why must this place a desert be?
song of the day: flash flood- Aesop Rock
my name is raven, and I'm not just saying that to be poetical, it really is my name.
and who am i? christ..... i got nothin.....
i like rock music, punkrock, house, hiphop, and even some of that god awful pop punk shit that everyone pretends to hate.
these are the people that i've loved:
Amy- "we all pretend to be so well adjusted, maybe its just me and i'm disgusted."
Georgie- "i wanna feel that lightning strike me and burn me down."
Leslie- "the angels of the coming storm listen as you pray for rain."
liza-"a hard line, it's the one you gotta cross, the one you gotta cross, to get you anywhere"
ELi- "so when i speak words that i don't mean it's like i'm only in this cloud to wonder what serene is."
Bexa- "a star in the dark a new day has dawned, open up and let it flow, I'll make it yours so here we go"
~*~
all i ever wanted was to pick apart the day, put the pieces back together my way.
-aesop rock
help me help you, walk away, leave this unamazing grace.
-el-p
They want to feel and know you hear them (Go now, run and hide)
-a7x
I'll embed you in silver, i will wrap you in cold.
-afi
~*~
if you ever tell me something important, and i don't say anything, its not that i don't care, it's just that sometimes theres nothing i can say.
i'm an artist. i paint, i draw, i write, with conviction.
i'm not going to lie and say that i don't care what you think of me. i take things seriously. i let things effect me. so if you say something to me, for christsake, mean it.
i can hoola-hoop for ten minutes without stopping.
i feel most content when i'm at the shore, a show, or being read to.
i'm egocentric.
~*~
i exhale this last deep breath of you after keeping you a prisoner inside my lungs for so long. my body implodes around this cavern that you used to occupy. i don't feel anything. ween these lungs off your intoxication, i'm drowning in this oxygen.
~*~
JODEY FODEY!!!!!
-amy
"the moments between when my feet left the roof and when my head hit the pavement were the best of my life."
-some fanfic,
[which turned out to be depressing, so i stopped reading, but i really liked that lines.]
"i'm not going to lie to you. nothing is alright. nothing will ever be alright. and thats just the way it is."
-amy
~*~
But this time,
is the last time.
You've tried it once.
I've done it twice.
But with every passing day....
We'll do it again.
And every time,
I'll do it again.
As long as it's with you.
As long as it's for you.
Forever my darling.
We'll teach this world the meaning of love.
-L[a].L[a].L[a].
~*~
you still think i'm here to save?
i was never even here.....
song of the day: flash flood- Aesop Rock
my name is raven, and I'm not just saying that to be poetical, it really is my name.
and who am i? christ..... i got nothin.....
i like rock music, punkrock, house, hiphop, and even some of that god awful pop punk shit that everyone pretends to hate.
these are the people that i've loved:
Amy- "we all pretend to be so well adjusted, maybe its just me and i'm disgusted."
Georgie- "i wanna feel that lightning strike me and burn me down."
Leslie- "the angels of the coming storm listen as you pray for rain."
liza-"a hard line, it's the one you gotta cross, the one you gotta cross, to get you anywhere"
ELi- "so when i speak words that i don't mean it's like i'm only in this cloud to wonder what serene is."
Bexa- "a star in the dark a new day has dawned, open up and let it flow, I'll make it yours so here we go"
~*~
all i ever wanted was to pick apart the day, put the pieces back together my way.
-aesop rock
help me help you, walk away, leave this unamazing grace.
-el-p
They want to feel and know you hear them (Go now, run and hide)
-a7x
I'll embed you in silver, i will wrap you in cold.
-afi
~*~
if you ever tell me something important, and i don't say anything, its not that i don't care, it's just that sometimes theres nothing i can say.
i'm an artist. i paint, i draw, i write, with conviction.
i'm not going to lie and say that i don't care what you think of me. i take things seriously. i let things effect me. so if you say something to me, for christsake, mean it.
i can hoola-hoop for ten minutes without stopping.
i feel most content when i'm at the shore, a show, or being read to.
i'm egocentric.
~*~
i exhale this last deep breath of you after keeping you a prisoner inside my lungs for so long. my body implodes around this cavern that you used to occupy. i don't feel anything. ween these lungs off your intoxication, i'm drowning in this oxygen.
~*~
JODEY FODEY!!!!!
-amy
"the moments between when my feet left the roof and when my head hit the pavement were the best of my life."
-some fanfic,
[which turned out to be depressing, so i stopped reading, but i really liked that lines.]
"i'm not going to lie to you. nothing is alright. nothing will ever be alright. and thats just the way it is."
-amy
~*~
But this time,
is the last time.
You've tried it once.
I've done it twice.
But with every passing day....
We'll do it again.
And every time,
I'll do it again.
As long as it's with you.
As long as it's for you.
Forever my darling.
We'll teach this world the meaning of love.
-L[a].L[a].L[a].
~*~
you still think i'm here to save?
i was never even here.....
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Miz Katastrophe : I wrote this poem on June 5I just wrote it now
I enjoyed writing it and it flowed rather effortlessly. Hope you like it!
Everything is black and white
Blurry eyed I wander in.
I pick a spot in which I reside
A hard narrow bench.
I curl up into a warm fetus
Ignoring the bitter draft
R.E.M pours upon me
And I disappear alone.
In this place I'm free and dancing!
Drinking all the music
I can go on forever ...
Basking in this lucid beauty!
But ofcourse I'm ripped right back,
I've fallen from my bench.
I yawn and gaze around me,
Everything gray and decaying.
I patiently zone back out
As I wait for the game to end
These fucking games take so much time,
And everybody loses in the end.
Suddenly, stark and screaming!
I hear a voice upon me!
It's loud and clear, I'm sure I hear
A freebird calling my name...
I hear their voice, silent but ringing
Unheard by all the deaf children
Who are you?
The grey turns blue...
I become a river rushing.
Raven calling at the cellar door!
I splash upon the cold gym floor!
I disperse myself into a class of fools
Needlessly chasing their balls
I scan the crowd curiously
Charmed instantly by the Raven's sweet calls.
Soon.. I sight her wings, so magnificent!
But ever so slightly torn.
She is a brown haird nymphette,
A freshly hatched egg
No more than a few thousands of years old.
Her song amuses me
As it echoes from closed lips
We are anacronyms, so misplaced!
Me and this raven daughter
Her skin gets wet when I touch her face,
and I welcome her with hope and grace,
"Your the most beautiful person in this room."
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Antebellum on March 21ive been reading your writing and its amazing! The stye/form...yeaa not real sure of the poetic terms lol but i enjoyed reading your stuff.
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FullyAlive on February 28, 2008so you should totallly un cut me out of your AP life and add something amazing about me like how amazing i am
because that was the most humble sentence ever.
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FullyAlive on November 18, 2007I miss you enough to make me cry.
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