tranquil blue lagoon
bountiful beauty
waterfall cascades
lavender orchids
lover's paradise
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Written January 15th, 2005
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Thank you so much for your lovely and warm comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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You’ve written a lovely image in perfect 5 by 5 form. The language is concrete throughout, although bountiful, blue lagoon, and lover’s paradise border on the generic. I am honored that you would take the time to enter this contest. Thank you so very much.
Peace.
passionvine
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A place that makes me want to be there right now , and actually most of the time...alas , real life gets in the way
Best wishes for the contest
Reenie
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Thank you for the lovely comment. It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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This is so beautiful!
Yertweetyness
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Now I want to be there instead of here on this cold and blustery winter morning . Very pretty and best of luck in the contest
Reenie
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Sandy..this is beautiful with wonderful relaxing imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Keith for awonderful comment. I so appreciate your opinion. Take care, Sandy
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Peaceful and mathematically accurate. And I like the background too. Good Luck
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Hi Ashlee, Thank you so much for the nice comment. I do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for your lovely comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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This is very beautiful, and I love the image it projects in my mind. Great job!
Love, Ashlee -
I love short poems... that's probably what drew me to look into this contest! lol!
But as far as your poem goes... it's beautiful. It truly paints this vivid picture in my mind... and although I find many voices and pictures in my head, I'm pretty sure this one was from your poem!
Awesome write and I wish you the best of luck in this contest!!!
Kelso~
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