I don't write much/very often and the ratio of lines written to final products is low. To me poetry has no true color, no true shade, it is whatever comes to me, I usually write based off a single line or stanza, or some amount in between, and take that line or so and run with it, allow the words to carry me. I believe that in poetry it is most important that the words carry the reader with them effortlessly down the page. If the reader is not transported and the writing does not flow then the writer has failed his or her goal.
- Last seen on Nov 19 5:22 PM. Member since May 25, 2005.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 328 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "It is by logic we prove, but by intuition we discover (da Vinci)".
- I am a 20 year old guy from Ohio (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm doing everything else. .
- I have 328 comments, 3 contests, 13 poems
My Poetry
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Enclosures mirror the solstice scheme on all sides.
Life becomes a back drop, striking an elegant eternal pose,
Sinking into the new gra35 lines, July 9. In Love -
But young and smooth as gilded drops
That break their grave and heavy fall
With a green and lasting sigh24 lines, 3 comments, April 21, 2008 -
/Cobwebs and Dust, Cobwebs and Dust/
/I Hate to Leave You, But Leave You I Must/59 lines, 5 comments, January 22, 2007
Guest Book
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Hulali on February 7, 2007Hi, new friend.
It says much that you talk about editing and that you write much more than you deem finished. Writing is the easy part. It's the editing that is a little like work, don't you think.
Wow, Horus8 talked to you. You're in the big time now. -
horus8 : Uranus is cocked at 45 degrees. on February 7, 2007I may be wearing a diaper, but you have potential.
