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Redteacup

I'm Riley. I'm a sophomore in college. I chose not to pursue creative writing in my formal education, but I'm seeking to continue my development on my own.

I just decided to work toward a book of poems, but I need serious help with revision before anything will be close to acceptable. So eny critiques of my work are enormously appreciated. I will do my best to return the favor.

Find something to make you smile.

Poems I'm focused on

  • Grass grows
    over the graves
    20 lines, October 2
  • I want to hold you through the night under clouds of smoke
    amidst your alcoholic haze. Mumbling into the wind like a
    31 lines, 19 comments, March 18. In Love, Hope, Longing
  • Follow me to Montreal where we can
    smoke cigarettes on park benches
    9 lines, 10 comments, March 15

My Poetry

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  • The bell rings, summoning your candy
    basket, but you stop at the door
    10 lines, 2 comments, October 2
  • You play your guitar like
    the woman I want to be,
    4 lines, 1 comment, August 8
  • I want to dig into your chest, plant
    a flower and water it with my
    17 lines, 2 comments, July 20

Visitor Book

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  • forever.earth : oh noooo. on April 20
    I missed the contest.
    I'M SORRY.
  • forever.earth : im going ... on April 16
    Im going to be submitting my write soon. I've been working on it. I just want it to be really good. I miss you. We need to talk.

    *hugs*
  • B Tha Revolution : Welcome! on March 15
    I see you're new to AP, so I wanted too welcome you. I added you to my favorites list so I can see all your new work post I think you have unique style. I know what its like to be new on this site. But just have fun, enter contest, chat etc... stay in touch!

    -brandon

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