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Hi. Donna is my name. If I like you i'll give you my email or whatever.

Last Words by Ice Nine Kills

Here goes the story of a kid we thought we knew.
He hid a hate inside and had a state of mind,
That put him in his grave.
It began with his friends,
They never noticed the despair in his eyes,
From the pressure.
His life was etched in stone before he made a choice of his own.

He's dedicated for everyday that he made it on his own,
In his father's eyes,
He's a pair of dice;
He wont be number one.

So he tries to comply,
With everything they've ever asked.
And his life is stitched with one-way tickets,
To places he don't want to visit.

He says "i'm never going to be prefect,
Maybe I don't deserve this but i'm doing the best I can.
I can't deal with the pressure,
It feels like my whole lifes etched in stone,
Before i've made a choice of my own"

So save your breath,
'Cause you'll need it when you hang from the rope.
Cause of death:
Obvious from your suicide note,
The last words that filled the page,
"If no one will listen,
No one will miss when i'm gone"

Across town his dad sits at home all alone,
Never knowing that his son was never going to come home.
The last thoughts that filled his head,
"I'll tell him i'm sorry,
I'll say I regret what I said.
This is your life,
I'll lead my own life instead"

His bedrooms filled with emptiness tonight,
As the silence cuts through,
Like a knife,
Knowing he's not there.

My Poetry

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Guest Book

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  • Skye Ze on September 1, 2006
    Aiee..dngdoiuhger!
  • Skye Ze on August 30, 2006
    Thanks yah darlin'!
    -Skye
    I mean..dhgofuethre
  • Skye Ze on August 30, 2006
    jksafd reifv Hi Donna. Would love your email..
    -Skye
  • Skye Ze on July 12, 2006

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