I write what I feel, it's as simple as that. That, and sometimes I write what I can't feel. Heh, I go through high points and low points and they're entirely too obvious when I do so. ^_^
Nehneh, demo...I want critiques. >.> Real ones. Like...well, if you like a poem, you can just say so. But, if you see something wrong with it that doesn't flow right or whatever, please feel free to tell me. x_x I wanna know.
-whines at the world, spins in circles and sits- o.o;
OH, er, go check out MenthrinKuth!! She's the bomb diggity.
Nehneh, demo...I want critiques. >.> Real ones. Like...well, if you like a poem, you can just say so. But, if you see something wrong with it that doesn't flow right or whatever, please feel free to tell me. x_x I wanna know.
-whines at the world, spins in circles and sits- o.o;
OH, er, go check out MenthrinKuth!! She's the bomb diggity.
- Last seen on Dec 11 11:51 AM 2007. Member since January 28, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 124 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "For the heart of this life, I will bear my soul.".
- I am a 24 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Graphic Design Student and Dog Bather.
- Visit my homepage at www.sinistertranquility.deviantart.com
- I have 124 comments, 74 poems, 1 story
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How can you be so far beneath my skin? / At times it even seems as if your lips / Are to my ear, and the feathers of your hair / Are all around me when I feel like faltering / In the very presence of the air /
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Shallow thoughts in shallow minds / Leave blood stained prints on this world's bleeding morality. / Tender hearts and soft lungs / so honey full, they suffocate / in their own sick
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“It is times like this
When I remember why I loved you…” -
Carry a torch for the eternity Of smiles this holiday brings...8 lines, 1 comment, October 11, 2006. In Other
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Jag on October 18, 2005wow i love your page..
just stopping by to return the favour of your comment on ending time....
JAG
