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please comment on my poems even if u don't like them
  thnxs:saya




i love writing away's have.i wrote tons of stories but was never able to finish them.so i turned to poetry. i love writing how i feel about my dreams(at night dreams)and my relationships with friends and rivals.
don't expect many to comment but please try.and tell me if i SUCK.that would help alot.
also i have a writers block so any ideas of what you think i could write about please put them in my guest book
(\ /) I am a bunny.
(o.O) I am trying to take over
(>"<) the world. Please help me
/_|_\ by pasting me on your page



my friend wrote this for me.cause i was sad please comment in guess book.
I'm floating in a "hot air balloon" entering a "vanilla twilight" watching the "fireflies".
Shooting up into my "rainbow veins". Coming across a "strawberry avalanche". Standing about to "cave in" thinking about our old relationship

being "the bird and the worm". but it had to stop, who was who? if its crazy 

to belive in friendship, then go ahead lock me up just make sure its in

"the salt water room". but if its just a dream to look fine on the out side 

and be hanging "on the wing" inside,the just kick me down now!

i need to stop feeling like everyone wants to say "hello seatlle".

to get away from me.

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                                         GWENDOLYN

                                                    A.

                                           PETTY

P.S.THE GUY SHE LIKES LAST NAME IS PETTY)