I'm posting poems I've written that I like and ones that need a lot of work--feel free to comment. I will try to incorporate your suggestions where I can.
~Six
~Six
- Last seen on Oct 8 10:44 AM. Member since June 5, 2007.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 242 comments.
- I am a 30 year old woman from Minnesota (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm really busy.
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My Poetry
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I keep trying to sit down
and yet I cancel myself or35 lines, September 15. In personal -
Pain, like a stabbing needle - now fading. Cold, cold for so long that the world has shifted on its axis
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She shifted her bulky black handbag to the other shoulder, tucked her dull brown hair behind her ears, straightened her spine, gave her ann1555 lines, 3 comments, March 7. In 600-2000 words, Life
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The smell of fresh-brewed coffee is following me around today; the scent catches me unaware as I walk, as I lean over the desk and my hair
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The Salted Caper / There were a bunch of hooligans from Central High standing at the checkout of the ACME grocery bugging Annie again. It w
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- "Night-time" at sharepoetry
Neifling curses, nine times nine / Ignorance feeding ignorance / Great men facing giants / Holding ten poles all of a height / Tightly testing / | / Tenuous resolve, lightning fear residing / In each heart, instantly / Making each a more - Through the Penumbra at sharepoetry
Why do we choose to live / with this wound up clockwork, / pressure building as we / let the gatekeeper / wind and wind and wind / / Where our wings used to be / he twists and winds / the keyholes to manipulate our spines and / release
