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 This poem has touched me like no other on this site.  This author is absolutely amazing, and blessed with the gift of a beautiful heart full of beautiful words.  
  

 

 

 

Negative Whispers

by; Arkbear 

 

~*~

Watching you

has become a sad gift.

Quietly staring, hoping someone

will see your fears. Social anxiety destroys

all mental awareness of what lies

in front of you. This is

not a dream

~*~

Hear me as

I stand to walk away,

as time is now for you to confront

this demonic world, and place your ability

to recognize good from evil. We

are part of each others'

aching soul

~*~

Come, and I

will show you a better

place, to allow tranquility and

serenity to flush ugly searing thoughts as

your ill body remains positive.

Negative whispers are

out to kill

~*~

Lasso your

mind, capture only hope

in your higher power, travel to

destinations unheard, awaiting the fathers

voice. Sacred promises belong to

those who believe upon

prophets told

~*~

You can do

whatever you set your

souls desire upon. Volatile flames

with sorrowful pain extinguished. Material

possessions lingering for control

over you. Trust in this

hand I lend

~*~

 

 

 
  

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  • trekkergirl on June 21
    I just stopped by to say how much I loved your poem To the Son I never knew. I have nominated in my group Friends of trekkergirl for our poll. I hope you win it.
  • Arkbear : Oh my goodness Sassy! on October 24, 2008
    Totally stunned at you having, *Negative Whispers* on your page........OMG! I remember something about you saying you were going to do that....but I never thought twice about it.....simply gorgeous presentation you gave it.....God bless you!
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  • ilovemybaritone : wow on September 17, 2008
    i love your poetry, do u mind of i use one for one of my classes?
  • thoughtsforu on September 10, 2008
    Was just reading over some of your poems. You are a talented poet. Look forward to reading and commenting on them.

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