my name is bret, i am a 15 year old guy. I Love to read and write. I also like to play sports.My fave stories are fantasy. my fave authors include j.r.r tolkien, terry brooks, ted dekker, j.k. rowling, michale chrihton, christopher paolini
my fave bands are skillet, pillar, evasnescence, creed, linkin park, nickleback,3 days grace, hinder, seether, and my fave rappers are ludacris, young jeezy, and T.I.,
by the way if anyone is enterested i started a fantasy group called fantasy reviewers
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My name is Sarah I am but three,
My eyes are swollen I cannot see,
I must be stupid I must be bad,
What else could have made My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up All the day long
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound! I just heard a car
My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse My name he calls
I press myself Against the wall.
I try and hide From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more,
I finally get free And I run for the door.
He's already locked it And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late
His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy Murdered me.
We need to stop child abuse!
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my fave bands are skillet, pillar, evasnescence, creed, linkin park, nickleback,3 days grace, hinder, seether, and my fave rappers are ludacris, young jeezy, and T.I.,
by the way if anyone is enterested i started a fantasy group called fantasy reviewers
*98 percent of teenagers have tried pot. If you are one of the 2% who hasn't, post this on your profile
|………..|
|………..| Put this on your
|………..| page if you have
|…….O.| ever pushed a
|………..| door that said pull!
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-PLEASE READ THIS-
My name is Sarah I am but three,
My eyes are swollen I cannot see,
I must be stupid I must be bad,
What else could have made My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up All the day long
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound! I just heard a car
My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse My name he calls
I press myself Against the wall.
I try and hide From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more,
I finally get free And I run for the door.
He's already locked it And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late
His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy Murdered me.
We need to stop child abuse!
Help Support This and Put This in Your Profile
92% of American teens today would die if Abercrombie & Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. If you're part of the 8% that would be laughing their butts off, put this in your profile.
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Many people think that fantasy is something that you just think up, and it is that but much more. Research is the key to any story, particu1315 lines, 12 comments, July 25. In 600-2000 words
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for the people who read my writing please dont call me a hypocrite for having never finished a story. The truth is im working on something
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cherrysmile on May 20the pome that you have on your home page is very good i love it and its sad how people can be so crule
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oikevois baby on May 19Just stopping by to say welcome to AP! Your poems are very good and I enjoyed reading them. They are deep and you are very clever with imagery. I look forward to more!!
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