I write poetry sporadically, usually with external rather than internal inspiration. I generally prefer poems that have some sort of sound structure - metre, rhyme, alliteration or something like that. Feel free to say what you think is lacking in my poetry or how it could be improved. I may or may not agree with you, but I won't get nasty.
- Last seen on Apr 30 12:24 AM 2007. Member since May 12, 2004.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 38 comments.
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My Poetry
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blindfolded the brave one, brought the hunter
by ways well-hidden, winding and narrow,33 lines, 4 comments, October 10, 2004. In Other -
When I'm in the laundry I miss you;
Can't wait till I'm back, then I'll kiss you.
My Stories
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Once upon a time there were three travellers who set out on a journey to a land they had heard of. In this land, so it was said, there were beautiful streams, and green f424 lines, 2 comments, May 16, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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browneyedgirl1 on June 2, 2004Hey! Thanks so much for pointing out my little mistake. I forgot to edit!
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rufina caraid on May 12, 2004Hello steorra,
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~Von~
Queensland
Australia
