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i live in california and totally love it. i have six brothers and sisters. and i love writing peotry. i also enjoy listening to music and hanging out with my best friend Colby. i love reading other peoples peoms and comenting on them. i also love to chat so whenever i'm on you can bring up a conversation and i'll try to get back to you. i work at a athletic gym. i love to run. i'm running a marathon in october. you can look at two of my sisters there names are:

Freedom 2 Feel
LonelynoLonger

i am a totally open person so if you want to critisize me i take it really well or if you have ideas to make my peotry better just let me know. thanks.

I love johnny cash. he was the greatest.

I hurt myself today to see if i still feel
i focused on the pain
the only thing thats real
the needle tears a hole
the old familiar stain
try to kill it all away
but i remember everything

what have i become, my sweetest friend
everyone i know goes away in the end
and you could have it all
my empire of dirt
i will let you down
i will make you hurt

i wear this crown of thorns
upon my liars chair
full of broken thoughts
i can not repair
beneath the stains of time
the feelings disappear
you are someone else
i am still right here

if i could start agian a million miles away
i would keep myself, i would find a way

Last seen on May 18 3:53 PM 2007. Member since October 22, 2005.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 143 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "live like you want to have fun in every situation".
I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a i work at a gym.
I am in the groups A day stained in blood The life of a c, Cutters Noncutters and ExCutters, The Commenting Community
I have 143 comments, 12 poems

My Poetry

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imklayurflesh&lostbutloved

luv is not just given freely
it must be found

3 lines, 7 comments, June 19, 2006. In Love
a choice away

we're all just a choice away
a choice away from anything

10 lines, 5 comments, June 19, 2006. In Other
Vibes

you make me feel special
no one else can do this for me

13 lines, 1 comment, June 17, 2006. In Love
for Rocky

dont trust in the people of this world
no one is worthy of your trust

11 lines, June 17, 2006. In Personal

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xXUnforg1venXx on September 9, 2006

Hey.. bout the comment you left me... how would you know if i was a chick magnet?? And besides.... i got a g/f now... 7 months in 9 days.
OnlyxThexDead on September 2, 2006

Hey, stop by and read my stuff again if you ever get a second. I've got some good new ones.
imlost on June 28, 2006

haha aweeeee thank you
edj on June 18, 2006

Walls is a great poem write some more in the same style!!!