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Hello.

I'm a young person (of fifteen years). I live in a small town in Washington state. I dont feel like I'm the most interesting person you'd ever have the displeasure of talking too, or even reading about. I dont mind. I think I'm alright. I would just like people to read my poetry and comment on it and help me grow as a writer. I wouldnt mind if someone actually liked any of my poems either. I dont want to write about all my problems for there are far too many of those in this world. Too many in my own world and the people around me. I feel for everyone though. It makes living a very hard thing to do, when your always feeling for other people, and never really for yourself.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my poetry.
Thank you!

  • Last seen on Oct 1 9:06 PM 2004. Member since August 16, 2004.
  • I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 21 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "as freedom is a breakfastfood".
  • I am a 15 year old girl (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a wannabe vampire.
  • Visit my homepage at www.sakura6.deviantart.com
  • I have 21 comments, 13 poems

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  • sakura6 on August 26, 2004
    are you a memeber of Deviant Art by any chance?
  • Blood Talon on August 25, 2004
    Cherry blossom, eh? Argh...I swear I've seen your name before. Just can't remember where... *slaps self* Oh well. Gonna read some of your poems...now...yah!
  • sakura6 on August 22, 2004
    RANT: I think that there are not enought poems WITHOUT the words 'I' 'me' 'you' 'we' 'us' ect. in them. Why must any poetry have those words in it? you can have a fine or better poem and use much more intelligent sounding words... and giving the poem more feeling.. and less of a 'personal' feel. not that there is anything wrong with personal.
  • NurseHayley on August 17, 2004
    Hello sakura6

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