I'm Taylor.
I make mistakes.
I learn from my past.
And i move on.
End.Of.Story
please comment on my poetry.
i need to know which are good,
and what need improvement... etc.
thanx : )
I make mistakes.
I learn from my past.
And i move on.
End.Of.Story
please comment on my poetry.
i need to know which are good,
and what need improvement... etc.
thanx : )
- Last seen 21 minutes ago. Member since October 21.
- I'm a amber angel poet for 3 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "F U.".
- I am a 18 year old girl from Virginia (United States)
- I have 3 comments, 7 poems, 1 journal
My Poetry
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I was thinking about what you said... "He's gonna be around for a while whether you want him here or not." and you're right, I can't make himgo away. But I can leave. And I will. I wouldn't be a good friend to you if I just l29 lines, 1 comment, November 18. In old friends...
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she looked at him,
she fell apart,19 lines, 2 comments, October 29 -
(DEDICATED TO MICHAEL CHARLES SHULMAN)
ps.-iloveyou.
My journal entries
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this feeling, i dont quite understand. its a distant feeling. a feeling that hurts, yet doesnt show emotion. its a useless kind of feeling. like im here, but im not really HERE. i feel numb. dead. pointless. like nothings wrong. but knowing nothings right. its unknowing, almost dream-like. its a constant daze. but itDecember 3, 100 words. → Make first comment?
