Psychlone

• Last seen on Dec 3 1:25 AM 2006. Member since November 4, 2006.
• I'm a dusted garnet poet for 1 comments.
• My mood is , and quote is "Capricious".
• I am a 16 year old guy (Pakistan)
• I have 1 comment, 6 poems

My Poetry

• Break It All Away

  why you always suffocate in these walls,
  which trample your good feelings and thoughts,

  14 lines, 2 comments, November 4, 2006. In Hope
• This Is Who I Am

  sometimes i feel so happy,
  sometimes i am kind of sad,

  26 lines, 2 comments, November 4, 2006. In Personal
• Tears

  my heart all but mutilated,
  happiness strangled inside me,myself disconsolate,

  17 lines, November 4, 2006. In Dark
• Numb

  Tears sliding down the courses of my cheek,
  for i was bleeding inside,my heart seared with pain,

  17 lines, November 4, 2006. In Dark

Guest Book

• the-enigma on November 5, 2006

  you just have to dig deep to be complex look up words or if you write in word write the poem out then change some words you want to change to make them more complex
• psychlone on November 5, 2006

  alrite then itz ok....anywez howz life goin??
  
  actually i really wanna get complex on poetry my work is too basic...i want sum wordplay in it like vogon poetry lol or sumfin but my poetry shud b complex....can ya tell me how 2 imrpove on that?
• the-enigma on November 5, 2006

  no i dont have msn i have aim

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