Fall
We
are Adam and Eve
born out of chaos called
creation
Ribbing me gave you life
yet you forget
there will always be
a part of me in you
yes
I taunted and tempted
you
with my forbidden fruit
does that make
me
the serpent too?
Believe what you will
but if I am exiled
alone
I know we will be
together again someday
naked
without shame
in paradise
My thanks to you
for being in on my
sin
from Megan McCafferty's Sloppy Firsts
The only days I am happy are days with love, which turns out is everyday. My inability to write is painful and I know I will start again soon.
We
are Adam and Eve
born out of chaos called
creation
Ribbing me gave you life
yet you forget
there will always be
a part of me in you
yes
I taunted and tempted
you
with my forbidden fruit
does that make
me
the serpent too?
Believe what you will
but if I am exiled
alone
I know we will be
together again someday
naked
without shame
in paradise
My thanks to you
for being in on my
sin
from Megan McCafferty's Sloppy Firsts
The only days I am happy are days with love, which turns out is everyday. My inability to write is painful and I know I will start again soon.
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- I'm a gasoline dream poet for 1,540 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "everytime i feel alone, i can blame it on you".
- I am a 19 year old girl (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.












- I have 1,540 comments, 5 contests, 292 poems
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no more semi-empty parkinglots17 lines, 2 comments, January 20, 2006. In Contemporary -
inspired by, or taken from, or ripped off of: Pablo Neruda - I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
"...the measure of my changing love for you -
in a semi-empty parkinglot
outside of fabricland14 lines, 4 comments, September 21, 2005. In Contemporary -
anti-climatic almost 12 years of exposition, dramatic tension and suddenly we've reached the denouement.i remember so much more hype8 lines, 8 comments, September 7, 2005. In Humor, Contemporary
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miniature heart on September 1, 2006i really enjoy reading your poetry
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jaunty pill on April 7, 2006
Hello. Recently I have decided to hold a
contest as an " Invite only ". I have been reading
your poems for quite awhile and thought this
would be a good way of getting to know you better
as a writer. I would very much appreciate an entry.
It will aid in the hope to extend my commenting
on other writers , Such as yourself.
allpoetry.com/contest/1932350
Thanks for your time .
James
P.S. If you would not like your name
included on the contest list , Please IM me
and I'll remove it. I don't want to offend
anyone by this contest or make anyone
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butterflyinflight on September 28, 2005SARRA IS COOL.
RUPERT
Edited on Sep 28, 7:42 p.m. because 'I messed up trying to put a flower by my name'. -
SEA angel on December 26, 2004Oh, WOW, this is a MOST beautiful background on your author page. I LOVE IT!
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