Soccerchicky

• Last seen on Nov 11 11:58 AM 2005. Member since May 26, 2005.
• I'm a peridot parrot poet for 36 comments.
• My mood is , and quote is "u either see life as half empty or half full".
• I have 36 comments, 11 poems

My Poetry

• what am i to you?

  what am i
  to you?

  8 lines, 1 comment, August 19, 2005. In Other
• called love

  28 lines, 3 comments, August 4, 2005. In Personal, Love, Angst
• hold me

  hold me-
  just hold me.

  14 lines, 1 comment, August 3, 2005. In Personal, Love, Angst
• Big

  Big
  As in cities

  22 lines, 2 comments, August 2, 2005. In Personal, Society, Contemporary

Guest Book

• Selenas on June 16, 2005

  I like your poetry though I do feel that sometimes you lose the flow somewhere in them, then start back up again. If you should ever want someone to look at them and give you some pointers I would be glad to help you out.
  
  Like I said they are good, I just feel that you have the ability to be lots better. please only take this as a friendly viewpoint and critiquing of your work...I don't mean to offend in anyway...I think you have great potential my dear.
  
  Sel~
  
  
  Edited on Jun 24, 9:57 p.m. because ''.

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