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for me she was a pointless point
that for once I recognized as a life joint.
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them quick
and feel like me.
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A slice from the life and times of a holy place
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till you feel its caress
and try and find its match.
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Past harks out in chirp those sad lores
that have dried tears wrapped in autumn leaves
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it sinks in slow from the injectible
which sinks in sharp like a stab.
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A self conceited nerd that is fermenting in self crowned glory of artistic and linguistic perfection-where the foul smell of self conceit
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She is royally consorted and orgasmic
by sgking123
21 lines, 61 comments,
on Nov 29 11:10 PM
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as she has her body
near and quite stalled
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which she simply cannot hear
or make a corrective take.
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rest with the zest
of a woman at her best.
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like lost constellations
this is our life station!
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Hollow poetry Critiques-Brutal and Wrong
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puissance in resistance aided by gear little
toll was heavy like a hammer of God.
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porking with a sock ,jabs and box he slowly stymied the moment sad
she was gone and had left all cold,wet,faded and bad.
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That last write of yours I read is AWESOME!!!
is it about what you were doing yesterday...with the radio?
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real well wisher is one who cares about prices paid
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and that had all the dogs
following behind in file and rank
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on the loosing ,weak and unknown jockey and horse set
he was to and has lost the bet.
by sgking123
13 lines, 3 comments,
on Nov 19 1:15 PM
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there would be day after the bend
when you would receive back,in the end
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that sway out in
veritable herds.
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I adore the rebuilding energy that you possess...you regenerated mine and we are resurrected.
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as we build the palace with emotions and slight passion
caressing the hurts that still hurt painlessly deep down in core bastion
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dear boy! hold on to all you got
here is another SACK!
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in just another
Business Round!
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