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kinda of a suspense weird scary peom
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this is for my father for father's day tomorrow and i'd just like some feedback on this VERY ROUGH draft THANKS!

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I feel so big sometimes / But when I look up to / The sky above I realize / That I am just a speck / Compared to the vastness / Of the universe / / The stars seem so small / Yet are enormous / The comets tby emherr 27 lines, 2 comments, on May 4 4:46 PM 2007
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When I look into her eyes / I can see her pain and suffering / When I hear her cries / I can hear Him welcoming / / She doesn’t want to be heard / She doesn’t want to be seen / She hates the way she’s sufferedby emherr 54 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 10:51 PM 2007
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same ol' same ol' stuff that poetry's about
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just to let you know it isn't finished yet, i'm still working through the school years!
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this is still in the beginning stages! if you have any criticisms i'd love to hear them THANKS!
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As I look up
To the stars in the sky,
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