poem. Lets see I am your typical teenager who is drawn to darkness in clothing, music, and bedroom conditions. I love to write passionately and my poetry tends to reflect my mood s there are going to be off the wall WTF poems. But I love criticism so comment except on my spelling and grammer as I know it blows. Oh,and when commenting I give you permission to be harsh. Thanks & happy reading!

poem I LOVE:

Vampire King by Dragonspirit

Random fact semi-related to AP:

I had a nightmare that I was writing a poem on AP and trid to delete something but my key wasn't working so I hit it a few more times and (heres the nightmare bit) it erased all of my poems! woke up and had a hard time going back to sleep after that almost had to go and check my AP to make sure that all of my poetry was still there!


a song that will always make me cry:

In a broken down apartment hous
a woman lay in labor
she said "by the grace of god Ill have this child
and the help of a neighbor."
at six o'clock the sun was risin
on upon the world
and at seven forty five
the neighbor smiled and said
"you've got a beutiful Girl"

She named her Spring
winters been a long time passin
she named her Spring
and though she'd never wed
she held her newborn child and said
"Spring, I've waited a long time for you."

In a broken down apartment house
a woman lay dying
And by her side a little six year old girl
who's softly crying
"momma don't Go away
and Leave me all alone"
Momma said to the welfare lady
"find my child a good home."

"Ill miss my spring
winters been a long time passin
Ill miss you Spring"
the angels carried her away
the welfare lady nelt to pray
"Spring she'll be gone a long time from you"

In a beautiful church outside of town
stands a woman smiling
On her hand a wedding band
Of a fashionable styling
All the years in an orphans home
He shared with you
and now your hopes and childhood dreams
Have all come true

He loves you spring
Winters been a long time passin
He loves you spring
He promised you today
He'll never go away
Spring he's waited a long, long time for you
a long long time for you.