- Last seen on May 20 10:39 AM 2006. Member since December 19, 2004.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 115 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is the true test of a writer is the editing process.
- I am a girl (USA)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.livejournal.com/users/siameseamazon
- I have 115 comments
My Poetry
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[reading poetry should be holistic-- two consecutive lines doesn't give an accurate impression of such a wide range of tone and style]
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Handkerchief clouds creep over the southern slope,
Gently slipping like a silk curtain across despair. -
they swell up and open like sage leaves seeped in witch's water,
veins thump resoundingly and reassuringly like a rabbit's legs against soil,
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erasing0180 on September 9, 2005hey,
i stopped here pretty randomly.
i was rereading every single comment a friend of mine ever made. but i remember you. i read some of your livejournal.
my mind is kind of wandering tonight, but I thought i'd critique something of yours and it's not here. so, next time you post something, IM me about it and you'll get a quality comment. -
SliptheFlitch on January 2, 2005Thanks for your comment. I know I don't really like the end either, and have had other people tell me the same, so yes, I am working on it.*sigh* I hate editing. But, I will read your poems later and get you your comment..for now, I must simply work at fixing my ap thingie....
~Merethe~ -
Alahmorah on December 30, 2004Hey! Its nice to find people with something in common! Hope to talk to you later!
Love and Blessings, Ashlee aka Alahmorah -
glazecovered on December 30, 2004It is very nice to find someone with the same name as me. I've only seen a couple of people with the same name around here. Welcome to AllPoetry. I hope you enjoy it, and if you have any questions, don't be shy. I'm around here a lot.
~Anastasia
