Selser

Hello all, my poems are all in rhyme cause freewriting just dosen't come to me. Don't leave without first looking at Done Taking Shit. I think it is my best poem. Don't be offended if i dont reply to you i'm not a very talkative person.

My friends on here are Dust, Tomiko, and Nikko. Check them out they're all talented.

Hope you enjoy my work

Last seen on Mar 5 1:22 PM 2005. Member since October 7, 2003.
I'm a amber angel poet for 3 comments.
I am a 17 year old guy (USA)
When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
I have 3 comments, 9 poems

My Poetry

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Waiting Game

I waited so long but now it is done
The waiting game’s over I am he who won

28 lines, July 3, 2004. In Personal, Love
Emotional Blank

Thinking and wanting can’t speak my mind
Feelings and emotions are stuck in a bind

18 lines, June 19, 2004. In Personal, Love
Lost Music

Something’s missing, little song in my head
The music’s stopped and I’m filling full of dread

34 lines, 1 comment, May 3, 2004. In Personal
My World

In my world there is only me
It’s a world where no one’s happy

18 lines, 2 comments, October 8, 2003. In Personal

Guest Book

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Dust on May 3, 2004

awww *huggles* THANKS FOR ALL YOUR REALLY SWEET COMMENTS!!! I luvvith you and we need to hang out sometime! Call me!
Dust on February 20, 2004

Nikko's creepy. Sorry random comment reading other comments of yours. You have a great style and great works! And because I read all of your work and commented... I think you should write some more. Like I said on the last poem, You've got a great talent. Don't waste it. Keep writing, and it's sure to get better. Thanks for posting, they were great reads! . ust:.
Tomiko on October 21, 2003

All your poems are good. Expand your writing styles young boy, even though you are the same age as I am! I'm sure they teach that at school. ^___^ And you can even learn on your own, like I have/did. Heh. Keep up the good work!
luvs to ya
Tomiko
Nikko on October 8, 2003

gaagaaaboochie!

'estoy muy consada'. "tengo cuarenta camas rojas". 'no entiendo'. 'shuttup you bastard i make sense more than sense and you do!" *pulls out good ol rotting salmon and whaps a few random people with it.* "la cama!" ... 'hasta luego?'

.... right. -nikko-